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Honesty chapter 13
Previously:
It was a day of small triumphs. Bette never gave up trying things to give Tina opportunities to respond. The nurses and doctors were in and out and exhaustion was setting in.
Chapter 13
Tina and Bette were both dozing as evening approached again and darkness started to fill Tina’s room, Bette had been in the same cloths for a second day. She opened her eyes to look at the woman she loved with all of her heart. The woman who made her feel complete, the woman she planned to spend the rest of her life with raising their little girl. Tina lay there covered in the stark white sheet, breathing evenly as if she is resting peacefully. Bette leaned over to her, to whisper to her, “I love you with all of my heart. You are so beautiful. I have waited so long to have you in my arms again, to lay next to you, to feel your body next to mine. These thoughts will keep me sane until you can lie again with me in our bed, in our home……”
“I … love … you … too … baby!” came the faintest of whispers. So slight, so soft, barely audible. If Bette’s face had not been so near Tina’s, the words may not have been heard. Tina’s eyes open to meet Bette’s gaze.
“Tina, Tina, say it again!”
With lips unable to speak anything else, these words filled Bette’s heart. “I … love … you … too … Bette.”
Bette placed her cheek next to Tina’s. Their tears ran together. “Tina, can you tell me how you feel. Do you hurt anywhere?”
“Like .. shit.” In a faint murmur. “My head hurts.”
“I’ve got to get the nurse.”
Bette stands with weak knees, but regains her composure to walk out the door of Tina’s room and to the nurses station. The nurse looks up from her paperwork.
“She spoke. In a whisper, she spoke.”
“That’s great. Let me get her chart and I will be right in.”
The nurse comes into the room, “Hello Miss Kennard, so, I hear that you have made some considerable progress today. Do you have anything that you would like to tell me.”
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(39 votes, average: 3.92 out of 5)
I hope that you have a better week. It is very difficult at times when you are the care giver. Hang in there. Just as Bette is hanging in there with what is happening with Tina. They will come out stronger in the long run.
I hope Tina doesn’t have any setbacks during her recovery. I wish you all the best with your dad. Alzheimers is a very emotional thing to have to go through for all involved. Post when you can.
Great update. Looking forward to more.
I hope that you and your partner can hold one another up in the hard times and find ways to enjoy the good moments. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
Hope thing gets better for youAlzheimers is a terrible and very hard on the care givers. Love this story and post when you can
I watched my grandfather go through the same thing. It’s never easy. Be strong and I hope you have a better week. Thanks for the post. Please don’t let Tina have any setbacks! PPS
Yeah tina is slowly getting better!! awesome update! :)PPS
I’ve just begun to read, and find it so good I’ll have to go back to the beginning ! About your Dad, you have all my sympathy, I’ve been there and I know how exhausting and frustrating it can be. It’s a good idea to arrange a break frequently if possible. Hang in there, and thanks for the chapter.
Great update! hope Tina will be home soon
great that tina is back now don’t u pull anymore surprises on us…
It is very hard when you have to take care of family member who is ill. You are lucky to have such a supportive partner. Hope this upcoming week is better for you and I am glad you have fanfic as a way to relax. take care and post whenever you get a chance.
Alzheimers is something i know a little about my uncel had it and I can remeber what it did to my mom and grandmother. This story I love. Thank you
I had tears in my eyes when I was reading this. So moving. Post when you can.
Great chapter – I admire your courage and dedication to your dad as his caretaker. My dad is also living with alshiemers and it is very challenging, My thoughts are with you and your partner as you move through this passage. thanks for writing.
Hope things improve a bit with your father and that you may have some peace in your life, jointly with ChaCha.- As for the story, it is running smoothly and better news are just a relief! PPS whenever you can, dear friend. Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
Sorry you and your family have had a rough week and hope that you can be strong for one another in future. Really enjoying the story. Thanks for taking the time to post, and post when you can.
With all that is going on in your life, the more we appreciate the wonderful update you have provided. I can only hope that Tina will pull through with out any further complications. Make sure you and your partner take time for each other. Having been in a similar situation twice in my life I understand the toll it can take on you emotionally and physically. Hang in their.
This is good and hope Tina will get better soon!