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Hold me..Kiss me…Love me..Forever
Beth: Your making a big mistake
Bette: It’s what I do best
Beth: You’ll regret itdon’t do it Bette she loves you and you love herBette I know youyou don’t ever fall in love and you probably never will again
Bette: What?
Beth: You heard meshe’s the love of your life and you will never find it again
Bette not wanting to hear Beth anymore cut her off mid-sentence, said goodbye abruptly and ended the phone call. Her mind was set.
Tina’s Apartment
Tina was drying her hair when she heard a knock on the door. It was Alice.
She opened the door and was just so happy to have a person with her she hugged her tightly.
Alice: missed me?
Tina: Ahh al, I’m so stressed
Alice: About what TinaYou two will get over whatever it is your fighting about
Tina: I hope so
Alice: Well I hope the fight’s not about something silly like who get’s to be on top
Tina rolled her eyes at her friend
Alice: What? With you two you never know..
Tina: I think I’m pregnant
Alice shook her head slightly and was confused
Alice: But how Bette can’t get you pregnant
Tina started at her friend in disbeliefwaiting for the actual realization to hit herin a few seconds it did and her mouth dropped open
Alice: Whoa. Eric. *****
Tina: Exactly.
Alice: ***** Tina, I’m guessing Bette didn’t handle that well
Tina: Well I told her I was late but she was distracted, and didn’t grasp what I was saying. Then when I called to speak to her earlier she was so obnoxious and meanso I’m guessing it finally dawned on her
Alice; What are you going to do?
Tina: Well I’m going to take the test now and your going to sit here and hold my hand
Alice: Lucky me
Tina: I told my mom that me and Eric are over
Alice: Are you trying to be the queen of drama this week as well?
Tina: The timing felt right but I;m beginning to think I should of waited
Alice: Yeah I can see your using your head
Tina: I don’t know what I’m doing.
Alice: I can see thatAre you ready to do this?
Tina: Nobut what choice do I have
Alice: Man I wish I had a camera to get your reactionit’s going to be priceless
Tina: Why did I want you herethis would have been so much simpler on my own
Alice: I’m sorry I’ll be serious and miserableWe can be twins
Tina swatted her friend and walked into the kitchen, She slowly opened the box and took it out.
Alice: You do that any slower and you wont have to even take the test because the baby will be about to be born
Tina: I’m nervous
Alice: Ok okbut look if your notwell then everything will be okay
Tina: What if I am?
Alice: I don’t want to lie to you
Tina: Ok here it goes
Tina walked to the bathroom slowly and Alice followed.She peed on the stick and set it on the counter
Alice held Tina’s hand and each of them looking at one another waiting for the results. Each of them having their hearts beat quickly
Tina scared for the results.Alice scared for her friends reaction
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(38 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Oh, please don’t leave us hanging like that unless you plan to post again tonight or in the morning. lol. Good job. Alice is always around when they need her, what a friend, silly and all.
good story, please post a new chapter soon!
It’s great to have good friends you can call on. I hope they make it pass their insecurities. I don’t mind children, but it being Eric’s would be too complicated, and only mean that Eric would have to be back in the picture. And, Tina’s mom would push Tina to reconsider marrying Eric, and more drama. Maybe sometime down the road when they are both more mature and plan a pregnancy I’d be happier about their situation. So, I’ll just wait to see where you’ll take us with this. Yup, I’m still here. Sometimes I am just a chapter or two behind, and have to catch up, and then I only comment once I get all caught up. But, I’m still enjoying each chapter. Feel free to post as soon, and as many as you can.
MEAN….im pissed with Bette cuz she is not mad cuz TIna maybe is carring Erics but cuz she dosent want any baby she is been selfish.. Tina needs help and some kind words and she is getting this from Alice i hope Bette think better and go after Tina and i hope Tina is NOT pregnant great chapter NYC post soon without tease baby..lol..thanks
“I love Tina but the whole baby thing is just to soon. We’ve barely dated.”
Amen, Bette, amen!
Run, run for the hills. Change your telephone number. This woman has more baggage than United Airlines!
…Now, back to the story…
Oh damn I’m scared, want to know what’s happen. Please post soon don’t leave us like this and its killing me here. Post soon please, thanks!
Alice: Man I wish I had a camera to get your reaction…it’s going to be priceless
Tina: Why did I want you here…this would have been so much simpler on my own
Alice: I’m sorry I’ll be serious and miserable…We can be twins…
Your Alice is a laugh riot! She’s easily worth her weight in EPT sticks!
Thanks!
Ok, just how in the hell does Bette have the nerve to be disappointed that Tina didn’t call back. She was the one that threw the phone down after saying, “Should have worn a condom!”
Beth: Your making a big mistake
Bette: It’s what I do best
snQQpy: ROFLMAO!!!
Alice: Are you trying to be the queen of drama this week as well?
Alice: Man I wish I had a camera to get your reaction…it’s going to be priceless
Alice: I’m sorry I’ll be serious and miserable…We can be twins…
Alice: You do that any slower and you wont have to even take the test because the baby will be about to be born
I love THIS Alice. I laughed so hard, I just know I was heard 5 states away!!
oh u, can be mean, u r right about B not being ready for momminess
I loved that dialogue between Tina and Alice! Too funny! So, is she or isnt’ she??? I can’t believe that you left us hangin’ right THERE!!! I mean, how long does an ept take? Please post the results in like 5 MINUTES. *LOL* Thanks!
YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE! This is really a great story, I wish Bette had the guts to go and talk to Tina right now. . .but I understand where she’s coming from. Please post again soon. . .
Been catching up on the updates. Your stories are simply the best! Please post soon.
You leave us hanging like that?!? You are SO mean my friend lol There I was thinking she said “I’m guna do this on my own” because she was pregnant but she actually meant taking the test.. tricky tricky. And now we must wait and the anticipation will be boiling inside.. hurry up and stop studying and post again!! lol ttyl
oh i hope tina is preggers because that will create soo much drama. its good she has her friend alice to be there for her. great chapter nyc ttyl tc hun
UGH..nyc that was too short and now you have a test. OK..I can wait…life takes priority. good luck on your test.
arhhhh what a cliffhangerrrr
update soonnn
Woman stop playing with me and tell us the results and remember i have hitmen on speed dial for your ass. It is nice to see you using Gio (my sidekick) and Beth in your story. But I see there is no love for the super hero but its cool. Yell at you later
I don’t care that you’ve left us hanging so to speak, but I’m gonna slap Bette. Beth was right, after all Tina has done, given up, changed, and left for Bette the first sign of a clitch in the program and she bails. Okay,okay if she is pregnant its a pretty big clitch, but still. You can’t run every time theirs a problem cos lord knows as soon as you usually solve one another one is just around the corner. So Ms. Porter, get your head out of your ass and go see Tina. Though I gotta admit thinking about Tina and Alice in the bathroom doing the test , just the vision of it hysterical.
NOOO!!! Not another cliffhanger! :D quick! post again soon! i wanna c where this goes!
i see were still having the dramas.
“i loved tina but the whole baby thing is just too soon. we’ve barely dated.” what was your first clue this might not be a good idea.
“the timing felt right, but im beginning to think i should of waited.” no, good time. heap all together. gets it ove quicker.
“im sorry i’ll be serious and miserable, we can be twins.” i think were all twins on this board. were all serious and miserable.
bette has no right to be upset at tina for not calling. geez i think someone hung up on somone else. as usual i must be stewpid for not figuring out that one. thanks.
Ok…if you summarize a chapter with a question ( Is she or isn’t she) I think the question should be ANSWERED in the chapter.yes?lol
cliffhangers suck sometimes….
cliffhangers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Heellllooooo! Leave us hanging why don’t you. Post soon please.
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Deep down in my heart I just knew you would do this. The reason I love grandchildren so much I can send them home. If Bette really love Tina it shouldn’t matter if she blind cripple or crazy, Been pregnant isn’t the end of the world. If Eric wasn’t going to be in the picture. if she is he will be. thanks