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Great Unexpectations Chapter 12
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Previously…
"Miss Porter, I’m not paid to follow your instructions. I’m paid to follow Mrs. Buckley’s instructions, and those instructions are to give this to you."
Kit engaged in a staring contest with the man as she folded her arms across her chest and raised her eyebrows, indicating she had no intention of accepting the envelope. The man, becoming exasperated and bored with the conversation begrudgingly opened the envelope and pulled out the sole content. He held his hand at arms length so that Kit could examine it.
Her eyes widened and her arms numbly fell limp as she examined the bank draft. "Get the fuck out of here!!"
Chapter 12.
Saturday late-morning. Tina was busy in the kitchen, preparing for the barbeque party. There was a cozy little division of labor as Tina knew she was responsible for most of the side dishes and the actual grilling of the meat was left to Bette’s skillful hands. It was too early to fire up the grill, so Bette simply enjoyed the view of Tina chopping the various lettuces and vegetables for the salad.
Tina, feeling the intense heat of Bette’s steely gaze, turned an eye to her and said. "Babe, are you gonna stare at me all day or are you gonna help?"
"Can’t I do both, T?", Bette asked flirtatiously.
"Apparently not", Tina teased, as she continued working away while Bette made no move to assist. "Why don’t you make sure everything’s all set outside. Have Angie help. She loves to help her Mama B."
Bette smiled, knowing that there was always a little clean-up involved after a dose of ‘Angie help’. She sidled up behind T and caressed her hips while kissing her neck. "Ok, T. If you really don’t want me in here, I can go outside." Tina’s nearly muted moan wafted happily to Bette’s ears, signaling that the desired result had indeed occurred. "That’s not fair, Bette", Tina’s moans continued as she dropped the knife on the cutting board. "You know we have too much to do before everybody shows up."
"Mmhmm. I know", Bette whispered.
"Angie!!", Tina yelled, desperate for a distraction. "Mama B needs your help sweetie."
Bette laughed before turning the kiss into a gentle bite. "Ok, T. You win." Then to Angie, who was happily toddling into the kitchen, "Hey Boo. Can you help me?", Bette opened a nearby drawer and removed a handful of linen napkins. Handing half of them to Angie, Bette asked, "Can you carry these for me honey? These are just too heavy for your Mama B."
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Hmmmmmmm, okay when are you gonna let us in on it. Love the teasing and flirting between Bette and Tina, and you gotta love both of them looking upon the vision of the other with Angelica.
Money doesn’t erase everything, and the way Faye is throwing it about shows she’s got a lot of guilt to try and erase. But Bette’s right, it’s time for that nonsense to come to an end. I loved the bits with Angelica, she’s so cute. Actually her moms were quite cute, too! Nice chapter, red. Thanks for the update. (And as for how often you want to post… do whatever you’re comfy with, but I like a nice long read myself. Cheers!)
I glad Bette going to get to the bottom of this Buckley thing. I don’t care if Buckley is looking for redemption or not, she needs to stay the heck away from them. Take her guilt, take her money, and go to confession or something, but stay away from B&T and their family. I still think the woman’s a snake waiting to attack. Don’t have Tina come back and finish her off.
I vote for short chapters every day or two.
I think Faye is after one Bette Porter. Bette might be getting into a big fight and trying to keep Tina out of jail for killing Faye. Love that Angie so like both mothers. thanks
Wow. I loved this chapter. Especially the first half. Very, very compelling. My chest tightened reading Bette’s thoughts while Tina was sleeping with Angie. So beautiful. I can’t wait for more of that. PPS.
Alright AlphaBette is on the case. Maybe now we can get to the bottom of what Ms. Buckley is up to. PPS.
Oh yeah lite and sweet is just right and you totally had me crackin’ up with this statement…”She likes things done her way and she’s very stubborn about it…I wonder who she gets that from, Tina said looking straight ahead with accusing eyes.” You made me laugh tears with that one! The way you wrote the scene, leading up to it and your timing is what makes it so funny! I think Angie gets her stubbornness from both Bette and Tina! LOL! I love your writing. I check in several times every day looking for your story, so I love it when you post every couple of days or so. Waiting 6 days can be torture but your writing is always worth the wait, so do what you must…please just don’t stop! Thank you Red! More please!
Wonderful writing. I like this length read or longer. The more frequent the posting sometimes it’s easier to follow the story.
They´re so at easy:) PPS
That was a beautiful description of Bette and Angie and then Tina and Angie. I am so in love with that family and well the entire gang as a family. You make it fun to believe in love and family again. I noticed that you like the Tigers. They are playing about the same way the Cubs are playing now. Lordy be we need some help.
wow, I have just found this story and read all the chapters. I love your writing, what a great story. please post soon 8-)
Thanks for the beautiful update. Your updates are a pleasure to read.
Loving this story and your writing as always. I vote for shorter chapters, posted more frequently–its too hard to wait :). Thanks for the update.
Most powerful writer, good to get an update. Love that you always write with great attention to detail. The little scene, what kit sees while watching Bette and Tina by the pool while Bette is calming Tina plays in my mind as much as scenes with powerful dialogue. Reading this chapter before work this am is really nice way to start the day, especially with Bette giving herself permission to believe and all the wonderul happy feelings she is experiencing. Anyway you want to post is fine, really appreciate all the time you put in and that you share with us. Thanks
lovely tale…bette so understands tina…more…
The Faye Buckley storyline adds suspense, but your portrayal of the Porter-Kennard family is especially captivating. I’m with jp22 on the chapter-length issue.
Wow, Tina has been a firecracker lately!
BTW, no darkhorse please!
That was great!