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Gonna get to livin’ – Chapter 20
Shane – “Yeah I know. But Dana so does not feel the same way. She only has eyes for you. She has been mooning over at you all the while you have been mingling.”
Alice blushed. – “Really?”
Shane – “Yes, really. She is so into you, it is so obvious.”
Alice – “And how did you know about Julies` infatuation with Dana?”
Shane – “Hey you don’t call me Yoda for nothing remember. Everything is in the eyes! You can tell when Dana looks at you that she has fallen deep!”
Alice – “Shane … its only early days. We only met 3 days ago!”
Shane – “Alice, we all look at you two and know you were made for each other. I am jealous at what you two have, I hope one day to have at least half the electricity with someone that you guys have!”
Alice – “Really?”
Shane – “Yeah, so stop analysing everything and enjoy it.”
Alice – “I will!”
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Julie was chatting to Sarah, the friend of Bette, who just happened to be a single, gay, up and coming actress. They seemed to be hitting it off well, with the girl keep lightly touching Julies` arm during conversations. All the girls kept looking and remarking on their progress. Alice had made her way over to Dana who was sat on the sofa and plopped down next to her. Dana turned to look at her and smiled, asking her how she was. Alice said fine and asked Dana why she was sat there on her own. She looked over to Julie and commented that they seemed well matched. Alice just mumbled that she guessed they were. Dana looked back at Alice and asked her what was up.
Alice looked into Danas` eyes – “How do you feel about me Dana?”
Dana took Alices` hand – “Do you really need to ask? You are the most beautiful, smart, sexy, hot … oh there are so many wonderful aspects to you that I really like. Why, are you doubting what we might have? You are happy aren’t you?”
Alice – “Oh God yeah, you are the most wonderful person I have ever met and I am so happy. I guess I’m scared of how deep my feelings are, especially so soon. All previous relationships are so insignificant compared to this, I’m worried I might lose you.”
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(23 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
Love it! Dana’s “bed head” comment was pretty funny. Again: These girls show way more restraint than I could. ;-D I am glad Julie found there are other fish in the sea and also that Alice’s jealousy was short-lived. Dana’s concern about PDAs was a nice touch. Naked!Alice in the pool? Very nice. Dana again handled the situation perfectly. Alice’s confession to falling in love was wonderful. I know she will be hurting in the morning, but, hopefully she remembers. Thanks, chillipepper!!
chillipepper, sorry that I miss your last few posts. What a wonderful chapter with some great humor, e.g “do you like what you see”, lol. The pool scene was a lot of fun. I second all MG’s comment and love the development of this story. Thank you very much. You a doing a great job,
hmm, I always get so turn on when Dana lifted Alice up and carried her to the bedroom. That is so HOT! And I am glad that Dana and Alice confessed their feelings, although Al had fallen asleep and probably forgot about that! Can’t wait to see what happened next! Thanks!PPS…….