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Fun on vacation Final Chapter
Alice then smiled and grabbed Dana’s hand walked her towards the house which wasn’t far away. Alice walked in with Dana following and constantly asking Alice what they were doing but she wouldn’t tell. She grabbed the blanket off there bed and walked down to the beach with Dana which gave her a very good idea what Alice was up to.
They laid the blanket not to far from the ocean and started to kiss sensually. They then proceeded to make love, they didn’t class it as sex as they felt connected, like one person and it made them feel closer to each other than ever before.
“That was amazing Dane…” Alice looked to the brunettes eyes lovingly
As Dana looked back she couldn’t keep in the love she felt for the writer, “I love you Alice.” She felt her heart skip a beat after she said it feeling like she had a huge weight lifted off her shoulders
Alice felt exactly the same as she heard Dana say it, she loved the brunette but she hadn’t expected Dana to say it first or to say it so soon. Just as Alice was about to reply Dana spoke again…
“Don’t worry Al, you don’t have to say it back, I just wanted you to know how much you mean to me and if you’re not ready to say it I understand.” Dana meant what she had said with all her heart, true she wanted to hear those three magic words which would have her heart jumping for joy but she didn’t want to hear it just because she had said it first.
Alice could see Dana was deep in thought and knew what must be going on in her head.
“I love you too Dane. And im not just saying it I really do love you.”
She then placed a kiss on the athletes lips as they lay on the beach in each others arms where not long later they fell asleep.
It was around 3am when everyone was getting back from the club. They staggered through the front door and straight to the kitchen to get more drinks. They all gathered in the living room and were so loud they could have woke a corpse.
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(36 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
What a show.. Haha!
Brilliant – keep them coming.
Al is so crazy.It’s a good story and I wouldn’t mindreading more.
well that was great first helena and lara then alice and dana who had their own plan going on great can’t wait for the next post so please petty petty please post soon and great update I love this story
“God they are so cute together, I don’t think I’ve seen any two people more perfect for each other.” Helena smiled. “I know, and at least now we know that they will both be loved the way they deserve to be.” Shane said. “That’s so true,…” I can’t agree more to these observations. They are the best couple. And a clever Alice, Perfect. Good chapter, post soon.
LOOL! I love you too! Yes I think i love your story it´s great! :DThanks for put more lines to Carmen!Great chapter and please post more soon!
LOOL! I love you too! Yes I think i love your story it´s great! :DThanks for put more lines to Carmen!Great chapter and please post more soon!
Haha, loved the update! Please conintue this story, Dana and Alice are SO cute in it. :D
You know I love your writing/stories and I love Danish. However, if you wanted to end this story, this would be the perfect place to do so. If not, I’m certainly not going to stop looking forward to new chapters or stop reading! I trust your judgement on the matter. ;-D Thanks for another great story update!
that was a really cute story. i like it alot. very sweet.