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From Afar
Chasemenow – Oh Chase hopefully the drama has just begun but
we will see. You they will get to the
question of the delivery but not just now I’m having too much fun playing with
it. Thanks
Girl drummer – Thanks so much Bette just need to get her
girl out of there and away from
Thank Wahbin she was kind enough to take on the job Thanks and yes Kit and Bette resolve that
today. You liked the voodoo doll huh??
Wade SA – Thanks so much – this
Egoiste – The only problem is that point of view. It wasn’t the one I had in mind but you know
that would work . I need to think about that one. HUMMMMM
Thanks
M99 – I felt like a sleeze writing her hoping that none of
it rubbed off. The best victory over
live their lives in total love with each other.
Something
will never know.
Neq8740 – OK we can’t let our ***** super hot Bette lowering
herself to
ChakaSB – Oh you are so right or better yet have someone
else do the grabbing so you won’t get contaminated. Your right that would have been so playing
into her hands.
Bette&TinaForever – I’m having Bette be strong but not
kick
*****. That was too easy and stooping to
Hele’s level. Thanks Thanks I think Tina was too involved with her
thoughts a missed opportunity huh?? But T will get it soon. It’s really the third clue that she should
have gotten.
Momo – I think you are so right taking those pictures will
definitely get
in trouble. Thanks so much for you continued support. The will get her evilness together as a team
I think that is the only way to combat
SHAZ – You know I wasn’t thinking that but now I am
wondering if maybe.. it’s a good idea.
Traci921 – I wanted to make this Bette strong and it’s so
much harder to do what Bette is doing.
Thanks
Mstx – Don’t this
have too much nerve for her own good. I
felt slimy just writing her. Thanks
And
will thanks Rest assured H will fry in
her own juices.
Luv4nrt – No it was mostly business with a side trip to see
DownLow in the middle so some fun and work.
Oh so you think we can afford
that hug after we rearrange her face HUH???
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Great to have you back mate!
Hamster is called “Smudge” – she would look so cute peeping out of an eye socket! LOL
What can I say – great chapter, loved the bonding with Bette & Kit – she’s a super sister that one!!
And I gotta give Dana the line of the chapter – “the stuff of Legends”. Ah…. and what a super legend she is!
Run Alice, run Alice, quick quick quick!!
Thanks a lot for that J. I’ve managed to catch up sufficiently but if I need anything else I’ll email you. Thanks again!
Alice is so DEAD!!!!!!!! Hurray!!!!! She is driving me crazy!!!!!!!
damm I swear bette just told alice to stay out of her life!! I think alice needs to plan a out of the country vacation real quick. Cause she is starting to sound like a “stalker”
hope your trip was fun J
Jwet….welcome back and thank you for another outstanding chapter! Also, thanks for the offer to email me; but I am all caught up now!
Now, my comments………has anyone noticed that out of all the friends, the only one that has ever minded her own business has always been Shane. Alice has made it her personal mission to always be in the middle of anything going on it Bette and Tina’s life; and truth be told, I am really getting tired of it. Dana is only in it BECAUSE of Alice; other than that, Dana would be just like a Shane.
I am elated that Kit decided to talk with Bette about the money and I am so glad that she didnt go off on Bette about using her part of it. In the end, Bette did keep all the money in the family, so in essence, as long as MVY makes a profit, they all do well.
We all agree that Helena has got it coming to her. I do feel that if Bette and Tina want to pull off something grand, they are going to need the help of the Grande Dame herself; Big P….yep…Peggy! Peggy and Helena dont share the same arrogances; Peggy does it with style, something Helena cant ever achieve!
Now Alice, she has got to be stopped by any means necessary! She has no family/friend loyalty. Alice is so concerned with getting herself the recognition of an “ace reporter” that she never stops to see the forest for the trees. It is neither her place or business to go to Tina about anything. I could understand if she was doing this because she felt she needed to look out for her friend, but Tina is NOT being hurt or being taken advantage of by Bette. Bette and Tina are madly in love with each other; why cant Alice just accept that? Alice is starting to remind me of a Jr Helena!
Hell, I dont know which of the evils are worse; Alice or Helena?
Bette should know by now that Alice can’t keep a secret and nothing stays a secret long around Alice. :)
I love the hopeless romantic Bette – is it any wonder that Tina fell for her all over again?
Thanks for the new chapter.
ohh hope Alice have a good funeral insurance..lol..glad you back Jwet cant wait for BettexAlice chapter :o)
DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! OMG AWESOME!!!.. OK I was half asleep reading but woke up fast…. :)
Great chapter Jwet… OK so I had two cups of Irish Cawfee at the hospital… LOL.
oo shit here we go J
I HOPE YOU HAD A WONDERFUL VACATION…GREAT CHAPTER…..AS ALWAYS…PLEASE POST SOON…THANKS…
Eek, I hope Bette doesn’t come down too hard on Alice. =x
Hello Jwet: I am with all the other’s we need to do something with Alice. But i do enjoy her even though she tends to butt in. I have told you so often that i enjoy this story so much. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I want to say Thank you for the invitation to the “Pig Roast”. Excellent as always.
Thanks for responding Jwet.I think that the fans of this story would like to see B and T get married again.Glad you are back.
The next chapter may need to be called “Alice Doesn’t Live Here Anymore.”
Jwet… you keep me in the loss of words… thank you… muito obrigado
lol That was great! Oh Alice poor, poor Alice! lol
Great chapter, glad your back.
great chapter…and Alice had better watch out. What did you mean END of the story. You are never going to end it..right? ; )
Damn Alice, you need to run Bette going to kill you!
Great chapter Jwet. Bette is so going to blow up at Alice. good thing tina knows all about the foundation. post soon.
As another “hopeless romantic” I love this story…please Bette don’t kill Alice!
Run Alice run – he he he
Leave it to Alice to start shit up again..I really hopr Bette goes to Tina first and tells her about her conversation with Kit before she takes Alice’s head off..Post soon..I think it is time for that meeting with the family…Truth time Bette…Post soon EXCELLENT job as always…..
Hey J, nice to have you back :) “hopeless romantic” love this title. so is your Bette.
Run Alice, run for your life!!!
Uuuuuuh Jwet, you are SOooooooooooooooo wrong, for giving me (and yes I am taking this personally–ha,ha) four (ok, three) pages and not revealing it to Bette that Alice told Kit until the last sentence. That is worse than a cliffhanger. Oh yeah, where are my manners–IT GREAT TO HAVE YOU BACK GIRL. I don’t understand why Kabby thinks that it is time to have a family meeting and tell everyone. Bette has the right to keep her actions secret if she pleases. That what selfless acts are about. Heck if it has to be told then I am sure that Alice will tell it. I hope that Bette does not let her off the hook or go easy on her. Alice has to know when to reel herself in especially when it comes to VERY CLOSE friends and FAMILY. Heck, I think that Kit should be a little pissed to when she finds out that she went digging around into Melvin’s probate records. At lease Dana sees the selfless act, but she wants Alice to go ahead and publish the story. THESE WOMEN DO NOT UNDERSTAND THE CONCEPT OF PERSONAL PRIVACY. Hot damget everyone need thier own personal space and has the right to keep something private if they so choose. Great chapter, Ilove the additional bonding going on between Kit and Bette. Kit is sooooooo right it says ALOT about Bette that she didn’t keep any of the money for herself, and I am sure that Melvin would be proud of her for what she did. Tina is already overwhelmed if she finds out the nuts and bolts as Kit has she will be in absolute awh. Can we please get Anna’s birth revealed (She asked very,very quitely). Please post again soon.
Glad that you’re back.
As for Bette, I don’t think she’s going to blow up. She may get annoyed with Alice for poking around without asking her but right now, Helena will be faced with the full force of her fury.
JWET – yes your back. wahbin did great and thanks to her we all didnt wither cuz of no posts. just not the same as having you around. im such a hopeless romantic also. true love, no greater gift. hey why does everyone else get invited to the pig roast, and not me. :(. this is confusing. bette should be able to have personal privacy. but the foundation is not personal. still think al should talk to bette and let her know she knows and maybe bette can explain why she doesnt want the world to know. but it would still be als decision to go with it. al has helped with the demise of hellno even tho the girls dont know it quite yet. thats a saving grace. glad that tee missed the reference cuz ive heard a rumor about tee knowing about bette being in the delivery room. thats a bone to pick with you. ;) how cute is dana. thanks and let me know where this roast is ;D. post soon thanks.
Welcome back Jwet, a marvellous continuation of your story as usual. I actually had it in my head that Kit already knew about the foundation, but I guess she does now. I am curious to see Bette’s response to Alice’s snooping. Is it her innate curiosity or the fact that she’s a reporter or the fact she wants to be all up in everyone else’s business? I’m not sure even Alice knows what her own motives are. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks!
Welcome back! hope u had a good time and well rested;) as usual love your story and especially the way Dana sums up Bette’s sacrifice and great love for Tina. oh oh – will alice get her head chewed off by Bette – erm, I dont think so (althou likely Bette have a few things to say to alice abt being an inquisitive nosey parker) but hey, if alice dont dig into the whole story about the foundation, then she is not true to herself (that being an investigative reporter) – the good thing is that Tina knows everything – so i guess the tables will turn on alice when it is revealed that all her hard work to pin Bette to the foundation have been to nought :D – love your style of writing as always – cheers
Thanks to wahbin for posting in your absence – and happy to have you back!!
Yes, feel free to use the scar analogy anytime! Now, on with the show:
Alice is like some sort of terrier, she gets a hold of something and she is not about to let go! I want to know if Alice has ever been this dogged about any other foundation and it’s funding? Why is it soooo important for her to expose Bette? If she truly knows and understand her, then she should know that she is not going to find her little invesitgative romp amusing at all.
Who knew that Dana could be so articulate? She is not just a dumb jock. She knows how big business and the political arenas work. Putting it all out on the table for Alice shows that she knows a bit more than Alice in that regard. She was able to stand toe to toe with her and make an impassioned plea – unfortunately, it doesn’t look as if Alice wants to pay attention.
Dana is about romance and the goodness of humanity and Alice seems to follow the addage of “If all you have is a hammer, then everything looks like a nail”. Sometimes being an investigative reporter means that you can actually find the GOOD in a story, rather than the negative.
Alice doesn’t want to take Dana’s advice and talk to Bette because she likes being able to hold the trump card of power and exposure.
Great to see Kit and Bette bonding. Even nicer that Bette let Kit know how much she appreciated her support over the last year. Blood is thicker than water, for sure. I do think that Kit was happy that Bette handled everything, even if she was a little exasperated that Bette didn’t keep any money for herself. But then again, that was the point…it was a selfless act.
I sure hope that Alice has a Titanium Butt Protector, because she’s going to need it. Bette will be angry that Alice went snooping around knowing that she could have potentially hurt not only the foundations future, but her relationship with Tina. Kit should be angry with Alice because she got used and placed in an awkward position with Bette once she told her it was Alice that figured it out. I just keep having the phrase “Warning Will Robinson…Warning!!”.
Although Helena is annoying to no end, I see her as acting more out of self-hatred and insecurities. Alice I see acting more out of a underlying maliciousness and/or jealousy. But I suppose she too, could be acting out of low self-esteem – she does seem to have a need to be right all of the time.
However, on my despise-o-meter, Helena is currently at a 6 out of 10…but Alice is off of the chart. But I do have the perogative to change my mind at any given time. And as you said, Hurricane Helena is just taking a break.
Can’t wait to see what happens next!!
I miss you! (Would I get into trouble for saying that?)
I throughly enjoyed this chapter, and I am going out on a limb and defend Alice. Alice was the one Tina turned to after the affair so she saw the raw pain in Tina and she wants to protect Tina. I hope she just wants to make sure Bette is not manipulating Tina, which we all know. I hope Kit or Tina helps Bette to appreciate Alice actions. (So how thin is the limb I’m on?).
Please continue posting….as you can see, we take what we can get!
Also, what is Pig Roasting day?
Thanks again for such a wonderful story!
JWet,
Great to see that you are back.
Hope that all went well with your visit.
Some good ole country cookin’ always puts a smile on the face, a taste on the lips and satisfied grunt for the belly.
As for lovin the cookin’. It was just a guess given the brilliance of your story.
OK so status report:
Go, girl, go – directed at Dana. Fabulous to see her strident and telling Alice what for!
As for Alice, phenomenally captured; all the digging and detective work coupled with that wonderful innate sense of humor.
Kit is a clever cookie and really surprised Bette. All the financial stuff just flew over the top of my head.
As for Bette, brilliant to see her acknowledge and thank Kit so beautifully for all her support.
The great thing about families is that they are right beside you come rain or shine. Sometimes you don’t see their support but it is there when you need it.
End of the week questions:
What type of personal injury insurance and protection does Alice have? Fully comprehensive I hope! Does she have any athletic equipment from her & Dana’s role-playing games that might help? Hockey mask, Mouth guard, etc….
Should Kit’s line “You really are a hopeless romantic.” read “You really are a hopeful romantic.”?
Anywho got as home to go to for the weekend so will return to loads of new chapters on Monday.
Please make it so.
Your Loyal Fan.
K
Excellent chapter. Alice better watch out.
If some give 1000 dollars to a fountation The dont go around with a sign that will say I gave to this. That is what Bette wanted, To be very Privacy in this.She wanted this to last a very long time to help a lots of people. Alice is in for a good ass chewing, from Bette and Kit. Now Ms Helena is in for a big let down That Bette one up her and for no reason except love. Welcome back. Hope Alice survives this. Get back to the pictures of Tina and the birth of Anne. THANKS
Alice, Alice, Alice…tsk tsk tsk…soon you will feel the wrath of Bette Porter!! Hehe, well, that’s what I think…awesome JWET!!