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From Afar
As Tina works this through she realizes that whatever it is
Bette did these things for her not against her and well isnt that the truest
expression of love. As this thought hits
her tears spring in her eyes as she looks into Bettes eyes Bette I have one question for you Tina
starts softly indicative of the gravity of the question. Why did you do these thingsI mean really
why?
At this question Bette turns again to look at Tina in the
dark. With only the light from the
street shining on her face Bette tries to show Tina all the genuine love and
sincerity in her heart. I love you
Tina, both of you and I have and always will protect you with all that I
have. Whether we are together or not I
cant leave you and your well-being to fate.
I will always make it my responsibility to assure that you two are taken
care of. Bette says with a passion that relays just how important this has
been to her.
That is why I also brought Jackie to town. I knew of the quality of person she is.
Bette couldnt get anymore out as Tina is interrupting her.
Jackie You brought Jackie to town? Tina says
incredulously. Now the wheels were
turning as Tina looks at Bette and points her finger at her.
It was you. YOUYOU
are the one that Jackie was talking about.
.
Chapter 74 – All I AM
Tina is left staring at Bette, being held spellbound with
the wheels of her mind turning, as she realizes the scope to which Bettes
activities had been. The shock of this
realization stunned Tina as she is looking to Bette to confirm her
suspicion. As she looks, Tina is trying
to see into Bettes eyes, her soul to see the truth. Was Bette behind the MYV Foundation and is
that the big thing that she is trying to get out?
Tina is having difficulties getting her hands around the
concept of how this could all be possible.
The scope of what Bette is implying is just too vast. Hadnt Jackie described someone with
self-less devotion, love married to passion and determination? Well Tina had to admit to herself that
description could accurately be applied to the new Bette she had come to know
over the last few months. As the initial
shock begins to wear off, Tina reaches out and gently lifts Bettes chin so she
is looking directly into her eyes. The
only way that Tina would know the truth was to see it for herself. There, yes right there, there it is the truth
in Bettes eyes. Its true! It was Bette.
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(50 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
You have, with a few carefully chosen pieces of symbolism, laid their relationship bare. Breathtaking.
The felicity of your words manages to transport your readers into a world of sensuality and love without being explicit. The love and reconnection was deeply felt, it was as if it had a pulse and heartbeat of its own.
I am curious to see how Alice is going to fit into the scheme of things now that Bette has confessed to Tina.
I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thank your for posting.
Just wow. chapter 74 and they are finally finally together – was it tough getting here? Yeah, but anything worth anything has to be fought for. Alice is so going to be pissed off;-)
you’re such a …. romantic, Drama-Queen! *smiles* what can I say withou sound toooooo much a fan?? thnak you for these amazing chapters… and this lovely story. cya Jwet
WOW that was so worth waiting for and so beautiful nothing more to say im just in awe of your writting and yes i too would love to read Tinas reaction to finding out Bette was at the birth it has to be the iceing on the cake??
Thank you JWET for painting such a beautiful picture in my mind. I am forever grateful! (I need another box of Kleenex!)
did I like it? this chapter is so warm, so full of tenderness, just… beautiful. that was a long day for me, I’m tired but I will sleep well. thanks to you JWET!
DAMM J I don’t know what to say that hasn’t already been said. WOW Bette stripping in front of tina, nice effect. It kinda reminded me of jenny though, had to push that thought out of my mind and remember it was bette’s hot ass. Nice talking to you today you never seem to amaze me, this story is a must read to get my day going. AND HAHA I love knowing what’s going to happen next.
Jwet Fantastic story. The images you created through words are simply amazing in my mind. You Rock!
Jwet, This story is beyond spectacular, thanks so much for sharing your talents.
awesome and thanks for the update. i have been MIA for a while with work but am certainly happy to get caught up on your story. thanks again!
Jwet so happy you had a good vacation. Thank you for finally bringing Bette to Tina or Tina to Bette. Finally! Yes! Loving it!!
Damn Jwet, as if you need to yet another tell you, you’re great. But you are, well at least your story telling abilities are. I love, love, looooove this story — this chapter in particular. Can’t wait for your next post. I know you must always respect the original because without it there would be no other; but I would so much like to see your stories on Shotyme. Oh yeah did I tell you I loved you, oh I mean your stories.
finally……….but when will Bette tell Tina she was at the Birth? that’s the only secret she’s still keeping
Oh my God Jwet !!! That was absolutely Beautiful :D
ahhh… I am one happy gal right now . I had been so eagerly awaiting this chapter . Its just so perfect . Thank you so much . Yeah I too want Bette to tell Tina that she was present for the birth of their daughter . Wow that would be so wonderful . I can’t wait to read it . keep up the good work and plssssssss post soon !! :D
Gazillion stars to you all the wayyyy !!! :D
Thanx :)
OK girls, we need to calm down – Jwet has already said she’ll cover the birth stuff – lets trust her – she always comes up trumps.
Jwet, sweetie – I just love that De-Ja-Vue feeling, please don’t stop letting me experience that!!! LOL
Now, New York – what can I say – how fab is it going to be for me to walk around with such a professional author and A Dog! Hope your ready to meet the Brit! So looking forward to it.
Down Low – You Dog, love ya xx
WOW..BRAVO..thank you for make my day ..lol..i have to agree with angelak finally…but about the birth thing that was not a real lie..its more like an omission..lol..Jwet you amazing me every chapter..thanks :-)
Great chapter Jwet. With your skills you don’t need to be so descriptive in the lovemaking department, your writing leaves a perfect picture of whats going on between the two, in my mind. You nailed it babe. thnx. Now on with the show and get then two living under the same roof where they belong.
Oh, I forgot to say….. Yet another fantastic chapter mate, never disappoints.
woo hoo! awesome…finally!!! that was so worth the wait! I love this bette, kinda like a sensitive alpha! Thanks!!
Oh my friend I can read this ten times(which I have) and it would still be wonderful each time. It was…what we have been waiting for and it did not dissapoint and neither did you. Keep up the good work!
WOW!!!! Well worth the wait….That was beautiful..But I can’t wait for Tina to relise ALL that Bette has done for her…Please post soon..This was a great start to my day..Thank you!
What a way to start the day!!! Thank you for such a wonderful chapter.
Perfect 10.
Wow! I am truly elated, mesmerized and touched by this chapter. Your descriptive and guiding style lead us to all have our own interpretation of what the two characters have just shared. simply…elegant…
Awww…much better than HMS. Love.
And to echo what angelak said…what about that one last secret?
Its about time. No worries, you did a fantastic job with this, with this whole story actually. I hope this isnt the end. Plz post soon.
Jwet I can’t tell you how much this series has meant to me. I remember at the begining how everyone was rushing you to reconnect TnB but I was grateful you did not. You carried us on a journey of human faith and emotion that has been a pleasure for me. To see two people who are deeply in love come undone is heart wrenching. Your examination of their abysmal moments was required for a full appreciation of this particular chapter. Bette has exposed all…something she had never done…not even to Tina. I always told my good friends that truly being in-love is a scary thing. I believe so b/c you have to truly reveal yourself, flaws and all, to the other person. The possible rejection is what makes it scary…at least for me. But if there’s unconditional acceptance, by God it’s worth it! So Jwet, thank you for making us realise that in essence, there’s no reward without risk.
I could never tire of this story. What a wonderful story. Thanks
thanks jwet. that was awesome. it made my heart so happy. i did a little happy dance. i love this story. you take us right along with you on this ride. and i’m so happy to go with you. this was so worth the wait. keep it coming.
Wonderful As Always Whoa! I love it Jwet Thank you really Beautiful Writing Thank God Tina listen to Bette and finally Yes WHOA! Jwet you’re are AMAZING WRITER Well I can’t wait for the next Chapter Jwet Please Post soon.
Very good chapter! I am happy to see that Bette has finally become completely honest with Tina. Keep up the great writing.
yahoooooo…..finally jwet! justice is served! thank you
Thank you, it was well worth the wait. I can’t wait fot Irene to wake up and find Bette’s cloths laying in the floor in the living room LOL. I too am waiting for Bette to tell Tina that she was there at their daughters birth — but trust you totally. I also can,t wait for them to display their love openly in front of Helena, because we wll know that Helena is not the kind of person that you can just tell her something —- you have to show her. PLEASE post again SOON. We are waiting with baited breathe.
again, phew, at last. not that im rushing you as i said before could read about this version of these two forever. this story just leaves me feeling all warm inside, hope when im all growed up, i have that kind of loving relationship.
Wow! That was great and I totally didnt even see going that way! Perfect.
WOW FABULOUS CHAPTER..AS ALWAYS..I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR STORY..PLEASE POST SOON….THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING…
K
Wonderful chapter. Glad Tina appreciates what Bette did. Love this.
OMG!! Headed off to the PHILIPPINES so I didn’t have a chance to finish it, BUT WOO HOO!!! B&T always!! I’ll rush to the nearest computer I can find there…thanks JWET!!
Gand the greatest is all I have to say.To be loved like that. I am trusting you that this baby thing will not hurt them PLEASE PLEASE. POST LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Jwet,
You’ve done it again!!! You’ve “Wow’d” us all with your amazing ability to breathe so much life into a fictional relationship with your beautifuly written words and heartfelt emotions. This was so worth the wait! I hope you continue writing for a long while…Thanks!
Jwet THANK YOU!!! Alice is going to flip when she doesn’t get the reaction from Tina as she sould hope.
Could we have a little more of Tina and Bette before hell brakes loose the next day, some “loving early in the morning” ::hiding under the keyboard:: :-)
I picked a good day to catch up to the end of this story! Awesome as always Jwet…I cut and pasted about 12 chapters into a word file and took my laptop to the lake this weekend so I could reach the end of the story, I was so looking forward to seeing how it was progressing along. You didn’t disappoint! Now I can comment on current chapters instead of consistently being behind the curve. Hope to see many many more words from you. Thanks for sharing.
I sighed and cooed my way through this. The build up over time made this such an amazing reunion. Good for Tina, she answered like a women in love – “her words were like a caress to Bette’s heart”. I hope when they wake-up that Bette does tell her she was at Anna’s birth. This is your second amazing series – brilliant! and bravo.
Great stories are always about the journey, not so much the ending. I’ve enjoyed reading this series all the way through. The descriptive writing of the characters emotions and thoughts has been phenomenal. Thank you for sharing their adventure with me.
I think it’s all been said – this has been an amazing story from beginning to (hopefully not!) end. I’ve just come back from Vancouver and this was the only story I managed to keep up with whilst over there- didn’t want to miss a single posting. Thanks for a wonderful journey.
This was great i love Tina taking control it’s very hot,please post soon.
Hey Jwet, that chapter was so sweet and beautiful.
Thank you.
Every time I log on to this site, I hope that I will find another chapter. I love this story, please continue.
Jwet, that was beautiful! Never thought that a NC-17 chapter could make me cry. This one just did. Again, it’s a rare talent that you possess. Can’t wait to read more!
Hey, would it be too much to ask for MORE HMS once Tina discovered that Bette was actually with her in the delivery room when Anna’s born? =P
the maturity of your writing is breath taking.., i’m spellbound by your story telling…your in depth knowledge of various issues is incredible, i love everything you have written and have learned some things as well… 5 stars is not enough, my hats off to you, lovely lady.
Jwet,
Another breathtaking and awe-inspiring addition to this tremendous tale.
Tina reaction to Bette’s confession was unexpected but true to her inner being; her acceptance and acknowledgement showed how love and affection can conquer all. This involuntary and intuitive response has completely floored Bette. Your skillful words have charmed your readers in to knowing that this is exactly true honest emotive writing at its best.
I appreciate all the blood, sweat, tears and toils that you go through to spread this wonder and joyfulness. Recharge your batteries whenever needs be because the result is always well worth the wait.
Bette and Tina’s reconnection is steady and sure. These women know each other’s souls and therefore without all the bump and grind of other sexual encounters, you have shaped as sumptuous, sexy and sensuous scene. It is truly beautiful to behold.
Thank you.
Today’s questions are:
Were did the big fish that slapped the sense into Tina disappear to? Is it is setting up residency in the pool? Were the blinds close to the bedroom or did the neighbors get an eyeful? Did Tina get the bedroom sound proofed? Did Tina slip Anna and Irene a sleeping draft? Will Bette join LA’s naturist club next? Has Tina used the internet to get the directions to all Bette’s nooks and crannies?
Can’t wait where you take me next.
Am sure that Bette’s revenge on Helena is somewhere in the future. Agree that getting Bette back in the house permanently will provoke some challenges.
Your Loyal Fan.
BRAVO. You are a wonderful writer and it’s always a great pleasure reading your story. Thank you.
this chapter was beautiful Jwet. i have missed your writing while i was gone. can’t wait for more.
beautiful..excellent J
Great! I’m glad Tina thought about everything and took it as it was intended. I think Tina will be happy that Bette was there when Anna was born. I think a nice way to tell her would be in the three of them lying in bed together in the morning.
Gee, when I’m one of the last to read, I don’t have new words to describe what a great chapter this is.
I really liked this line: “These are the things that only happen in fairy tales, a love so strong that it persists despite all the damage done to it”. Isn’t this what we call True Love?
Jwet, thanks for continuing to write and it warms my heart to know you have another 10 chapters mapped out.
*doing snoppy happy dance*
Damn this is awesome and beautiful, love it!