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From Afar
Chapter – 11 – Questions
Hey, Shane I wasnt expecting you this evening. Come on in. Bette says as she is opening her door. Shane is just standing there with the biggest cheese eating grin on her face as this was a visit she has been waiting over a year to make.
Bette had already started walking down the hall of her apartment when she realized that Shane wasnt behind her so she turns around. Taking a second look at Shane she now sees that sparkle in her eyes and the grin across her face.
What Shane. Do I have something taped to my back or something? Whats going on? Bette now is looking intently at Shane with that questioning look.
You havent heard yet have you? Shane says answering Bettes questions with a question of her own.
Obviously not Shane as I have no idea what youre talking about. Spill it. What could make you so happy? Bette now is really intrigued.
Helena! Shane starts to say.
OH PLEASE Shane dont even mention that womans name in my house. Not unless you are here to tell me she is out of my life or more importantly Tinas!
Bette says cutting off Shane before she could say anymore.
YES Is Shanes one word answer. But still grinning from ear to ear.
Yes what? What are you trying to tell me? Bette says but slows down as that look is beginning to find a home in Bettes mind. Helena has finally left Tina.
No better than that. Tina threw her out. Shane finally says.
What!!! When Where How? Bette cant get the questions out fast enough. Shane come on stop playing me spit it out. Bette now demands.
Just that about an hour ago Tina called Alice to tell her that Helena got real jealous over some present and Tina had had enough and told her to leave and I guess Helena did. Shane proudly explains as the whole story is music to her ears.
Yes!! Bette says as she jumps towards Shane to high five her and the two of them do a happy dance together in their mutual excitement.
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(65 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Great! I love the Alice insight. She is so funny and you have her character down. Please post more soon !
I hope Alice doesn’t inadvertently ruin the plan. This was great. Post soon!
Another fabulous chapter.
Your depiction of Alice and Tina are spot on. Alice’s nosey and forthright nature was captured to prefection here and you wittily bring out her wacky sense of humour.
Glad to see Tina is beginning to go with the flow. All the pieces of the plan are starting to fall into place but am sure, like in life, there will be a few unexpected twists and turn.
Ready for your next post.
A fan.
I love where you are going with this story.LOVING IT!!!!POST SOON P L E A S E ……….
You just can’t deny your heart and Tina try as she may…can’t help herself…she is still completely in love with Bette.
Just started my day, and I think this started my day in a good way!
<“Yes!!†Bette says as she jumps towards Shane to high five her and the two of them do a happy dance together in their mutual excitement.> I so want to see JB and KM doing this on TV!! Great story and I just love how Alice can be a reporter!
Thanks for starting my day with a smile!
i have to say … i’m hooked. thanks for the good story. love your writing.
I am doing the happy dance with Bette and Shane.
i’m with shane and bette. this is fantastic! tina showing some green eyed monster over the speaker. and alice’s investigative skills. you got it all! keep going. this is great!
I have a feeling Alice will figure this out, and Bette will have to take her into the fold. I am really enjoying this story, you rock.
U just gotta love Alice – she is just too darn funny
Now I hope Tina doesn’t get all jealous
Great post. Now i’m going to go to sleep smiling.. Post soon!!!
Alice is the best :) she makes me smile and Bette should watch out trying to keep secrets from Alice :).
you are developing this story superbly — totally enjoyable — gotta love Alice — thanks
That was great! You have us all doing the happy dance. Keep pumping out the chapters. Love them!!!
I hope Tina doesn’t get a chance to talk to Alice about Jackie until Bette gets a chance to talk to her (Alice) first…this is really good. Please don’t leave us hangin’ too long!
Yes, let the plan unfold.
Thanks for the update.
Grood chapter. I really love your story, Alice is so funny and can’t wait what happen next. Post soon, Thank you!