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Fire and Ice Chapter 13
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Tina’s body stood motionless, except for her chest that rose slow and steady, like tides on the ocean right before a fierce storm. The sounds of her exhales reverberated in her throat as her heart began to pump uniformly with her breath, causing rich bursting passion to coarse through her veins.
She allowed the brunette to consume her with her dark eyes. Tina made no effort to hide from Bette’s commanding gaze.
There was no shame this time in Tina’s return stare…only fire, glistening hot with want.
Bette wanted so much to close the distance between her and Tina… but she also feared the outcome if they were to be next to one another in such a public place.
Bette knew she would not be able to stop herself from grabbing Tina and trapping her up against the wall, devouring every inch of her…
Tina’s eyes shot through Bette’s body with profound pleasure…Bette could hardly breathe…the volumes that this woman’s eyes spoke to her was beginning to make her head spin.
Suddenly, Tina noticed the spikey haired girl touch Bette’s shoulder and whisper something into her ear. Bette’s face instantly hardened and Tina broke her eyes from the women. She had to catch her breath…
While she had not been the slightest bit late for the dinner, Tina could not help rushing herself to get to the gallery. She had waited so long…she had no choice, her body propelled her at lightening speed.
Tina was unbelievably relieved when Jack had called her early that morning, asking to re-schedule their sit-down. She barely concealed a squeal of delight as she graciously accepted the promise of another meeting later in the month. Not only did she get to have her cake, but she would eat it, too. She wouldn’t have to miss a minute of the evening spent in Bette Porter’s presence…
She intentionally neglected to inform Eric of the change in plans…she wanted to go to the gallery alone. She wanted nothing to come between them as they laid eyes on one another again…and now, the girl. The spikey haired girl from the first time they had met in her gallery…this had to be Bette’s girlfriend.
Tina felt beside herself with devastation.
Tina glanced up again, unsure if she wanted to continue watching the pair. She felt like she was out of line to look at someone else’s….girlfriend….like that. Tina still couldn’t wrap her head around the fact that a woman was drawing such a powerful response from her…Tina felt vulnerable and daft all at once.
Bette met Tina’s gaze full on, as if she had been eagerly awaiting her to lift her head for hours. Bette’s eyes were filled with so many words, but Tina couldn’t get the gist of what Bette was trying to say to her. Tina had erected her guard once again, and was immune to the effortless body language she was so easily able to read and share with the brunette just moments ago.
Tina offered a weak smile and a effortful wave, disconnecting her eyes from Bette. She turned her body towards the door and slowly began making her way out into the street….
TBC
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Umm… Where’s the rest of the chapter? Excruciating, cruel and torture are thy middle names, firestarter! ;> Thank you and please, more! More! More!
My goodness, are you gonna let her walk away, is she about to cry or what?!!!!!!!1 What the hell is Shane talking about anyway? Alice needs to go get Tina and bring her back or someone needs to give Bette a shove towards Tina so she can stop her walking out that darn door. I’m going nuts!!!!! PPS
wtf. why did she leave? she shouldn’t assume that Bette has got a gf. U need to get back here & post b4 I go f….g CRAZY!!!
i seriously waited all day for this. about to finish studying for my finals when i thought “maybe theres one last chapter of f&i up… ill check one more time.” then BAM there it was. hmmm, dialogue next time?!?! =) so, i guess alice did her job well. damn, tina’s a jealous one. i lurveeee it! pps! like, in the next hour? thanks =)
WTF… where is tina going… bette get your feet moving and go after her… NOW… your slowly killing us and you like it… (good for you… great writing)… pps
You’re killing me here! Please have either Alice or Bette run after Tina and for gosh sakes have them talk to each other…that is the only way they are going to get somewhere:) PPS like TODAY!!
Tina is so overcome with emotion that she had to go outside for a breath of fresh air??? Love the story…any post will do…I;d rather short than nothing at all!!!
Why the hell is she leaving, she just got there????? Bette better be going after her. The spikey haired girl could be anyone…it’s not like she leaned in and kissed her. For all Tina knows she could be Bette’s employee. Surely Tina felt Bette’s connection to her when they stared at each other, if not what did she think it meant? Man, don’t these two ever think? For all their career success, they can be awful stupid sometimes. Good job Fire!
What? No way! This is torture! ;)
yes..you are killing us slowly…and enjoying every minute of it aren’t you? We know how you are in your fictional world…are you like this in the real world? ; )
You are killing me with this snail’s pace! But I’m loving this story!! Please post soon and longer than 2 pages, pretty please!
You know… I purposely waited to read this story. Silly me, thinking that if I waited until it had about ten chapters or more, I’d at least get to read, without interruptions, something close to their first kiss. I know how some authors like to tease; but good Lord. I have a very intense love/hate with teasing. Argggghhhhhhhhhhh!Now, will SOMEbody (not Eric) go and get Tina! Preferably, I’d like it to be Bette. That way, they get some alone time outside and away from prying eyes and ears. More helping of this good stuff, please!!!! PPVVS! =)
Hey i’m seeing this so clearly it is written so beautufully, but my vision is foggy why is tina walking out???? huh…PPS :)
Run Bette, don’t walk. Go to her. Go out a side entrance and catch her unexpected and…well I’m not the writer but really please she cannot just leave, especially thinking spikey is her girlfriend..Oh, and way to go TK even letting her guard for a minute. An excruciatingly slow pace is no problem, but maybe we could get like 10 pages at once? I know I am being a demanding reader but really it is all your fault…you are just doing this so well..who could help but want more. Truly, Thank you so much for sharing this story with us, at whatever pace you deem fit. We will be here, we will read.
Go at a snail pace if you like just keep writing. Poor Tina,stop running.Stay in one place and she will come get you thanks
Couldn’t even keep my eyes open anymore and thought about cheking if a new chapter was up one last time… So you took me away from my beautiful, delightful bed only to leave me hanging, that’s sooo unforgivable! My point is don’t mind writing six or seven pages seriously (and keep the slowness, I feel just the same :D). And what do we say about Alice? She sure knows when to act. Glad to know you’re back in the saddle, please post soon :)
BETTE, GO AFTER HER……..
Assuming just makes an…I hope Bette can talk to Tina before she disappears.
Come on Bette go after her!