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Family Woman (Chapter 4)
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“So beautiful.”
Tina stilled under her, submitting to the word. She let herself hear what Bette had to say, and just how truthfully she meant it. “How do you do that?”
Bette couldn’t take her eyes from Tina. “Do what?”
“Look at me like you haven’t seen me every day for the past thirteen years.”
The smile was inevitable, but when Bette saw the love in Tina’s eyes, she felt it wasn’t meant for her. It brought her great sadness.
“Mmm,” Tina moaned, lifting herself just enough to plant another kiss on Bette’s lips. Once her hands were released, she moved them down Bette’s back to her ass, squeezing her there. “Uhh … I love your body.”
Bette smiled as Tina’s hands roamed over her, completely enthralled in a passionate kiss that melted her. However, she managed to pull her lips away to speak her mind just as Tina slipped out from under her. She was breathless and confused as Tina got to her feet beside the bed. “Mmm … don’t go anywhere. I’m gonna … change into something a little more … comfortable.”
Bette looked down to the floor in sadness as Tina disappeared into their ensuite, loneliness filling her like never before. She couldn’t have Tina like this, and she knew it. After letting out a deep sigh, she moved over to the other side of the bed and laid on her left before closing her eyes.
When Tina tiptoed back into the room with a teddy on, when she noticed Bette’s form facing away from her. From the heavy breathing, Tina concluded that she was asleep, disappointed and charmed all at once. She let out her own sigh after deciding it was best to let her sleep, and crawled into bed behind her.
Once the lights went out, Bette opened her eyes to the dark. She was proud of herself for resisting something so incredibly tempting, but lonely too. She wondered if she would always be lonely, or if she would ever feel that Tina’s love was meant for her. She closed her eyes once again and took a deep breath in before letting it out.
And just as she was wishing Tina would hold her, she felt that familiar arm slip over her hip and Tina’s warmth at her back. Her smile renewed at the possibility their connection presented – it gave her hope.
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I do not know how Tina is not feeling sad, confused and rejected. Bette totally weird and avoiding it at all costs. Even with the look of love Bette.
Loving this story!!! I am glad Bette is starting to bond with angie. Happy Bette stopped herself and put Tina first. Thank you PPS
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! such torture for our poor Bette but it was soooo the right thing to do (though i reckon 99.9% of your readers were wishing for a different outcome!) can’t wait to read the next chapter, please be quick ;)
I just caught up and I am loving this story. :) Can’t wait for more! Thanks for posting!
Such a sweet, funny and sad chap, all in one! Bette finally saw what she’s been missing in her life, love how she’s tryig to be fair to ‘other Bette’, how she’s not using opportunity. Can’t wait for next chap! Damn, it’s soo funny!!!!
“And you’re good for my ego,” Best line ever (lol)I don’t know how many more nights Bette will be able to fake sleeping before Tina gets suspicious. Bette needs to bite the bullet and tell Tina she can’t remember anything so they can move forward & Bette can get back to her real life and reclaim her Tina that she let go all those years ago. Thanks for the update!
Another great chapter – funny, cute and poignant. Of course that is what Angie would wear given free choice – wouldn’t we all?! And Bette was quite right to pretend to be asleep as to do anything else would have been wrong, very wrong… bad… bad Bette….. and we don’t want a bad Bette, do we? No, really, do we? Sorry, drifted off there for a moment! I love the way you are developing the growing connection between Bette and Angie, and the beautiful reconnection Bette is feeling with Tina, with the sadness that entails. Thank you!
That’s awesome that you want to work in education. I don’t teach, but admire those who chose to do it. I’m torn between wanting to watch “Family Man” or not. I think I’ll wait until your story is finished, which I’m hoping will be many postings from now. By the way, I’ve slipped a few times with my language in front of the students also. Not many, but more than once and less than four times, not bad for eleven years there.
A bit over the edge?..hehe cuz you’ve end it there?..And mix emotion..Sad, Bette just found out what she’s missing in her ‘life?’…But happy as hell!..Finally she’s got her answer. …But if this is base on a movie? So it means? she will be yank out from there?..Now that she knows what she’s been missing in her life? … OMG!
I really like what you are doing with this story. I love the movie family man and I love tibette so its perfect! PPS
This is a cute family story. I love how Bette is trying to live this life and wanting to stay in it with Tina and Angelica.
i love this story its funny but happy as well and cute an all adorable especially angie’s outfit
Excellent thank you. Love this.
This is my most fav holiday story!!! Adorable! I imagine Bette having 2 angels -one on her left shoulder (Bad Bette) and one on her right shoulder (Good Bette) and the argument between the 2 “angels” over whether to have sex with beautiful Tina. Sigh obviously…”Good angel Bette” won this round. Yes, I’m glad Bette’s got integrity…but you know…(puppy dog eyes)…longing for your NC-17. :)
The point you made about Bette not having the right to sleep with Tina, was something that has been totally overseen in the film. And it was an important one. Told you…this story is so much better!
It is so cute to see Bette bonding with Angelica. Do you think Bette will start bonding with Tina in one of your NC-17s? I hope Angelica does not pick up ‘NC-17’ as a new swear word!
Your description of Angie’s outfit was adorable. I can just imagine the tutu over the Spidey costume. Will Tina ever discover the problems Bette is having or will Bette ever tell her? She ca’t keep Tina waiting to “discuss the bills” every time. Bette will have to succumb to desire and Tinas needs or tell her the truth. This story is actually funny and sad at the same time. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Wow…I’m just loving this story. I never saw the movie (I can’t stand Cage)but I am aware of the premise and it’s lovly to see our girls wrapped up in its story line. I look forward to your updates – can’t wait for the next post :)
Thanks for the update, I look forward to more chapters of this story.
omg u depicted my fav scene in the movie. I just remember thinking how great it must feel to have the person u have been with for years look at u, as if it was the first time. great job. glad tina didnt get mad at bette for going to ‘sleep’.
Poor Bette,this is torture.Great story.Thank you.
She was proud of herself for resisting something so incredibly tempting – we’re gonna hafta call her Super(family)Woman ;-)
I just love the way you have written the characters in this story. Angie is absolutely adorable, Tina is so loving that she is overlooking all of Bette’s odd behavior. Bette is very endearing as she tries to figure out what she wants out of life. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
“Discussing the bills” being their secret codeword for sex! I honestly think I hurt myself laughing – this story is just hilariously perfect.
That was so cute and sweet, love Bette being good girl. Please post soon, thanks!
Bi that was awesome. Great story for the holidays. Keep the great work and good luck with your finals. You’ll do great. Thank you:)
I love the part about “Look at me like you haven’t seen me every day for the last 13 years?” That is my second favorite quote from this film. Top one comes from the scene at the airport. Thanks for posting. I am enjoying this story.