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    Destiny in a Mechanics shop (Pt 22)

    Story written on March 12, 2005 by Imlovinit.
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    Number of Comments: 8
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=52557
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    Break in

    “Tomorrow and I promise I wont be a minute late!” Bette pecked Tina on the lips, and then strode sexily over to Tinas front door; she turned and admired Tina’s position. Her hair messy, one leg resting over the armrest of the couch and the other comfortably placed on the floor. “Beautiful.” Bette purred as she twisted to doorknob to let herself out.

    As the door closed Tina whispered to herself. “I love you Babe.”

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    The next morning Bette awoke at 5:00 am utterly pissed at herself…. Ive got another five house before I have to be a Tina’s. Suddenly a wicked smile appeared on her face. “Perfect.

    Bette quickly showered and changed into her usual gear… Walking out of her bedroom and into the lounge, Bette grabbed her jacket and her keys whilst walking towards the kitchen to grab a pop tart, shoving it into her mouth as she closed the front door. Bette almost skipped down to her old Volvo, chucking her leather jacket in the front passengers side seat, with the dodgy window. ‘Damn window!’ Bette whispered under her breath as she jumped in the drivers side.

    Bette speed down the freeway, turning of the next exit, going towards Tina’s house. Screeching around the corner and halting to a stop in front of Tina’s apartment complex, Bette almost jumped out of the car and ran towards the complex. She was so caught up in the moment that she forgot to lock the car. Bette flew up the stairs and round to Tina’s door. Getting down on her knee’s to look at Tina’s lock intently. “Sweet” She whispered under her breath. Positioning her body on one bended knee, Bette pulled out her ‘lock kit’. Looking around suspiciously, Bette pulled out two lock picks and proceeded to try and unlock Tina’s door. 5 minutes into the process Bette heard the familiar ‘click’ that she was waiting for. Pulling out her instruments and putting them back in their case and then back in her boot, Bette got up off the floor and quietly opened Tina’s door. Looking around the apartment, Bette could hardly make anything out…She pulled her cell out of her pack pocket and opened it, using its blue rays as a torch. Walking down towards the Bedroom. Bette closed her phone as soon as she opened the door to Tina’s bedroom, slipping her boots off, Bette watched Tina sleep for a moment. How her chest rose and fell with every breath. How she was sleeping on her stomach, so Bette could see her bare pale back. The sheet covering just over her waist. Her arms cuddled the pillow as her head lay on top of it, her lips pursed as she breathed through her mouth. Her delicate eye lashes sealed her eyes closed.

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    2. Oh, WOW! What can I say to discribe this story so far? Well, I stayed up all night reading the first chapter to now, and now I’m up and the first thing I do is come on the computer to leave a comment (since I was really tired after finishing playing catch up with your story). I’m really glad I stumble on this story, it is shall I say…MUY CALIENTE!

      I have two chapters that I would like to comment on. First one, chapter 13,…OH MY GOD…I think I may be alone in this situation, but I would prefer that type of scene of images filling my head, than a “sex scene”….

      … That’s why I loved it, I love how Bette followed Tina in the bathroom trying to talk to her. Then, Bette again, followed Tina outside the club trying to explain, but Tina wouldn’t listen. I think the reason I LOVE this chapter so much is because of Bette’s persistant and determination to talk to her woman….

      …. Then Bette did what I have always LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE seeing or reading, whether it’s a movie, tv shows, or readings….

      …. As Tina was about to walk away, She grab Tina by her waist, and spunned her around in her arms and proceed to kissed her. ( OH MY GOD, I would surrender myself helplessly if that ever happen , but there’s no drama in my life for that kind of thing to happen to me, or maybe I could just…umm, never mind, I’m going off track)….

      …Okay, back to what I way saying, the second chapter that I love is obviously this last one, chapter 22. I love the playfulness of it, and I love it when you wrote, ” Tina let her thumb glide over Bette’s chin bone, before she stopped and then slapped Bette hard across her face” . My first initial reaction was, ‘how sexy is that, Tina getting rough with Bette’, and then, ‘oh my, they have to get it on now, cause this is way too hot to not to’. Then Tina just told Bette to sleep on the couch because Bette been a bad girl. I love that!! I LOVE this chapter, one: because Tina didn’t even question Bette on how she got in her house, and two: Tina didn’t seem to be phase by the fact that Bette jumped into bed with her and starts spooning her. Oh, love this Tina….

      So, I should THANK YOU for making Tina’s character more confident, and stronger, so now, I could really see her as an equal to Bette. Because some of the other fan fictions, as great as they are, I would always have one problem with it, I’d never take Tina to be an equal in Bette’s presence. Bette somehow, someway always seem to be…I don’t know…superior? So, it’s nice to see this side of Tina.

      Alright, I just realized that I wrote a freakin novel, instead of a couple of sentences of comments. So I think I should stop. Before I go, I would like to say that this is one of the best story on this site, and I just wished that I found this early. So, do your things and lift that pretty fingers of yours and start typing! (*Not a command, just saying it in excitment*)

      OKAY, I just read what I just wrote, I don’t really get what I just wrote, and (silly me) I’m going to assumed that you would be able to understand it…SO, If you don’t get it either, just know that I have love this story, and hope you post the next chapter soon.

    8. ok, rule number one… don’t pick the lock of your girl’s place and sneak into bed with her… it always turns out badly. lol. great chapter! post soon!

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