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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 33 part 2
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Previously
“I love you” Alice said clearly but troubled because she wasn’t confident those words could convey the truth and emotion laced within them. Dana seemingly understood pulling Alice’s face forward into an urgent kiss and pouring her own feelings into it that words could simply not match.
Alice sucked on the fleshy muscle until she was left breathless. Her need growing stronger as her body gave in to the temptation that was Dana Fairbanks. A kiss just simply wouldn’t do, she wanted more, much more. Releasing her hands from the athlete’s face and starring into her mesmerizing pools of blue, she spoke in a ragged whisper distorted from desire.
“I need to taste you.” Dana began crawling up Alice’s body in aim of straddling her and sitting in a position that enabled the blonde to stay just where she was but Alice was having none of it.
“No, I want to taste you whilst you taste me baby.” Alice spoke up, face already flushed and sporting a sexy grin when she seen the wheels in Dana’s brain stop turning as she realised what the writer was suggesting. The brunette was wide eyed at the thought, this was something she’d yet to try with the blonde and to say she was excited was an understatement.
“Okay,” Dana managed to stutter slowly climbing down Alice’s body, taking her sweet time to peel the sheet with her and expose the creamy skin begging to be touched, licked, sucked, kissed and any other luscious method Dana had in mind. She bent forward and began leaving a trail of kisses down the writer’s neck, tasting the glorious skin, enjoying it as if it was her first time. She knew Alice’s body better than her own by now and could pinpoint the exact spot, which drove the blonde crazy.
She nipped at the flesh and leisurely sucked on it until she’d left her own lust filled imprint, proving to others that this was her woman. Alice moaned at the feeling, she’d become putty in the athlete’s hands in mere seconds as her body went into sensory overload when Dana found her pulse point. The path was continued down through the valley of Alice’s tits that also found themselves under adoring attention.
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Wow…hot hot hot! Maybe the Danish hotness can break the winter cold that has all of us freezing our butts off in LA! It worked for me. I also am enjoying the way you capture their goofiness, sweetness and tenderness. As much as I am enjoying S4, I still miss the Danish sooooo much. PPS
Dang. Well, that did it for me, so thanks. I’m good for the night. Kidding, IU still have to stay up and work on my stupid update. It’s boring and long, I should really start following your example and posting one-pagers. Except see, updates like this from you so far outstrip anything I could come up with in a page I’d be ashamed to. And now that I’ve rambled your life away, I’ll just say: great job, as always.
Omfg that was hot. I love your fanfic, its brilliant :D Cant wait till the next one
Wow indeed!!! love the update and look for your fics every night so don’t let me down.
I totally agree with everthing SammysGirl said. Another top chapter. I need another cold shower!!!LOLPPS
YES! Yes, Yes, Yes, I forgive you. You can make them short as long as the next chapter is like this, HOT!!! Loved it as always, PPS :D
This might not seem like much praise since everyone’s already stated the ovbious, but this was hot! And the favorite number bit was also another reason to love it. Sorry for not being much help again:( PPS.
unlike the other girls, im in the middle of summer in here and…ur sex scene didnt exactly cool me down…ok…*cute kitties, cute kitties*
Had to put off writing for a while? But it’s not what I think? Well what do I think & further more, do you think that I think about what you were doing that sounds so incredibly pervy? Dana in a wet t-shirt is a sight that I would simply love to behold & I’ll just have to be content with trying to imagine it. 69 is a damn fine number & just to think, all these years I was taught to believe that 3 was a magic number. Who knew?
Well, what can I say, you’re justthe best fluffer there is. :P And damn it, did I pick the wrong favourite number. 25 always is my lucky number…but when it comes to hot Danish action, I’m afraid a 25 doesn’t do much. :S
Yo hot stuff that was mind blowing stuff. You are so good at this I may need to make a trip to Scotland. Hope you are ok. PPS.
Im not happy at ur thing against Jill!
I got confused, pressed the wrong button all hell broke loose, but dont fear i hadnt finished talkin. i know you love me dear. I find it quiet funny actually reading stuff you’ve wrote, but thats cos your really good at something for a change! anyway i need to go attend to the flocks of women queing up for me. any way keep writing its good!
Holy flippin’ hotness Batgirl! I may need to go outside and throw myself into the snow to cool down after that chapter! What a way to celebrate Christmas Eve, Bravo!
Good god girl are you trying to kill me LOL teasing i LOVED this update, good lord i might need to take another COLD shower! Im waiting for your PM,we are going to have a blast when me meet!Thanks for your wonderful story babe,Please post when you can!
Wow that was hot!
Haha, awesome!!!
Wow!!! I am finally beginning to feel warm!Wow that was awesome!