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Dark Come Soon
Carmen: Hello I am Carmen de la pica Morales.
The girls just stared back at me with a queasy expression on her face.
Carmen: What is your name?
The girl leaned away from her and rocked on the edge of the sit. Carmen leaned over and discreetly smelled herself, she thought she smelled ok but the girl was looking at her like she smelled horrible. Her nose was scrunched up and she was leaning as far away from Carmen as possible. She looked at the mysterious girl and stared into her dark black eyes. Something about the way she looked at Carmen made her feel frightened. She pulled her dark colored hair closer around her face to hide her like a shield, but the beauty of the girl intrigued her. She looked like some kind of Greek goddess to Carmen. The girls sitting next to her screamed danger but she didn’t care. She had to know who she was and why she hated her.
Haven’t we met
You’re some kind of beautiful stranger
You could be good for me
I’ve had the taste for danger
The whole period of biology the girl looked as if she was in pain sitting next to Carmen and it was starting to piss her off. Carmen just moved to this shit town from L.A. and she didn’t take shit from anybody. She knew the people in Forks, Washington were going to be different but this girl was plain rude. The bell rang signaling the ending of class and before Carmen could give the girl a piece of her mind she was gone. Carmen looked around, and it seemed like the girl vanished before her very eyes. It was weird to her. Carmen raced out of the class and saw the girl by a locker and decided to walk up to her. She taped her on her shoulder lightly and it felt surprisingly hard to Carmen’s touch. She didn’t turn around so Carmen jumped in front of her face. The girl’s head snapped back and she got the queasy feeling again on her face. It further pissed Carmen off.
Carmen: What is your problem with me? Do I stink or something to you?
The girl flashed her black eyes on Carmen and Carmen instinctively jumped back for a reason unknown to herself.
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ditto to what ‘nom’ said… Great chap! pps!
WOW!
Awe.. I like the teens and vamps stories. Helena and Dana are so funny. They are kinda goofy and big mouth roles to newbie in a highschool.
this is very similiar with twilight!
Ok, I must confess that I know nothing about Twilight. So these vampires don’t need to hide from the daylight? That’s great, for them. I’m trying to get over the fact that the green eyes are no more, but really like T&B as the parents. Always thought that Bette and Shane had some kind of mother-daughter bond. Doesn’t seem too good that every time Carmen is close Shane feels the urge to kill her. She’s gonna have to work on that :)
Loved Twilight, i’m big into vampires. Dig the storyline, keep going.