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    Daily, together and apart # 15

    Story written on July 13, 2007 by Braz.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=66200
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    Bette’s mouth also slid open, the water rushing through it. She pulled Tina closer. Her arms bring her close, pressing her back. Their nipples…The water. The piercing. She could hear heavy breathes. Was it hers? Their heads inclining…


    Tina was lost in the feeling. Feelings of Bette. She was surprised with Bette’s movement but she didn’t complain at all. Now Tina could sense Bette’s aroused nipple on her back. She could felt Bette’s hands traveling to the side of her thighs, them to her waist. Tina moved her own hands and covers Bette’s helping her with the movement. She sensed Bette’s waist pulling hard against her ass. Enclosing. She could hear her own heavy breathe. Or is it Bette’s ?She left out an irresistible moan that was asking for permission to be heard since she placed her hands on her ex lover. Bette’s strong arms made its way to the north and finally got to Tina’s chest. They crossed itself, brushing, pressing Tina’s breasts. An erotic and tender embrace. Bette had her nose lost in Tina’s wet hair, feeling her missed perfume. She sang along the music, descending her lips, brushing her nose against the nape of Tina’s neck. Bette found her ear and whisper: “If I could kiss you now…I’d kiss you now again and again…Till I don’t know where I begin…And where you End”


    They danced for a while… it seemed forever. Bette rested her chin on Tina’s shoulder enjoying the feeling of warmth through the cold and fresh rain. She moved her arms through Tina’s and gently took her hands in hers and lifted to the sky, singing along with the music.


    Open to everything happy and sad
    Seeing the good when it’s all going bad
    Seeing the sun when I can’t really see
    Hoping the sun will at least look at me

    Focus on everything better today
    All that I needed I never could say
    Hold on to people they’re slipping away
    Hold on to this while it’s slipping away

    Now their bodies were disconnected, but they would never be apart.


    Angelica didn’t understand what was happening. She saw all that movement, and this made her giggle in her baby car protected by that fresh liquid that was coming from above. She didn’t understand what lead all these people that she loved to do what they were doing, but that seemed very funny. She didn’t understand, but she could feel a warm feeling inside of her. She felt that this was right and this was one of the joys of life. And she too wanted also taste this, for that fresh liquid that was coming from above must be some medicine. Must be a good message, a wise word. It cleans and sprouts sweet feelings and can also cure deep wounds.


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    3. Hello Braz!!!! Thank you for being so generous with your comments back. You are doing a wonderful job with this story. I am moved by the depth of your creativity, the words you choose, the simile’s and such. You breathe life into each and every word you so eloquently place on paper. I cannot wait to see more of this, as you spin this tale further along. Thanks so very much for adding a brilliant story to the site. Hugs my friend. xoxox

    4. Wow, now all we need is the “KISS”. rain is such a cleansing force, it can wash all the pain away, and open up into a bright sky with a beutiful rainbow,in which all things are possible.

    7. Wow Braz! You so eloquently painted the scene….watching it unfold as I read your words and seeing the effect it had on little boo….perfectly written Braz! I couldn’t help but think of some of the words in the song “In Between Poses” by Jen Foster and also the song “So Pure” by Alanis Morissette when the girls were dancing in the rain… (words in “So Pure”…”I love you when you dance when you freestyle in trance – so pure such an expression…” and “In Between Poses”…”When you think no one’s watching, when you’re taken by the moment, when you forget what you’re thinking, and you say what you really feel, when you’re in between poses, when your laughter takes over, that’s when you’re floating with the angels, that’s when you’re floating with the angels…” Thank you for sprouting such sweet feelings Braz…from your pen to my heart.

    10. Rain, rain please wash away jodi and all the pain that Bette and Tina have done to each other. Rain, rain please wipe the slate clean and allow Bette and Tina a new start.

    12. God, I always loved rain – something truly poetic about it that gets me each time… So I thank you from the deepest of my heart for this lovely update to your beautiful story, where feelings and emotions are so delightfully mixed with drops of rain and music, drops of love everywhere… Many thanks for this piece of happiness, this rainbow where all the tension you so brilliantly brang in your story until now and all the bittersweet and intense emotions find an inestimable moment of peace and beauty – a so welcomed timelessness… And, well, I cannot help but guess how truly sensitive the person must be, behind the author’s skills, for depicting such rainy poetry. Bravo ! ^_^

    14. This chapter was really great! That part of the music of the kiss , when Bette was singing is beautiful! :DDid you receive my email? I´m having a little problem on sending them! And I hope what I wrote on the email is right! xD Please post more soon :D

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