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Cruise On The Big Seas Chapter 9
Bette: “***** for me baby….I want to hear you….tell me what you want”
Tina: “Please don’t stop….I’m about to *****…….OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH FFFFFFFUUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKK.”
Bette falls on top of Tina with her fingers still in the place that is now hot and wet. She lightly kisses Tina’s neck while she waits for Tina to regain her breath.
Bette: “You are so hot……Are you alright?”
Tina: “***** Bette….Are you kidding me? I’m more than alright….I don’t think I have ever been more right in my life…..Are you ok?”
Bette: “Yes….I’m wonderful…..There is no place I would rather be than right here.”
Now Bette removes her fingers and rubs the sweet juices onto Tina’s lips then leans over and kisses her. This turns Tina on even more sharing herself with Bette the way they are right now.
Bette: “You taste so sweet…I could eat you for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.”
Tina begins to laugh…”Are you sure about that. I think that you may need actual food to keep your strength up.
Bette: “Baby YOU are all need to keep my strength up but I guess we will need to get some fresh air sometimes so we can take a break every now and then to rest.”
Tina looks deep into Bette’s beautiful brown eyes…”Bette, thank you so much for making me feel so special tonight but I think that it may be my turn to show you just how special you are.”
Bette: “Oh no you don’t…Tonight is about you! We have all week to worry about me. I want you to lay in my arms and I want us to sleep just like this all night. I feel so right with next to me. Nothing in the world has ever felt this right. Do you have a problem with this?”
Tina: “No problem with me. You have made me feel like a princess tonight and you know that is somthing that I have never had. I am going to have a problem leaving this.”
Bette: “Who says you have to leave? Here in my arms can be your home for the rest of our lives.”
Tina: Bette….that sounds like heaven on earth. But what about after the cruise is over?”
Bette: “Tina, please don’t worry about that right now. Right now this is about us and nothing else. No one else in the world matters right now. That is something that we have all week to think about. Now lets go to sleep so we can get up and have a fun day tomorrow. Is that alright with you?”
Tina: “That sounds great but don’t you think that we should blow out the candles?”
Bette: “Well…now that you mention it I guess that is a good idea. We don’t want to burn the ship down. But…you stay here and let me handle that.”
Bette gets out of bed in all of her naked glory and walks around the suite blowing out each of the 25 candles that she had lit for her while they were out to dinner. Tina lays there and watchs….wondering why it was her that got so lucky to meet the woman of her dreams on this floating paradise.
Bette returns to bed and cuddles up behind Tina….Tina is so comfortable that she begins to fall into a deep sleep after her night of sexual bliss.
Bette listens to Tina’s soft, steady breathing….She smiles and whispers….”Good night my angel.”
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(41 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
you did great for your first nc-17…just keep doing them and practice and you’ll be a pro in no time…tks for the story it’s good!!!
good job for a first nc-17..you will get used to and then you will write more easily..great chapter ive missed your story please post soon!!!
good job nipples. i thoroughly enjoyed myself. heehee. suer have missed youo. post soon
yeeeessssss amazing lol it was wonderful and so sweet !!! i loved it lol well please post soon thanx byeness<3389372589237
Damn that was so hot and sexy, love it. Bette is wonderful and romantic and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
I smiled as soon as I saw your post. Yea! Missed this story a bunch. It was a very nice NC-17 you gave us. post soon
Whoa! WooHoo! Whoa! very sexy very Hot Thank you I think I’m going to take a Shower it’s really Hot in here LOL! Hey that was so Awesome you’re doing a Great Job really good keep it up Hey pandoraoo7 Happy Birthday I think you mention that today is your Birthday I just remember! Nipples LOL! Great Story Please continue Post soon.
That was perfect. Very hot and sexy. I just love it. Can’t get enough of your story. Don’t stay away so long. You are missed.
Hey missed you! You did a great job on your first nc17. I will be looking forward to your next post!!!!!
Glad to have you back. I almost jumped out of my chair from the excitement. Great chapter.
Awesome chapter, Nipples! Bette’s so sweet to Tina. I hope they enjoy their time together. Thanks!
Ohhhh yesss….you did great for your first NC-17 Nipples. You have nothing to worry about in you next NC-17. Keep up the wonderful work and do post soon
Good job!!! See, it wasn’t so bad. Just keep practicing, and you’ll get the hang of it!!!
I know what you mean about writing these kind of things. I will probably have trouble too.This was great never would have guessed it was your first.
Sorry Nipples, I’m commenting on Honda: He he u r funny – just keep doing them and practice. Makes me smile though.