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Coming up for air – part twenty four
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“…oh….” Tina said, feeling like Bette had taken a knife to her heart. She got up from the couch to get some distance from Bette who seemed paralyzed by the keys hanging from her hand.
“…. I just…. I need to think about this…. maybe I should go so I don’t say something I regret…” Bette said, finally looking up at Tina, who was walking backwards away from Bette.
“… I don’t understand…. I thought….” Tina mumbled, while her tears spilled over and ran down her cheeks. She looked down in embarrassment.
Part of Bette wanted to run to Tina and kiss away her tears. But at the same time she felt like her dreams of a future where Tina once again was her wife had been shattered. She got up from the couch, stealing sideways glances at Tina.
“I’m not saying I don’t want the keys… I just didn’t think I needed to…. have your keys,” Bette tried to explain.
Tina had no idea what was happening, she just felt completely shot down by Bette.
“So you’re running away, Bette…? I thought you wanted this…” Tina cried.
Bette stopped on her way to the door. “I’m not running away… I just don’t want to say something I haven’t completely thought through….”
“Bette, I’d rather you stayed and explained this to me…. but if you have to… then leave…” Tina said. She turned around and went into the bedroom, closing the door behind her.
Bette was leaning against the front door, trying to grasp what just happened. Her heart was beating furiously in her chest and the tears wouldn’t stop falling. All she knew was that Tina would never again be hers in the way she used to be.
Tina was sitting on the bed with her face in her hands. She felt completely unprepared for what just happened. She thought Bette wanted to take their relationship to the next level. Giving Bette her keys was just a way to show her that she once again trusted Bette to have access to her privacy; that she trusted her with everything she had… everything she was. And now Bette said she didn’t want that.
Half an hour went by. Everything inside Bette had told her to get out, to hide her disappointment and confusion, but she hadn’t moved. She was still standing at the front door. Everything was so painfully quiet. The music had stopped and Tina definitely wasn’t humming anymore. There was just this deafening silence.
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the wait was worthy this chapter was so good, i like how they are working together in order have a better relationship it’s hard some time and others hurts if not you can ask Bette but at the end all the work done is worthy is they will be together and happy. thanks for the post! post as soon as you can please! take care
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH That’s what I’ve been waiting for. I love the the slow burn way in which u tell the story and at the same time deal with all the important things like jobs, like futures, like clothes on and off…especially the taking off!!!! and then the climax!!!! aaaaaawwwwwwwwww so sweet….now for the next chapter…yes, like B and T I’m insatiable for more of your story….so in between the important things of your life, more soon pleaszzzzzzzzz
aaahhhhhh yes, the PRIVATE BIKINI-LESS POOL PARTY…I am hanging out for that sweet torture!!!!
Wow Anker I’m with JB, don’t smoke, but considering getting a pack for Alpha Bette!I luv this story. You are very talented. In what what other ways I ask myself?(wink)lol…….You Rock harder!PPS
so glad that Bette stayed…they could never get back together without drama. The end was hot and can’t wait for your next post..
Holy cow, that was amazing….and not just the sex but the whole chapter, really amazing!!!! So great to see another post from you, very fast this story has become one of my favourites :o)) Hope you’ve had a great weekend :o))
I placed all liquid forms of refreshments out of the way. But before that I made sure to hydrated myself. So I was kind of prepared for the chapter. It was still very thrust making and HOT. I could see both sides about the keys issue. Glad that it did not put a stop to the evenging’s extra currcicular activities.
I am so glad you found time to post another chapter, I was realy missing this story…Bette and Tina need to work out a few things but communication is key and of course lots of lovin, lol…Looking forward to more anker.
Thankfully for once Bette did not run. Woman, you gotta give Tina some time, you guys did a really good job on each other, and damn its not like she cut you off or anything. They’ll get there in good time. Now I think I’ll go have that cigarette, but you don’t need one.
Good that they talk and damn they are hot!
Well that was certainly worth the wait. I was happy to see that Bette is really trying to change her old habit of running away from things and stayed to talk to Tina. Your words always have a certain effect on me and I now have to go out, but at least I’ll have a big smile on my face thanks to you. I should have known better, but I just couldn’t not read this chapter before I left. Thanks anker and have a great weekend.
I’m glad Bette didn’t leave without talking to Tina about the meaning behind the apartment keys. ( even though she had to take a blow to the head. Very funny! LOL!) I am a huge Tibette fan and this story always makes me smile. You are most definately doing the right thing keeping them together. On a different note, the smokin’ in the shower thing, not working out so great…probably because I don’t smoke! LOL! But your last chapter was so HOT, that I had to take up the nasty habit just to cool off! LMAO! Okay, I’m ready for the REAL payback in the next chapter. Do I need to get another pack of cigarettes, Anker? PPS.
man u did that on purpose!!!!!!!! had me cussin at the screen.. last page that was hotttttttttttt
I am so glad Bette didn’t walk out that door. They need to break that cycle of miscommunication followed by running away. I think Tina more than made up for the blow to the head wouldn’t you say ladies? I think she will continue to make it up to Bette ALL NIGHT LONG. I love your writing Anker and I am hoping you post again real soon.
Good Lord woman! Tina, Tina, Tina yummy…..
Oh, I’m here for the long haul, anker, for sure. I just sacrifice sleep to write (like I’m doing RIGHT NOW. This is my break). ;) After all, it’s the least I can do to pay you back for your kindness. Oh god, Bette in a convertible…I need a moment. I LOVE Bette’s warm fuzzies at being with Tina again. As for the rest of it, THUD! I’ll BET Tina has skills! One’s that Bette most likely taught her. ;) HOT!
I’m glad Bette didn’t run away. She came to her senses, and hopefully that bump to the head has knocked the rest of the stubbornness out of her. Well, anker, I find I’m running out of ways to describe the hotness in this chapter. No to sssmokin’, that’s too Jim Carrey-esque… I’ve already used a variation of combustible… I can’t use non-English words because my French and Spanish have rusted away to nothing with disuse… See? It’s hot enough that it’s rendered my brain to mush… crikey. More. Soon. Please.
I’ve just caught up to the last two chapters. Amazing. Definitely waiting for more. I was having withdrawals.
Okay, I guess I understand the need for drama! Realistic way to show the struggle to change and communicate that must take place. In some way, it’s sad that Tina blames the house for bad memories instead of reveling in the good memories they made there. Loved the door move! Good comic reIlief! I’m looking forward to the private party and christening. Post when you can. Thanks for writing!
It was definetly worth the wait to read this sweet and sexy chapter! Please continue ASAP!