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Coming Back – Chapter 6
Previously
THE PLANET – EVENING
Carmen and Shane are sitting at a table with Alice and Dana (who are not together, in this story), they are all waiting for Jenny and Marina who have decided eat dinner in a different restaurant before going at The Planet. They all talk about everything and nothing, mostly about Jenny and Marina that are back together. An hour later, Marina and Jenny have still not arrived, then Shane cell phone’s ringing.
Shane : Hello ?. what ? Which hospital ?.. We’re on our way!!
Shane looks at Carmen then Alice and Dana.
Shane : They are at the hospital
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HOSPITAL – NIGHT
Jenny is on a bed. Marina’s standing by her, she had cry. Apparently, Jenny doesn’t have any bruises. Marina sits on a chair, her anxiety is very obvious. Minutes are passing and no news on Jenny’s situation. Marina is now walking in the little room, she just can’t stop thinking of what happened. Still nervous, she goes to the cafeteria and get some coffee. It’s now 11:00 and Shane is not yet arrived, Marina looks by the window if she can’t see Shane or Carmen or the others. She doesn’t see anyone. Ten minutes later, Shane finally arrives with Carmen, Alice and Dana. They are running in the corridor, Shane is the first one to go into the room. She sees Jenny on the bed and starts crying. Marina’s crying to and they take each other in their arms. Each of Shane and Marina aren’t able to stop crying. Ever since Shane and Jenny started to live in the same house, they developed a friendship without boundaries.
Shane : (crying) I’m sorry there were an accident on the highway..
Marina : It’s okay Shane, it’s okay..
Shane : What.. um.. what happen ?
Marina sits on a chair. Carmen takes Shane in her arms. Alice and Dana are just waiting and listening. Marina tries to stay calm, tries to convince herself that the everything will return to normal and this is just a bad dream, (yeah!, she thinks, I’m sleeping and just having a bad dream), but Jenny’s still unconscious.
Marina : Well where should I start? (asking herself)
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I’m so happy that Jenny and Marina are together. I hope this is not a serious problem with Jenny’s health. Keep going.
WoW! Love really does hurt,huh? It’s so nice to finally see this most tender and humbling side of Marina, the real Marina. Oh my, our Shane really lost it there for a moment or two,but thank God that Marina and Carmen were there to pull her back. Hang on Jenny help is on the way.. Great chapter, please post again (SOON).
Please go on, I love the drama!