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Coming Back – Chapter 10
Previously
If I can have just one wish I wish I could be able to tell her that I love her.
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JENNY’S ROOM / HOSPITAL – EVENING
Alice, Dana , Shane and Marina are sitting in Jenny’s room. They all look sad. Shane’s eyes are still red and puffy because she cried so much lately. Just an allusion to Jenny makes her cry, and we all know why, well except Alice, Dana, Marina and mostly Carmen. Marina tries to keep her tears inside, a task which is quite hard at this point. A part of themselves wished that all of this never happened, but they know that even if they all like (for some) and love (for some others) Jenny, there’s absolutely nothing they can do. As minutes are passing, Shane and Marina look more and more depressive. Shane can’t stop crying everytime she finally stops crying, she thinks that she’ll probably never be able to tell her that she loves her, so she cries again.
I’ll probably never be able to tell her, admit her, she’ll die without knowing that.. I know she loves Marina, but still, without knowing that I love her. I know that if I tell her, she’ll stay with Marina.. Aarrf.. *****!! Why Am I always in those situations why I want her to know ? That will not change the situation.. I’m her bestfriend, and now she’s.. (sigh) my secret love (sniff) a love who’s gonna die soon.
It’s strange because a part of me wants all that ***** to end.. to end because I don’t want her to suffer of the sickness, but also to suffer just to know I love her and she’ll never be mine.
Carmen, what am I going to do with her? I don’t want to hurt her. I know I love her but.. Dawm!! I just realise I might not be “in love” with her. Do I tell her the truth? Or.. No I can’t.. *****!! It’s gonna be so hard.. and Jenny.. she’ll (sniff).. die soon. Why destroy everything I have with Carmen if Jenny will die soon .. and anyway.. I’ll never be with her. (sigh) *****!!!!!!!!!!
It was so quiet in Jenny’s room. Shane was still crying, and Marina too. Then Shane cell phone’s ringing.
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Mmm, interesting little senario we have here. I love Marina’s reaction “WHT DID YOU SAY”? Finally something that will maybe get a genuine rise out of our always calm and quiet Marina. I can’t wait to see how Marina handles this with Shane. EXCELLENT CHAPTER,I see back here soon….
this as a tyte lil’ chapter but please don’t tell me that when Jenny wakes up (or even if she does),that her and Shane gon hook up. It would seem like insest or something. Great, great updates; please update soon.
whow, great!!!!!
This was so short, please go on soon!!