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Closure – Chapter 37
Alice looked so vulnerable and scared, but, Dana could also see the flicker of heat in her eyes.
"Are you sure?" Dana said — her voice slightly shaky from nerves.
"Yes. I’m sure." Alice punctuated this by un-buttoning her pants and starting to slip them down.
“No, babe, let me do that.” Dana said with her voice husky with desire. She ran her hands up Alice’s legs to her waistband. She then slowly lowered her pants down and slipped them off her legs. Alice now lay before her in just her panties.
Alice took one of Dana’s hands and ran it from her thigh, rested it briefly on her mound and then brought it up to her breast. Both women made a soft exhale of air as Dana’s palm gently passed over Alice’s nipple.
Dana was focused completely on Alice. She needed to make sure Alice felt loved and safe and try to wipe out as many of the lingering bad memories Alice had of her times with Jackie. She was as prepared as she could be. She had read a lot and talked to her therapist on how to handle when (Dana would not allow herself to consider "if") this came up.
There was a time that Dana knew Alice’s body even better than she knew her own. She knew the parts that were ticklish and the parts that were sensitive…and the parts that would make Alice weak at the knees. She planned to use all that knowledge to make sure Alice had no regrets about taking this step.
Dana got in the bed next to Alice and leaned over her. She lowered herself down so she was just above Alice and looked deeply into Alice’s eyes to try and convey the love she had for the other woman. She then started to kiss her. The kisses built slowly. Alice was tentative and nervous at first. But Dana was patient and a very good kisser. Dana could tell when Alice started to relax and let her growing arousal overcome her lingering fear.
Dana kept kissing the writer but also started her hands gently roaming over the other woman’s curves. Dana moved her leg slightly so that it was in-between Alice’s and pressing lightly against Alice’s center. Alice moaned and Dana was encouraged to put a hand on Alice’s ass and move her so her crotch had more contact with Dana’s leg.
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(44 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
whoa I think all the snow here just melted!!!!!!wicked hot chapter..(whatever gave the idea that I’m a Shane fan? could be I’m incredibly narsasstic..well if that was my name :D )
OH, NO…. I thought Al was crying of happiness… Dana made Alice come 4 times. Stud Dana!! lol…. Aww… But Alice crying breaks my heart. Don’t cry, Ali, baby :(
AWWWW! So glad to see an update :). U certainly captured the realism, U captured how tentative and Dana shud have been perfectly and Alice just as well. So hot, real and so so romantic with a touch of sadness perfect. Love it. Cant wait for next post :) x x x
you really are just trying alittle payback huh? Anyway. Loved it as usual goose. It was greatly amazing and slightly sad. I wish I could cuddle with a crying Alice. But i think Dana would beat the crap out of me. Anywho. LOVE YOU AND THE STORY
That was hot. Dana being so gentle with Alice. That is what love is all about. To please and to love with your whole heart and soul thanks
Awww, this was so sweet. I’m glad Dana took it slow for Alice. You captured the purity of their love beautifully!
What can i say that you havent already? You have done such a beautiful job with everything and i love how slow and gentle and intimate….okay now i’m drooling! It was great Goose
Hello MaGoose, You are such a master at creating such a powerful build up… you have these two woman learning how to love one another and of course love themselves… you create such an emotional bond that is so powerful that when it reaches its climax… no pun intended… we can see and feel their love for one another and this is so soul shatteringly powerful… that ending is so powerful… the culmination of two lovers souls merging… WOW… you Rock… Sincerely, JC
that was great and very well writen I just hope that alice will be able to get on with her life to the full soon great update pps
WOW. those tears are of everything happiness and sadness all at the same time.. this was the true moment of closure for alice to move forward… now she needs to time for it to all sink in…. powerful moment for both!!! :)
perfect! she was so gentle..and sweet..alice is doing so great now im so happy for them :)
The only thing I can think of to say is … perfect !!
I think that all went pretty well. Even the crying.
You really are amazing. This is beautiful and tender and sweet and just perfect.