Fan Fiction
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Carmen’s feeling before Shane and her were together
Carmen’s feelings for Shane
You enter the room covered in cologne and my senses reel
The smell is not something I recognise but is extremely alluring
The vapours are sucked into my wanting lungs and I begin to quiver
as you walk over, your hips swaying hypnotising me
You sit and grab my hand and your piercing eyes penetrate mine
I see lust in them far deeper than I could ever satisfy
I gaze back at you begging for your secrets
I am questing quality information yet your sturdy walls stand stock still
As your hand gently grazes my face with a supreme softness,
a wave of warm tingles reverberates up my vertebra
The tingling sensation continues to flow down to my soft core,
wanting more yet not receiving
Your hand flows down my face methodologically
and then rests gently on my shoulder
The slightest movement and I feel this shallow dream will disappear
You are not mine, you are yours
This realisation strangles, constricts and makes me gasp
I am floundering, I want to be with you yet you will not let me in
Your mouth is delicately soothing my neck
The pounding of my heart filters up my neck
where the blood vessels bulge with blood and throb
This fatal seduction is twisting my perceptions
I want you so badly, but don’t trust myself in your presence.
You bring out an animalistic want of ***** within me
Yet I want to be with you forever
I am confused
The sexual frustrations are deepening as you hold my body close to yours
My heavy laden ***** are being chaste kissed into submission
and they show their enjoyment
My heart is burning in my chest
This feels so arousing and sacred
A gem to place in m swelling brain and treasure
"Is this love?" I think to myself wanting to whisper that gently into yours
You are moving along my body thrilling me with every movement
As you begin to penetrate me, our eyes lock with a unmovable stare
I want to scream how I feel about you to the roof tops
but hold on to my sanity
You will run, I know you will
You have before
My eyes flower with fruiting images
as the blood fills my pounding ears
I am near the edge and as though sensing this you quicken the pace,
your rhythm harder and faster
A loud scream fills my head as I am thrown off the cliff
You’ve put me in a daze, soaring high above the highest peaks
Then blackness fills my eyes
The end
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(28 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
I agree with Ragazzi, you really should write more, cuz this was already awesome!
this is awesome!! very poetic. now how about shane’s point of view?
I love it. I don’t know if this is one time thing but I would love it if you would continue.:)5 stars.