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Breaking silence
“So, uh, how long since she mailed the photos?”
“It’s been over a week,” Bette said gravely, pouring wine for herself and Alice.
“And not a word from her parents? No letter, no call, no acknowledgement of any kind?”
“Nothing.”
“*****,”
“I know. When I think about how I encouraged her to write to them? I could just”
“Okay, now before you pull your hair shirt out of moth balls, let’s remember that this is about Tina and how she feels, not about you and your ***** guilty conscience. You were only trying to help.”
Bette took a big gulp of wine. “Some help.”
“Poor T. How is she?”
“She hasn’t said anything, but every time the phone rings she jumps out of her skin.”
“They could be on vacation or something, right? They could be on a bus tour of the National Monuments for all you know,”
“Nice try. Except that Tina’s brother told her they just got back from a cruise.”
“Oh.”
“Hey,” Tina called, “are you guys ready for dinner?”
“Sure, Baby,” Bette replied.
“This justsucks,”
“It sure does.”
Shane wandered down the hall from the nursery. “That kid is excellent,” she said to Bette.
“Thanks. We think so, too,” Bette smiled.
“It’s likeshe’s got her own little personality, you know. And even though she’s not talking, she has a lot to say.”
“She definitely has her own personality. But it’s not all that little. I think once she starts to talk, it’s never going to be quiet in this house again.”
“Did she go right to sleep Shane?” Tina asked, putting the salad on the table and handing Shane a cold beer.
Shane shrugged. “Pretty much. There was some stuff with the music box and then the rabbit needed a hug and kiss goodnight. But mostly.”
“You’re so good with her,” Tina grinned.
“She’s always done well with younger women,”
“Can I help you with anything in the kitchen, T?” Shane asked, ignoring
“Sure. C’mon.”
Once Tina and Shane were once again out of earshot,
“What do you mean?”
“Is she going to call them, or something?”
“Al. They haven’t spoken in almost 10 years. Then after all that time, she swallows her hurt, her pride, and her fear because she wants to do the right thing for our daughter. I think she’s done enough, don’t you? If thosepeopledon’t want to have anything to do with us, then fine. It’s their loss,” Bette said.
“I don’t get it. It’s justsuch a ***** waste, you know? Such a waste oflove. And *****, there’s not enough of that to spare.”
They were interrupted by the ringing phone.
“There’s Dana,”
“She’s going to need a stiff drink,” Bette smiled, walking over to the phone.
“At least one,” Alice nodded.
“Hello,” Bette said into the receiver.
“Hello. Is thisBette?” asked a halting female voice on the other end of the line.
“Yes, this is Bette. May I ask who’s calling?”
“It’s Barbara Kennard.”
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Wonderful chapter. Glad she called, I hope it’s a good thing. Can’t wait for more.
Welcome back FFC where did you been LOL! we been waiting for your Story Thanks Gosh your back Please continue post soon.
Welcome back FFC! Now that was a cliffhanger! I’m so glad that you are continuing this story!
OMG!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN??? I cant believe you stay away for sooo long then leave us like this…just evil. Please post soon…tonight???
I hope it is a good call and not gona hurt Tina more.. Post soon love your stpry.
You can’t stop like that, can you???Hmmm please post again soon. I hope Barbara is nice := Hurry up woth the next chapter.
It’s wonderful to see you posting again. Please keep up with regular writing. Escaping into your fictional world is so pleasant.
oh my hope Tina feel good to talk to her mom..it will be very hard..cant wait for more..post soon
FFC thank you and welcome back. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
FFC is back. yyyiiipppeee. this was so heartfelt. hopefully the convo will be good. but if she called it can only be, right. hehe. post soon, please.
After I read your chapter, I know my heart will be safe for B&T. Thank you isn’t enough to say for what I feel when I read your story.
I trust you were off on a wonderful adventure. Welcome back.
So there is a God after all. I’ve been busy leaving sacrifices to the Fan Fic Gods in the hope that you might post again ;-) It’s great to see this post, I love this story. Thanks for writing.
welcome back!! anyways, is there ANY way that i can contact you? coz i would REALLY appreciate it if you can send me the files for one of my fav. series on the web; “Comfort Enough”… or you can contact me at bluthgak@gmail.com
Welcome back.Wondering when this would be updated.
Oh no! There’s no other page!!!!!!!
Shane wandered down the hall from the nursery. “That kid is excellent,” she said to Bette.
In that one sentence, you captured Shane completely.
You are the master of concision.
Now, if we could just get you to expand on length…
Until the next time,
Thank you.
YES!!!! Thanks for coming back. I was actually digging around earlier today, wondering if I’d missed the latest chapter – frustrated that nothing was there. So to say the least, I’m thrilled that you posted today.
Gracias chica!
Welcome back woman!!! More really, really soon
ffc, how I’ve missed thee! I was a little wary of not being able to remember what was going on, but as soon as I started reading it was like I was transported back in time!! Awesome ending. I hope the Kennards are trying to make things right and not make things any worse with T. Thank you!!
this is an excellent story i just went back and read the rest i really like it and im looking forward to the next chapter!!!
i’m so happy to see you’re back! i’ve missed your stories.
Oh my long time no see and glad to see you again. This is good chapter and surprise that Tina mother is calling, can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
OMG!! They called…awesome awesome chapter!! I can’t wait to see reactions from both side=D
hey,so glad u could give us an update. i re-read this story a few days back..and here i’ve got an update today…thx for continuing this wonderful story. do post soon pls…!!!!
Great to see more of this. BTW, AAAAAARRGGGGGHHHHHH!
Ok…that’s out of my system. I can wait (im)patiently for the next.