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Boundary of Fear and Love 4
It was horrible. I think Lucia is trying to kill me. She claims shes trying to get me in shape, but I dont believe her. Al, my body hurts. She looks up at me with playfulness in her eyes, Can you make it better?
How am I not supposed to swoon? I dont want to be serious and have a conversation, I want to take her in my arms and kiss away the pain. I want her body to feel pleasure.
I move in closer to her and look up at her as wrap my arms around her waist, How would you like me to do that? I ask, in my want to be sultry voice.
Ive never needed to tell you before. Dana answered, in a voice that could melt stone.
I kiss her neck and suck lightly at her pulse point, eliciting the response I knew would come. She pulls me closer and moved her head to reach down to my lips. Her tongue makes a sweep across my lower lip and all conscious thought has left my head. Im no longer thinking. Im acting raw and real, my body takes over. My arms start to wander up and down her back. I open my mouth slightly to allow her tongue to enter and take over.
I love you, Alice. So much. She breaths into my mouth.
This is where I kill a mood. Remember, I already said all conscious thought has left and Im acting based on instinct.
Are you sure?
Dana pulled her head away from mine to look into my eyes while holding the rest of me to her. Of course Im sure. How can you even ask that?
Here we go. Im sorry Dane. I mean I know you love me, but are you sure youre in love with me? I can no longer keep the eye contact she was trying for and am staring at the carpet I was wearing a hole in a few minutes earlier.
Alice, what are talking about? You know I do. Whats going on? She looks so lost. I hate this.
Im just not sure Dana. I dont know. I mean all this happened so fast with us. We didnt really have time to think. And then theres Lara. I just dont know. I dont want you to settle.
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(51 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
What great insight to what Alice is really thinking! I love the story but ya stopped it right what it was getting good…! Post soon!
Yay you continued! Good thing cause I really didnt wanna follow through with my threat…;) “Lara thing is going to come back and bite us in the ass.” Not before I bite her!
I agree with Atenea, Dana doesnt need to see Lara to know that she wants Alice. I love reading Alice’s POV in this story, post soon!!!!
Hell, yah! You’ve got to keep going with this, girl! You handled Alice and Dana’s thinking really well. This is how I hoped season 3 would be like. Dana being firm on how she feels about Alice? Great! And the “chutzpah”? …loved it!
are you kidding? of course tbc :P I don’t know why all the people has to have a lot of relationships, life and the way we wanna live it, is so different for everybody
I love your story, and happy to have a spoiler-free one. Alice made me cringe in this, but loved how you wrote her thinking. And Dana was great. Can’t wait to see where you take them next . .
You did a wonderful job of expressing Alice’s insecurity. I was happy that Dana came across as strong in this story, rather than wishy-washy.
YES tbc!!! :D and since you’re writing a spoiler-free story, you know you cant make them break up right? yay!
How can I miss this? I didn’t notice you posted. There’s no question here, you must continue! So damn good!
How you are writing this story is how i envisioned my ideal season 3 playing out–and then i had to go and be a spoiler whore! Anyway, i think you should continue on with this story–it was nice to see Dana be so decisive. I think it would be great if Lara isn’t the problem for them in the long run, you know, maybe all their drama could come from them just being an everyday couple. that would be nice to see. however you choose to portray this, I’m sure it will be brilliant. You always seem to do an amazing job. Keep up the good work!
please continue. i love how this story is coming along so far.