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Bette’s Nightmare: Chapter 10
Tina smiled at me, “Could you help me with this?” she
gestured to the streamer-y stuff.
I returned her smile, “Of course.”
She climbed back up the stepladder and I handed the stuff to
her, our hands touched for the first time in five years. I felt a tingle
spreading from my fingers up my arm to my face. I knew I was probably blushing.
Tina looked down at me and smiled. I stepped back and took
her arm as she climbed down from the stepladder.
She looked at me “Sodo you need help with those cups?”
I laughed and went to sit down at the table near the cups.
“Umyeah, as organising cups go I’m pretty bad at it.”
She joined me at the table and we sat for a few seconds,
looking at each other.
I was getting sick of not speaking my mind. But I exhaled
the breath I was holding.
“SoShane’s getting married. Wow” I said, not really
knowing what to say.
Tina nodded, “I know, five years ago I’d never had imagined
it. She seems so happy. I’m really happy for her.”
I smiled, “Me too, she deserves it.”
Tina stared at something non existent, as if she was
speaking her mind, “Yeah, she’s helped me out a lot over the years.”
I knew she was implying when I’d had the affair, and when
she left me.
I squirmed slightly, the urge to say nothing was too great.
“You know Tina,” I said gently, “Do we need to do this?”
She looked at me, knowing fine well what I meant.
“Do what?”
“This!” I gestured towards her and myself.
“I mean, I’ve just come back from New York, I was away for
four years. And now I’m here, and you’re here. And I think we owe it to
ourselves after all we’ve been through to tell each other what’s really going
on.”
I leaned forward, closer to her, placing my hand gently on
her arm
Meanwhile
Alice was balancing on top of a couple of crates at the back
of the Planet, peering through one of the windows.
She cursed to herself, “Goddamnit! Why can’t I hear what
they’re saying?”
Just thenAlice heard her phone ring.
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(60 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
After seeing Bette ,Hannah should start packing her bags I’m afraid her days will be number. Hannah will do something stupid and she will leave on her own.{I hope} Tina is not going to hurt someone like she was hurt,Nor will Bette hurt someone like she hurt Tina. thanks
Good chapter. Man they just about to talk about their feeling and that Hannah interrupt them and hope they will be alone and talk soon. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter. Hello Bette, good bye Hannah. post soon
god. glad your enjoying the writing thingy. im enjoying you writing. love the framily. so hannah saw the glory that is bette porter huh? id start running for the hills about now. but just for slaps and tickles you coulda had them at least kiss *sigh* oh well. another time. thanks. and keep it going.
Wow! great chapter! please keep writing, I can’t wait to see where this is going!
sorry hannah bette’s back so your gone
bette:1 hannah:-4. already without even touching tina’s body she’s already gone. and poor lil hannah is down and out for the count. that’s exactly how it should be. please post soon. PEACE.
Yeah, that’s Bette… the one that has Tina’s heart!
oh Hannah..run my friend when you still have dignity..lol..its perfect clear that Tina feel the same way and i hope wont be so long for them talk and be together again..cant wait for more and congrets for 10 chapters..bring it on more 1000..lol..thanks :o)
you have a knack for leaving me wanting more
so hannah is going to be hurt because bette and tina will get back together.i wnder it the girls ever told hannah that bette and tina will never really be over.hannah should of thought about a relationship with tina, but she didnt think bette would come back to la. i like the fact after five years the love is still there. please dont hurt hannah’s feelings to much when u break them up.
this just keeps getting better…tks post soon
hannah is so gone…Bette is back. love your story!post soon
noooo!!!! I know we don’t know much about Hannah, but damn her! Ms. Interrupty-pants! ARGH! :)
alice could have think of something to keep hannah away from the planet, but at least B&T are not finished yet..bring it on