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Bette Forgets 17
*Bette*
Oh that was some kind of fun we had last night. My love and I. After the erotic encounter that I had been craving we made love all night. It was sweet, tender, full of love. It gets me all hot thinking about it even now. Currently I am lying on the bathroom floor after a particularly violent bout of morning sickness. I should get up but I cant seem to muster any energy to do so.
Besides my state of sickness I cant help the smile that crosses my face every time I think of Tina, my T.
Hey babe, I hear from outside the bathroom door, I just returned from the store, are you okay?
Not really, I call and lift my head to see the door open
Tina steps into the bathroom and I see the look of concern cross her face when she sees me lying on the bathroom floor. She quickly comes over and sits next to me.
Im sorry I wasnt here for you.
You cant be here every time I am violently ill. I dont think I want you to, I grin, Not very pleasant.
Tina smiles in return, No it isnt. I still want to be here for you.
Okay, next time I feel the urge to barf I will make sure you are here.
Tina laughs, Thank you. Do you think you can get up now? Or do you feel some more in there, she asks pointing to my stomach
I feel plenty in there but no more throwing up, I say slowly sitting up
With a smile of her own Tina gets up and pulls me to my feet brushing a hand over my back as she does so. Even the smallest of touches gets me hot. Maybe its the hormones.
What did you get me at the store, I ask with a cheeky grin as Tina sits me down on the bed
I got you some crackers, Tina says with a bright smile
Ooh crackers, I clap my hands together, Gotta love those saltines.
Tina just shakes her head in the way I know she is completely amused by me but has no response to what I just said. I get this a lot. Tina was about to say something when the phone rang. Since I was closest I answered it.
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(49 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
I feel as if some ominous music should be playing. Nice little bits of lots of things in this one.
Loved it nothing more left to say.
WOW!!! That was NICE! lol…. I did guess the bedroom but not the Chair in the bedroom! hahaha.. but so think about the kitchen counter thing we talked about!..GREAT JOB!!!
I was scared to finish reading the story cause I knew how it going to end. Not knowing what Gracy wanted. So hurry with next chapter. Good Job.
Vulnerable, recently hurt, traumatized Bette alone again with Gracy — in a “maximum security prison.” This doesn’t feel right. Let’s hope Tina’s love and Ben’s support will add to her strength. Please post soon. Can’t wait for the update.
I just caught up with your story. Bette at 22 sure is different than Bette at 40. Though just as sexy, evidently. :) Keep the chapters coming, please.
I love this story. The sex just adds to the amazingness. I believe I’ll be needing a cold shower (alone sadly haha) Please continue!
alrighty….you must post tonight…..i totally cannot wait a few days for the update…….wondering what he wants……oh please..please…please….
I love this story… can’t wait for your up date… lets hope this is it for gracy…we need more..
BETTE & TINA LOVING IS ALWAYS GOOD…GREAT CHAPTER SO HAPPY YOU POSTED BETTE FORGETS EVEN THOUGH I LOVE ALSO
Great chapter. Bette and Tina are so in love and they can’t stop doing it. What’s Gracy want, is he want to say goodbye to her and tell her to take care and take care of his child. Post soon, thank you!
Wow this bette/gracey thing is weird, how could they have this bond as strong as they do?? Keep going
hey that was nice. I really like this Bette she is still the cute one. thanksie!!!
SORRY,GOT OUT OF CONTROL. I ALOS LOVE A DIFFERENT BEGINNING..PLEASE POST BEFORE YOU GO ON VACATION..
Geez, I wish my showers are that exciting!!…LOVED IT!!…So SEXY IN LOVE!!…Wonder what Gracy wants?…Hacome Bette didn’t want Tina to go with her to see Gracy?…I guess I’ll just have to wait and see=D…more NC-17, you so rock with these scenes!!
This is a great story :)
How come Bette didn’t want Tina there – she must suspect what is going to happen isn’t going to make Tina happy. Good chapter.
Okay so where is your crystal ball.
Are you a bona fide fortune teller?
This story has Bette with child and guess what, joyfully so is Jennifer Beals abet in much happier circumstances. Spooky!
As for this chapter, Awww sweet. I adore the way Tina and Bette interact and prove their love for one another.
Personally I feel that Bette want to showw herself that she can deal with Gracy on her own and not force Tina to witness this. Bette knows how difficult this has been for Tina and just want to protect her love.
Can’t wait for your next post. All your ways are wonderful and I always enjoy reading them.
Thank you.
A fan.
that was a great update post soon please:-)
I should be in bed but your story caught my eye. Another great one! I loved it and this is my favorite as you well know. I have a question though, where have I heard that word, that particular word, thanksie before????
I absolutely positively love your writing. You write so well, I feel like I’m watching tv instead of reading from a computer screen. I am currently following all three of your stories and check daily for updates. I was estatically surprised to see an update to ‘Bette Forgets’ since it is my favorite of the three. Can’t wait for more updates on whichever one you decide to update next. Great job!
OMG! I just looooovveee this story!!! Bette is so cute sometimes, I can see why they are all over each other so much…Hope the thing with Gracy isn’t going to be bad. It would be hard to watch Bette get hurt again. Thank you for this great story!
I love reading this story. I really feel as if I can see your characters and it feels as though your writing and mastery of imagery has keeps improving with each chapter. In my mind, I see Bette at 22. Even though I know she’s her real age, you write her with such childl-like (young adult like) enthusiasm that it really comes across that her mindset is back at age 22. I find it cute that she and Ben have forged a friendship despite this hell my beloved lady b had to endure. In my humble opinion you’ve come a mighty long way from the early chapters. And the sex scenes are great. Your usage of imagery makes the scenes really easy to read and get wrapped up in. HOTT. Thanks for that ;)I love your reading and I think you know that. Can’t wait to find out what Gracy wants.
Another amazing update on one of your many stories. Can´t wait to see what Cracy wan´t to say to Bette. Post soon and don´t leave us hanging here to long.