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Bette and Tina Together Forever……Maybe YES……Final ….ch 12
Bette was sleeping very peacefully.dreaming about the events of this past weekend. She was in heaven. Nothing could take this feeling away from her. As she rolls over to feel for Tina .her arms are searching the bed..Bette starts to panic.where is she as she is trying to feel her way around the bed .Tina where are you Baby please come back to me.Oh God NO NO .Please I cant take too much more of this. It all seemed so realI had Tina in my arms we made love right here in this bed and in the Hot Tub. God no I cant I cant open my eyesas long as my eyes are closed it is real.Yeah thats it .Yes you can do this Bette .come on now Tina is probably in the bathroom or in the kitchen making coffee.so just lay back and relax try to breath and relaxyes thats it .. as Bette falls back to sleepshe again starts dreaming of Tina and how they have made love for the past 36 hours.a smile comes across Bettes face.a very peaceful smile.she thinks to herself yes life is good..Tina is back and we still love each other more then ever..
Bette falls asleep.very happy.very content..knowing Tina was back in her lifeand just as soon as Bette thought Tina wasnt there.She was
.
Tina then leans over to Bette and starts to kiss her neck.licking a trail down to her *****. Bette starts to moanoh Tinathat feels so good baby..
Bette tell me what you want babe
Oh Tina all I want is youI want you all over this house.
You got me babe but please tell me how I can make you *****
I need you deep inside of me Tee.
With that Tina slides down and places 2 then 3 fingers deep inside of Bette and then starts to devour her *****. Bette starts to rock her hips into Tina..grinding moaning.Bette was real close and Tina knew this so she just worked even harder and faster and soon Bette was over the top. Not stopping Tina now bites down on Bette and is fisting her and now Bettes hips are almost air born as Tina brings Bette back for another organism . Bette just falls back on the bed .her eyes were trying to focus ,,,her breathing was labored..finally regaining her senses back Bette says give me a minute Tee and Ill return the favor.Tina slides up and just holds Bette telling her that she loves her. as they both drift off to sleep.a much need rest for the both of them.
Again Bette starts to stirsearching for Tina .no Tina.
She panics Tina Where are you baby.Tina please I need you
Bette Bette Im right here babe
Tina where???
Right here Bette open your eyes
No I cant.I open my eyes and your gone
Bette please open your eyes
Tina I love you.I have always loved you
I know Bette and I love you
Please forgive me Tina
Babe I forgave you a long time agoBette please trust me
As Tina lays down next to Bette
Babe can you feel me
Yeah I can
Good now you can do it babe..please open your eyes
Tina Im scaredevery time I open my eyes you are gone
Tina starts to Touch Bette.caressing her *****.pinching her nipples
Bette starts to moan
Come on Bette as Tina leans in to kiss her .leaving a trail of kisses to her neck and to that special spot on her collarbone.again Bette starts to moan
Tee ..oh my God
Bette Im here.Do you trust me?
Oh God yes
Then open your eyes
Bette with all of her strength slowly opens her eyes.trying to focus.then sees Tina lying next to her on the bed.She closes her eyes
Come on babe you know Im here
Bette opens her eyes and sees Tina smiling down at her
I told you I was hereTina then reaches out to hold Bette.
Oh Tina thank God you came back to me
Bette I never left you
Bette was now very confused
Tina we lost 7 years together.7 long years we were apart
Bette we didnt lose 7 years .7 months yes
Bette you had a very high feverthe last 3 days you were almost in a comagoing in and out .talking but not making any sense.today was the first time I actually understood what you were trying to say so the doctors told me if you started to come around to try to talk you back and it worked..
So your ok and were ok
Yes babe we are just fine
And Alice, Dana and Shane
Everybody is fine
I must say that you did scare the ***** out of me though
Tee I thought you left me and now it was 7 years after that nightEverybody fell apart because you left. No one knew where you were.I went to see Amanda and she told me you tried to kill yourself.the last 7 years I wasnt with anyone and either were youIt all seemed so real
Its ok Bette.you just relaxIm sure everything will fall back into place in your mind
As Tina hugs Bette.I love you Babe
I love you to TeeDid you know that you were an author of childrens books?
Really
Yeah ..pretty good at it tooYou wrote stories about 2 girls growing up Chris and Beth
I always wanted to write childrens books
I know thats why it all seemed so real
Well maybe when I go out on Maternity leave
WHAT
Yeah Bette ..I found out yesterdaywere pregnantAnd I promise no one else knows I waited for you to come back to me
As they both hug and kiss each other
Bette remembers everything now
It All came back to her
The love she almost threw away
They were stronger
They were better
They were having a baby.their baby
A new beginning
THEY WERE TOGETHER FOREVER
THE END
I really enjoyed the ride this story took me on. I did hit a couple of rough roads along the way and that ***** WRITER BLOCK camped out on my computer.but I was pushed through.(WINK WINK)
I hope you liked my ending Actually I wrote the ending first and filled in the other 11 chapters .Sorry if I teased you all a little too much.but damn it felt soooooo good to do that..THANK YOU ALL.
And since you all took the time to comment I can take the time to THANK each of you.
And if I missed anyone I am truly sorry.
ShellyIslandgirl.Sketcher.Katey471.GeorgiaT33..ImlovinitThe Reader…
BtluverJT.BtaddictHally..Tinawho..BVHall.Chasemenow.D-SG.
Breathless Mahoney.Lisa..KabbyJagerBomb(Buchcherry girl)..Techgal
Nzgrl..DaKoolOneAnkus.Nicole.Seal.Precious Shadow.Rayne.Lisa
Gimimi.S..Carolann.Anhat369Runnergirl..RosieJanet..ELK
TiBetteShipper..Lady Bug..Tyler..AlkmouseNicole Kelly.Leogrrl2
Cool Shadow..MochabronzioneDaltoncreative..Avid Reader..Gia..
Just Once..MadWoman..Martini..Down Low..CoachNickel..Gargy
AND IF I MAY A SPECIAL THANKS TO ONE SPECIAL LADY..WHO LIKED TO KICK MY ***** WHENEVER SHE SEEMED FIT TO DO SOLIZARD.(LIZ)
AGAIN THANK YOU ALL
AND NOW I AM OFF TO LAS VEGAS ON THURSDAY SO TO ALL OF THE WRITERS ON FAN/FICTION KEEP WRITING BECAUSE WE ALL WILL KEEP READING ..
SEE YOU IN SEPTEMBER..
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Amg enjoy your vacation be safe and have fun. I’m already on mine. Thanks for sharing your stories with us and hope to see u back on the board. Even your comments are fun to read. And I love the twist at the end.
This has been one of my very favorites – sorry to see it end.
You certainly had the wool pulled over my eyes. I fell for it sinker and all. Thanks for your time and working thru the writers block. Don’t spend too much money out there. Have fun!
another great story from an exceptional writter. very well done and i loved the ending!!
Thanks so much for your story. You are awesome! Have a great trip.
Great story Amanda. Have a great, safe trip. Good luck in Vegas! ; )
great job as always! Have a good time in Vegas. you know what they say…what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas…hahah..enjoy your well deserved vacation.
Wonderful ending! The entire story was wonderful…Don’t forget to go see the lights on Fremont Street…awesome.
Thank you so much for your story. You are wonderful. Enjoy your time away from all of us that read your stories.
Awesome story my friend…I have always enjoyed your stories and hope that you will continue once you come back….Have a great time in Las Vegas…PARTY HARD!! Gonna miss your imput on this website…..have an AWESOME time!!! :)
Great twist Amanda. Have fun in Vegas.
thank god amanda, they didn’t waste 7 years !!!, loved the end and baby on the way !!!,.
Have a great holiday and don’t gamble too much ;-)
glad you didn’t lose that remote! thanks for the thanks, & let me know if you want another kick. my pleasure! have a great vacation!
That was an excellent twist at the end there, Amanda..LOVED IT! Thanks very much for taking the time to share your story with us! Now you go on and have lotsa fun in Vegas..you deserve a good break!
Great ending! Have a great time in Vegas and win lots of money.
great ending (or should i say beginning since you started with it?)! enjoy vegas, WINK, WINK! win money & come back to write more. don’t have too much fun. you want to be able to sit down on the plane. keep that remote handy! love ya!
Great job as always. Have a fantastic vacation…tell Elvis we all said hello.
Thank you so very much for writing a very wonderful story. Just Beautiful! Enjoy your vacation!
Yes , Amanda, you go and have a great trip. You deserve it!! Look forward to more..
Thanks for the wonderful ending and for kicking that damn bitch of a writers block so you could keep on going when ever it showed up:) This was such a wonderful story and I’m so sad to see it end…but I enjoyed each and every part of it. Have a great time on your vacation…be safe and have fun!
So she was in a ooma and it was all a dream. Really good very nice twist. Enjoyed your whole series all of them. THANK YOU
That was great! I really enjoyed the series. Enjoy your vacation
Wow, so it was all Bette’s dream! That’s like the biggest teaser of them all! Hehe I loved this story, Amanda!! I’m looking forward to your next one, I hope writer’s block doesn’t give you too hard of a time!
I love your stories – please keep writing! What’s next?
Loved it!!! Don’t know how I missed it weeks ago…love how you wrapped it up and all the family is doing well…can’t wait for so much more from you!!!
Excellent ending. It was well written. Enjoying your other stories
THAT WAS AWESOME AND LOVE IT!