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Bette and Tina… The First Year of the Rest of Their Life…
Jill: Oh no worries honey, I am not upset, I knew he would go goo, goo gaa, gaa over you, it is just the beginning, I will have to go through this again when he sees Bette. Catch up with you later. Jill hugs and kisses Tina and runs off.
Bette is par oozing the front lawn admiring her decorative choices and waiting for Shane, Alice and Dana, Kit will arrive later to drive them home. Bette quite pleased with the party so far. There are a lot of people here tonight; it is going to be fun. Tina has cooked for days and I bought the booze, other drinks and went all out on the decorations. Tina loved the moving hand I purchased, especially last night, oh boy did she LOVE it last night. She almost peeled the paint off the walls with her screaming. Ok Bette enough of that, Tee already gave me a scolding for trying to take her down in the kitchen again.
Alice: Hey there, you unbelievable ***** thing. What are you waiting for, join your party, it looks great. Wow, can’t wait to get in there, that is quite the tight skinned outfit. Alice doesn’t know what to look at, Bette’s outfit or the action inside.
Shane Dana and Alice standing on the lawn with Bette admiring the decorations and the action from the front window.
Bette: Ok Alice you have stared enough go inside. Oh by the way Al what the ***** are you suppose to be.
Alice: What does it look like ?
Bette: Hmmmmmm, lets see, you are wearing a white T-shirt with a tire track up the middle and what looks like a squashed rodent on it. All I can say Al is you are completely and utterly sick. Bette walks towards the house shaking her head.
Alice: Well at least it is better then Dana’s outfit. Gee Dana, let me see, you are green and fuzzy, fat and have the word Dunlop written across your chest. Oh ya and you are a tennis player to boot, no one will figure it out.
Shane: Al just shut up, will you, sometimes I swear you two are married or something.
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(21 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Janice… it was very well done… and like i said my pleasure… loved what you did… and i’m blushing.. you really put me in this story… ok i’m off TRICK OT TREATING WITH MY DAUGHTER… so i’ll talk to you later…
nice party, i tried to visualize all the costumes, Bette and Tina surely looked hot
Great party! very nice Janice :)
very nice(“,)
Great Party, Glad you had George and Amanda at the party. Glad Bette and the old faithful watch dog Shane to look atfter Tina and Lisa. Wendy isn’t done yet Lisa and Tina should go to the police. She is a sicko. Thanks so much for letting .amanda take Mary Grace Trick or Treating tonight. Hope to see you as on of our writer soon. Thanks
Janice and Amanda, great chapter and great party. I think you should write your own story. You write very well. And Amanda, it was good to let us see the talent of Janice, but you since you didn’t write this one, you still owe us one. Post soon!
Hey Janice, you did a great job with this party/chapter. Please do keep writing. Our 2 lovely ladies sure seems hot…and that’s why they can’t keep their hands off of each other.!!!I’m with bettyvhall that Wendy is not done. Psycho has something else planned… can’t wait to see her getting her butt kicked.
TRICK OR TREAT – what a treat we have here …thanks Janice – great chapt
I got a nice treat after the kids got their candy tonight nice job janice will you be posting your own story soon
now why do never go to parties like that one. great job!
wow, very goodya had me on the edge of my seatya had me laughing and best of all no cliffy
That was really awesome Janice.I loved it.
Janice, loved this one. Thanks for this exciting chapter and YOU DID A GREAT JOB with it. Amanda and now you are teaching me a lot of things and the girls were hot and more sexy than usual. The next chpater should be continuing this party with Bette giving Tina a nice surprise at the party’s end. Psycho Wendy should also be getting her due as well. I hope you guys let Kit, Shane, Bette, Tina and Lisa whip the you know what out of Wendy, then turn her over to the police.Thanks again for a great chapter. Amanda where is the rest of it?