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Bette and Tina… The First Year of The Rest of Their Life…ch.85
Bette: Oh God Tee… I’ll never forget it please don’t make me wait long
Tina: you will wait as long as I see fit slave again leaving her mark on her other shoulder moving over to her nipples… she takes one into her mouth as she devours it taking as much of her breast in her mouth as she can and then doing the same to the other as Tina was riding her leg she was so close herself but she wanted to prolong this so she stops and slides up and sits on Bette’s face “Eat me” Bette dives into her Dripping Hot ***** as Tina is ***** her tongue she came fast and hard Bette was drinking her love juice As Tina falls back and rolls off and again their lips meet for a lustful kiss Tina tasting herself on Bette’s tongue and cleaning up the side of her face
Bette: Oh baby I love it when you do that to me
Tina: Looking into her eyes they both feel their hearts also smile We just got side tracked for a few minutes now where was I Looking at the love of her life on their bed naked for her eyes only oh yeah I remember kissing and licking all around her belly button and getting closer to the Promised Land Tina could smell Bette’s ***** she was dripping down her thighs Tina gets in between her legs and her tongue just circles her opening Bette is moaning grinding trying to get closer but Tina just circled and occasionally she would touch her ***** making Bette’s hips buck sliding 2 finger in and out very slowly as her tongue was still teasing her ***** her fingers would go in as far as she could reach and then she sucked in her *****… as Bette was pounding on the bed
Back at the Planet
Alice: well ***** it I’m going its 7:15 close enough and besides Lisa is probably there with James so they can’t be doing anything
Dana: we better go with her Shane
Shane: yeah she might need someone to hold Bette so she doesn’t kick her *****
Alice: Cute you guys Cute
Back at the house the girls arrive and the door is open
Alice: See they knew we would be a little early
In the Bedroom
Bette is grinding her hips into Tina moaning she starts to scream OHHHH MYYYY GGOOODDD TEEEEEEEEE yeah baby I”MMMMMMMM CUMMMMMIIINNN
Alice: what was thatit sounded like a scream walking fast toward the bedroom and opening the door
Bette: Begging now Pleas Teeeeee I can’t take any morePLEASE.. STOPPPPPPPPPP
ALICE STOPS DEAD IN HER TRACKS WITH DANA AND SHANE RIGHT ON HER HEELS
Both Tina and Bette look over to the door
Shane: OH ***** ME
TBC
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Hello Amanda: I throughly enjoy everything that you write for us to read. Number”13:? I’m impressed. I am in between baking a couple of french bread, reading your wonderful chapter, my meat sauce simmering for my lasagna for which i will have for dinner. Just thought I would sahre that little tid bit with you. I know that my sauce isn’t as good as an Italian cook that you are, but we all try. Have a great Sunday and I’ll IM you later we can discuss sauces or what ever the topic may be. Excellent job as always.
first of all…13 times??????Geezz James is the MAN and Lisa has a credit too..lol..second Alice will die..really Bette is going to murder her..great chapter as always Amanda..and in Brazil is hot as hell to
OK, it one thing to listen at the door, but to go into someone’s bedroom when the door is closed—-me thinks NOT. Alice is in so much trouble as well as pure shock. I think that both Bette and Tina will initically be embarrassed, but will later say that they don’t care because they love each other so much and love to make love to each other. But after sharing the news about thier new house, they will deffently keep the doors locked.
I loved Tina’s “Your mine and don’t you forget it” as she marks both of Bette’s shoulder. Marks that I am sure that Bette will display around the girls with pride. Something that none of them especially Alice has seen on Bette before.
Now, for James and Lisa—-You Go BOY, way to hold it down. Not that he had any worries, but after that I am sure that Lisa is not going anywhere. Who the MAN, he be the MAN. Who the MAN, he be the MAN.
Wow! I am left speechless! This one was hot!!! What do I say? You really are the Queen of NC-17. Reading your stuff makes me blush!! I can’t believe you made the girls walk in on them going at it. What’s next?
No problem Amanda.That was hot just like NY weather this summer,
Been hot here in Texas,got rain today cool off a wee bit. but a a flood couldn’t cool off that bedroom scene. Noone can write that like you can. Alice can alway get in trouble and she drags poor Shane and Dana in to it.Bette is going to be MAD and Alice is in deed shit as always.. Hey after shouldsurgery and two knee replacements I feel great and can set at the pc again. so look for me more often THANK
Damn. I bet Alice feels stupid now. Just b/c the sorr is unlocked that doesnt ean walk right in. RESPECT!!! You have to update soon, like now!!! I cant wait to see who beats Alice’s ass.
Hehe of course Alice would barge right into the ‘rabbits’ bedroom when she hears screaming.
It’s not your fault, Amanda. No worries! We’re just happy that you’re posting!! :D “Ready or not Ms. Porter… here you CUM…” LOVE that line! HAHAHA Great chapter!!
Damm where is the camera at when you need it.
lol this is great I can’t wait to see what alice says next or how Bette and Tina react… :o) great chapter as always…
Loved it as always……..Cant wait to see how Bette reacts!
Alice is in trouble…..Very hot….Great chapter as always!
LOL! HA HA HA WHOA! Amanda that was so funny and Hot OK now your talking writing about funny it’s Awesome LOL! Hey I Love it Thanks Please continue.
Amanda, I love your story!!!! This great story is hotter than the Boston weather the last few days!!! Please post soon.
Well now Alice knows that Tina can take control. But, oh, poor poor Alice, Bette is going to be so mad. Love your story
Very HOT Amanda. THis chapter is great. cant wait to hear what everyone has to say about the show they just witnessed. great B&T loving.
Well you can’t leave the door open as you don’t want strays to wander in. These strays are going to get a boot in tne butt by Porter. Hot and sexy, your the best at the NC………..
What now Amanda we have to wait a week, you are such a tease……
LADIES I HAVE NO CLUE AS TO WHY THE CHAPTERS FUCKED UP… AND I CAN’T FIX IT… I TRIED
IT DOES THE SAME THING… SORRY
great manda just great… and girls… lolol… so what happen next….