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BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR… part 1
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Henry: your home early… I hope they don’t dock your pay
Tina: they won’t
Henry: I told my cleaning lady she was fired… I can save money not paying her
Tina: what… hey I work full time too… I wish you would have at least talked it over with me…
Henry: hey listen… I’m the man… I’m not your cunt girlfriend… you listen to me… and do as i say…
Tina: I told you not to call her that…
Henry: you bitches are all alike… just keep my house clean… and be ready to be fucked every night… that’s all you have to worry about… now I’m going out… as the door slams behind him…
That night he came in drunk… and was pissed when he couldn’t get it up and blamed Tina… for not knowing how to keep him hard…
Thursday morning
Tina drops the baby at Bette’s
Bette: Tina starting Monday… I have a job… so you will have to arrange for day care
Tina: Bette we both agreed to have one of us home at all times with the baby while the other worked…
Bette: yes we did… but that was when she was our baby… you made it crystal clear that she is your baby… I’m just helping you out…
Tina: thanks Bette… so glad we’ve being adult about all of this…
Bette: Tina its only Thursday… I’m sure you have some friends that will help you
Tina: No Bette… since I’m not with you… I guess I have no friends…
Bette: you better leave… you’ll be late… you wouldn’t want to get fired
Tina leaves… pissed… arriving at work… Helena is there
Annie: we have a meeting
Tina: good… there are a few things I want to also say…
Walking into the meeting… Peggy Peabody was also there…
Peggy: Tina… how good to see you again… and how’s Bette and that beautiful baby of yours
Tina: Peggy… what a wonderful surprise… the baby is fine… but Bette and I broke up… I’m now living with a man…
Helena chokes on her coffee
Helena: Tina what did you say
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Amanda, so glad you’re back and well enough to help keep our girls together! Take care of yourself.
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Definitly see alot of writers getting their frustrations out about the show. This was kind of like a bizarro l-word times 2. Very chathartic read after last night’s episode, but I don’t think Tina would take this even as she’s being written by IC now.
Hey Amanda, thanks for the story. Just get it all out, it helps all of us. Where is Tina going to go now? Does she still like Men? Can’t wait until the next chapppy.
love your version of the man…it is so my ex-husband…I thank god everyday that I am a lesbian..and I’m NEVER going back. I hope you are feeling better and keep taking the drugs.
Hey AmandaMG, It’s great to see you back. Wow!! Poor Tina. She’s find out that the grass always looks greener on the other side of the mountain. She had a good thing with Bette and took it for granted. She jumped out of the frying pan and into a fire. And that’s always a hard lesson to learn. I hope Bette and the girls have some forgiving feelings for her in the future.
amanda i am with you. ic can kiss my ass! reading this story will give me a little solace after that scene last night. tina is so getting on my nerves. keep writing, i love your style.
let it all out amanda and welcome back
wow thats some shit right there..cant wait for the next post
Glad you’re feeling better.
Hey Lady,IC needs some of your Mrds. Love this. When you writer get frf up you get fed up. Tina is such a sad figure right now. We all love L Holloman It IC we are angry with. All men are not like Henry [He might really be a nice guy,but he did sleep in Bette house with Tinas baby in the house.That is a No No. The gang is really upset with Tina. Sad thanks
Amanda, glad to see you’re back and writing up a storm. We won’t even bother to mention the show. I loved this, but don’t over do it now! Take care of yourself.
So glad to see you back and so soon. Bully for you, girl! And in fine fettle I see.
Welcome back!!! Loved your take on Henry. Did I remember to say, “Welcome back?”
Amanda so happy to have you back and writing. This was a good one and sad as it is that is all a great possibility. MEN!!!! Hope Tina has learned her lesson. Wonder if Bette will take her back? Again, glad to have you back. Thanks for this post.
Welcome back, Amanda! Wow, that was a tough one to read I won’t lie about that. Fuckin’ IC. I came on today hoping to find some updates to my favorite stories and it seems ep. 309 really killed some spirits out there. I sat there and cried at the end. I’m trying to think of how I want to get my thoughts out there but it’ll probably be a 1 chapter story that is so silly and dumb that it’ll make S3 look good. I hope you continue to get better.
Hey Amanda good to see you back and hope you will get well soon. Damn poor Tina hope she learn her lesson and where are she go now. Let see how Bette react to this. Ok post soon please, thanks!
happy that your back–i agree with you last night show was terrible ( i love laural) but i think aliens have taken over tina don’t know her at all–bette shouldn’t be walked on either (no girlfriends for her) they just need to really talk i don’t think they have at all just move around each other can’t figure what ic is doing–going to miss the next 3 shows i’ll be out of town and no one has showtime please fix our girls i’ll catch up in a few weeks
Glad to see you back girl. I’m pissed with the show and we don’t even have it in the UK yet. Sure not looking forward to S3 anymore.
Sweet Jesus woman…your feeling better then??LOL..And for that im truly happy,its great to see you back…So did writting that make you feel even better???I actually had to laugh cause ive never seen anyone take it out on Tina like that….The show is making so many people angry,sad,and downright pissed off!!!But we still have this site and writters like youself to look forward to… cause god knows IC hasnt given us much of anything!!!Thanks looking forward to more from ya!
henry seems like a nice guy on the showbut he is no bette porter, they both jumped into something without getting to no one another. i think henry is really going to hurt tina and break herheart and then she will realize that she wants to spend the rest of her life with bette. but will bette be there like she said.
I’m glad to hear you’re doing so well. This T is a B*^$#! When she goes home to B she should find B in bed with a drop dead georgeous woman. This alternate storyline is driving me nuts! And you girl – you get healthy for yourself, your family, and all your fans out there including me :)
Amanda,Fabulous to have you back where you belong; writing wonderful TiBette fan fiction. Your light and delicate touch has been missed. My prayers are winging their way to you, hoping that you continue this brilliant tale. Many, many thanks for keeping the dream alive. Your Loyal Fan.
Yikes, Amanda, I didn’t know guys like this still existed. Soooo glad you are doing okay – pleeeease keep writing on this one. Take care!
Glad your back and doing well keep us updated take care!!!!
amanda glad you are back and well please keep these to together and look after yourself
glad to see you back=) i’m a tibetteshipper all the way!
Welcome back Amanda, what a difference a week makes. So happy you are back entertaining us again. Please take care of your self. We miss you when you aren’t here.
Welcome back Amanda! Hope you’re ok! Well this was interesting. Tina got what she deserved, but we all know she’ll end up with Bette again right? Well can’t wait for the next chapter! Take care!
Welcome Back!! So glad you are feeling better. Hmmm, guess there’s no wondering if you liked the last episode…LOL. I love L. Holloman and I think she’s doing a great job with what IC is giving her…I just don’t really like the character Tina right now. And like you…I’m a devoted TiBetter…God help us all. LOL. I’m glad you’re getting better..you’re still in my prayers. And I’m glad you’re venting…always a good thing. ;-)