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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 11: THE DARE
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Tina was aroused, not only the soft skin but the reaction of the brunette, wailing, she senses Bette’s heart is beating fast, her body is arching and surrendering to Tina’s touches ‘oh my God, I never thought she’ll make me feel like that’
They released their lips for air.
Tina: (husky voice) “oh my God, I wanted this since the first time I saw you”
Bette: (gasping) “when was that?”
Tina: “that evening in the Planet, when you were hitting on Brenda”
Bette: “I wasn’t hitting on her, I was just asking”
Tina: “I felt uneasy; I thought it was for her, now I know it was you”
Bette is very horny hearing Tina’s declaration, she wants more, and suddenly she flipped Tina over and pressed her against the wall.
Bette: (aroused) “I want you; I wanted you since I saw you…”
They kissed again, this time there was not restrains and the kiss became deeper while Bette’s hands moved down to Tina’s hips and thighs. Though Tina was used to this type of reaction from some of her lovers, there was an intense feeling in Tina’s insides, a sense of déjà vu; the blonde’s memories traveled to 10 years ago, the brief moments of happiness and deep pain, the pain that torn her soul.
The blonde’s breath is intense and fast as the kiss and Bette’s hands take possession of her, in a second of weakness, Tina opened her legs allowing Bette’s knee in between, the brunette took control, pushing up and Tina began rubbing her core back and forth on the brunette’s knee. After a few seconds, Tina was overwhelmed and about to orgasm without having Bette inside her; softly she breaks the kiss and hides her faces in the brunette’s neck and shoulder whilst moving her hands on the brunette’s ass.
Bette: “we need to go to a private place”
Tina: “huh…”
Bette: “I have a bungalow here …, no, we better go farther…, I need to be with you all the weekend…, we need to know each other completely…, I want you to trust me …, deeply…”
Tina takes Bette’s hands and lifts them to her face kissing.
Tina: (hesitant) “yeah…, I like that…, I really want to be with you…, but not now…, the party… your friends and mine…”
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Hola proteonomics me encantó el capítulo siempre tus historias me dejan con ganas de leer más gracias buen capitulo esperando que subas el otro
Hola Escorpion:
Feliz Año Nuevo.
Gracias por tus palabras, y por seguir esta historia. Yo he estado subiendo los capitulos especialmente por los lectores que como tu me lo han pedido, por suerte he estado de vacaciones. Pero mis vaciones de fin de año estan terminando y mi tiempo disponible para escribir es menor.
Yo espero subir otro capitulo en dos semanas, pero si puedo lo hare antes.
Gracias de nuevo por tu comentario y tu apoyo.
Tina…Tina. How could you postpone a night with Bette after that dance, walk on the beach and make out session? This “slow ….slowly” business is driving me to the showers! Get together with Bette and tell her everything and allow Bette to tell you everything. So many of things you could help each other with. So many mutual goals you could accomplish. You need to be together!!!
Great Story… the Dare was nothing like I thought it would be. This was an impressive scenario. and your writing was great. This story is coming along nicely. Most of Tina’s friend Maura is backing down from her original analysis of Bette now that she sees the changes in Bette’s behavior.
Now what is Jody and Kelly up to? And what can Aaron be thinking now that he has witnessed Bette and Tina’s Dare competition? He’s a fool if he doesn’t think he will come face to face with Bette at some point in the future.
Great…Great Chapter…. waiting for more.
Martha
Hi Martha:
Happy New Year.
Yes, I was also pulling my hairs about Tina’s attitude on the beach, yes she was very horny as it was Bette, but she had lots of hard experiences and has an incredible control when it’s about the safety and life of someone she loves, she has done that for her godmother, but that is another story that will be told in very later chapters.
What we learn from this is that Tina is very in love with Bette, and she may not how and when it happened because she was all the time in denial and the same happens with Bette, now it’ll start a new game for them.
Another thing we learn here is how women can support each other, not only Bette and Tina but the friends on each side support them.
Now we have to give them some time to woo each other, remember this is something they don’t know very well, for Bette perhaps it’s a little easier than for Tina who goes easily from friends to one-night stands.
Another thing that we see here is that Aaron is desperate and scared, he is asking her allied Fay Buckley for help, and some scorned exes of Bette will be dragged in this game.
Well, the worse hard times for our couple have passed for now.
Thanks for your valuable comments, Martha.
P
Hi proteonomics,
Happy New Year ????
Wow, what a long chapter and that dare that Bette choose, amazing and sexy!
Tina is a match for Bette, she was very bold and turned Bette in a Pussycat ????
I can’t wait to see Aaron being fired, he is a total asshole along with his supposed friends, treating that Melvin take all from Bette, he knows that Tina is about to expose everything, but he don’t know that she has all the files. He is in trouble and even more a slimy asshole (sorry, my favourite word for him ????) Faye is trying to plot something with help of the two most annoying girls in the world, Jodi and Kelly. Sure hope that will backfire!
Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter. Enjoy the free days you still have!
Hi Bibi:
Happy New Year.
Yes, this is a long chapter, initially, I was going to split it but I decided to leave it like that because the next will be posted in two weeks, though if I can I’ll post sooner.
Well, in civilized times like the current moments, dares are less brutal than like 100 or 1000 years ago, but still are hard, and this dare was especial; the reason why Bette chose this song is that it was the first song she danced with Randy and made her hornier than she was that evening 10 years ago, and Randy danced it batter than her, and it brought a little deja vu for her, and for Tina too.
I’m sorry, you’ll need to wait to see Aaron fired because now is time for the mating game between Tina and Bette, and additionally they need to discover who are they and how to heal their wounds. They need to prepare themselves for the fight.
Question is who is Fay and what the hell she is doing allied with Aaron?
Okay, I stop my clues and will rest a little (btw that story of DBFF “what happened” it’s super great, I’m starting reading too)
Thanks, my friend for reading and your wonderful comments.
P
Bibi28
I get to the point where I enjoy your comments almost as much as the Stories :-)
SG
Wow, what a sweet compliment. Thank you my friend ????
Happy new Year!
Thank you for posting this extra long Chapter. Enjoyed it tremendously!
Looking forward to your next post continuing this Story
SG
Hi SG:
Happy New Year.
I’m glad that you liked the chapter, sorry it was too long, as I said, it’s long because I may not post in two weeks, I hope that the long journey of those 10 previous chapters will be compensated with this new part of the story, just have a little patience, please, with this teasing writer
Thank you, SG for reading and commenting.
P
Nothing from you is too long!
Patiently waiting!,
SG