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    Are You Gonna Finish That? – Part 7 — Sequel To Satin Sheets

    Story written on October 27, 2004 by cramit.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=50043
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    Breakfast Part 3: What’s a Bette to do?

    So focused was she on the heated look Tina was giving her, she didnt have time to register Tinas hand coming from behind her back and sliding along her inner thigh. Only when the coolness of the strawberry touched the heat of her swollen lips, did Bettes body respond properly to what was happening.


    Letting her head drop forward to watch as Tina slowly stroked her with the cool, red fruit, Bette felt her ***** hardening, her nipples hardening, her stomach clenching as the rest of her turned soft and pliant. Gasping out a moan, Bette was helpless to do anything but spread her legs further, reaching one hand forward to tangle in Tina’s hair, tightening her fingers as she watched her raise the strawberry to her lips. Pursing her own lips in reflex, Bette felt her chest constrict as Tina ran the tip of the strawberry, glistening with her wetness, along her own lips before sliding the fruit into her mouth, groaning at the taste.


    Chewing slowly, Tina tossed the stem carelessly into the sink next to them, leaned forward and braced her hands on either side of Bettes thighs. Tilting her head slightly, she ran her tongue along the edge of Bettes bottom lip, closing her lips and sucking gently. As Tina swallowed the last bite, she brought her thumbs up to rub slowly against Bettes nipples, glancing down at the wetness apparent between her wifes legs.


    You want some?


    Bette could only clench her jaw as a groan was torn from her chest. Arching her back further into Tinas hands, Bette barely breathed out a Please.


    Dropping one hand from Bettes nipples, Tina brought the tips of two fingertips to play along Bettes wetness. Rubbing lightly on her *****, Tina kept her gaze focused on those fingers.


    Yeah?


    Please


    Tina moved those fingers a little lower, pushing in slowly, closing her eyes as she felt her fingertips enveloped in wet heat. Reaching up, she grabbed the back of Bettes neck with her free hand, drawing her into a raw kiss, maintaining the stillness of her fingers as she fought for dominance within Bettes mouth. Breaking free just as quickly as she had grabbed Bette, Tina moved her fingers further in, sliding back out slowly and pushing in again, deeper with each pass.


    Here?


    God, Tinayes. Bette whispered, unable to draw a deep breath as her stomach stayed clenched, releasing only when Tina pulled her fingers out. She couldnt believe that she was naked on the countertop, her thighs spread wide as she accepted Tinas slow thrusts and the only thing she could think about was that she wanted more. More of that wicked mouth, talking to her, touching her, driving her crazy. More of those fingers opening secrets inside her that only Tina knew how to reach. And as she watched Tina turn nonchalantly and retrieve the bowl of fruit, the wetness on her fingers glistening in the morning sun, Bette knew without a doubt that there would never be another. Tina owned her, heart, body and soul and Bette felt her heart beat a little faster as this truth was once again recognized.


    Moving back towards Bette, Tina caught the intense look focused her way. Putting the bowl down on the counter, Tina reached forward, cupping Bettes face in her hands, smoothing her thumbs over perfect cheekbones as Bettes hands came to rest on her hips.


    Baby. Tina questioned softly, noting with relief the small smile gracing that luscious mouth.


    Bette pulled forward on Tinas hips, bringing their bodies closer, and closed the distance between their lips. Kissing her wife softly, Bette answered Tina, deepening the kiss with each word.


    SokayI justI love you, Tso much. Slowly reaching her hands up to take a hold of Tinas. Placing one at her hip and guiding the other between her thighs.


    I want youtouch meTina. Unable to get any more than that out as Tina claimed her lips again, fingers moving of their own accord, stroking deep inside where Bette ached the most. Bette hooked her fingers over the edge of the counter, pulling her hips closer to the fire Tina was creating with her hand.


    Tina for her part, couldnt reach deep enough, couldnt kiss Bette hard enough to convey all that she was feeling. Experiencing a brief moment of panic, wondering if shed ever be able to be close enough. But feeling Bette move against her, feeling the passion with which Bette was kissing her back, knowing that the wetness that was coating her fingers and Bettes thighs was just another expression of Bettes love for her, Tina felt something shift and settle within her. If there was one thing Tina knew without question, it was how to love her wife.


    Groaning softly as Bette caressed her mouth with that talented tongue, Tina slowed the pace of her fingers, trying to get both hers and Bettes desire under control. Slowly pulling her mouth away, Tina gazed intently at Bettes eyes, taking in the flushed cheeks and swollen lips. Tina slid her fingers slowly against Bettes *****, keeping up just enough pressure to keep her on the edge.


    I love you too, baby. Placing one soft kiss against Bettes bottom lip.


    Tina reached over and watched as Bettes eyes widened, comprehension dawning as she realized where that hand was headed. Answering Bettes smile with her own, Tina leaned in and whispered against Bettes ear.


    Now, let me show you..

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    2. Are you trying to kill me? This is much too much but not enough–please post again soon. Cramit your imagination is dangerously sexy and your writing is exceptional. OMG SPEECHLESS is right.

    4. UNBELIEVABLE, again!!! My wish for you is that you are basing this on your own experience because it is SO good! I think I need to put a nitro tablet under my tongur now and recover!! Thanks

    6. How do you do it,crammit? You are always so funny and dramatic when you leave comments on other stories. But, you can write very smoking hot damn sexy chapters. Do you have multiple personalities? If you do, I just love them all:)

    9. You send me to bed happy this morning after your last chapter Cramit, and I now I get to wake up to this! I don’t think the day could get much better, unless maybe you put another chapter up tonight….Please. :)

    12. Oh my god, people, please don’t pass out and die on me. That’s not what I want. I want you to calmly enjoy this. Like a breath of fresh air. *ahhhhhhh* :D

      *lol* Glad you guys like it. There’s more coming.

      (and nice “from” fizzle. *LOL*)

    17. Tina ran the tip of the strawberry, glistening with her wetness, along her own lips before sliding the fruit into her mouth, groaning at the taste.

      Tina ran the tip of the strawberry, glistening with her wetness, along her own lips before sliding the fruit into her mouth, groaning at the taste.

      I am dead. I died and went to heaven after reading the above sentence. Have not been able to finish the rest of this chapter. I am stuck on:

      Tina ran the tip of the strawberry, glistening with her wetness, along her own lips before sliding the fruit into her mouth, groaning at the taste.

      It is like my cursor is refusing to move further. It is enjoying the sheer eroticism of the phrase and the visual it is providing.. Let me repeat it again:

      Tina ran the tip of the strawberry, glistening with her wetness, along her own lips before sliding the fruit into her mouth, groaning at the taste.

      I will be back. Lord have mercy on my soul.

    20. Tina owned her, heart, body and soul and Bette felt her heart beat a little faster as this truth was once again recognized.

      What are you saying? What about Teddy? :) (Spartacus, I love you, but that sentence rocks!)

      Good Lord Cramit.. Where do you come up with this? You need your own school of American Literature:) That was smoking and off the charts. Fuck!

    21. ok, i normally don’t leave two comments on one story, but i closed down the site, did the dinner thing, came back and reread this. the first time i read it i was speechless, now reading it again, i nearly rolled my chair from under me leaning so close to the screen to see if i read it right… “She couldn’t believe that she was naked on the countertop, her thighs spread wide as she accepted Tina’s slow thrusts and the only thing she could think about was that she wanted more. More of that wicked mouth, talking to her, touching her, driving her crazy. More of those fingers opening secrets inside her that only Tina knew how to reach. And as she watched Tina turn nonchalantly and retrieve the bowl of fruit, the wetness on her fingers glistening in the morning sun…” omg, cramit, i’m close to selling my soul to buy a plane ticket to come where you are and experience this in action with you! wow, girl! thanks for this new chapter, post soon, i want to know where that hand is heading and what it is gonna do to me…err, i mean bette. :D

    22. *blushing* I think I need to be careful writing these stories. I keep leaving people speechless and there won’t be any comments. I will make the next part only “R” rated. Esta bien? :D

    24. Within the confines of my own house I sat down on the lazy boy recliner with the knowledge that I was safe. Nothing could go wrong here I thought. I sat back and powered on the laptop. I got to “Here?” “God, Tina….yes

      And then it happened. The baby started to cry. How did she do that? How did she know what I was doing, where this story was taking me. Its like she has a six sense or something. Frustrated again….

      Cramit I am forever humbled by your talent. Bravo.

    26. YEEESH! cramit, i highly recommend that you include a ‘WARNING: not for readers with heart problems’ in the disclaimer of your stories, because girrrrrrrl, this is givingme palpitations! absoluuutely wonderful. i will never be able to look at breakfast foods, especially STRAWBERRIES the same way again….keep the buffet coming, and THANK YOU!!!!!

    28. OMG Cramit you really know how to make a girl jump sides don’t you. I’m going to share something here ok. After reading this I decied to call this girl that has been chasing me and well what can I say I wont be looking back after my new found experiance. And I have you to thank for it. Please post again you are Fantastic

    29. Tina: Strawberries? Did her with that.
      What else is in season? Let’s see…

      I’m sure DelMonte doesn’t know how their fruit is being used, do they? Imagine the ads: ‘finger-licking good!’

    30. Is there going to be banana’s involved in this?!?

      Wait don’t answer that…..
      Great I have to have a cold shower now!! But HELL was it worth it!!!
      thanx for the effort, awesome chapter!!

    31. I’m totally with str8…I never really got past the strawberry…my eyes just kinda glazed over and I fell out of my chair after that!…oh, did I mention I’m at work?…yeah, my co-workers are a tad concerned lol!…
      …love it, love it, love it!!!!

    32. I hope you guys don’t light the torches and gather the pitchforks but I’m afraid there will be no update tonight. :( The end of my work day was a mothereffer and I forgot to forward my most recent edited version of the chapter I was working on to my email. So I can’t get it from home. Well, the story at least. *ba dump bump* J/K I will however, properly flay myself and will post the update tomorrow. :)

    34. Okay Cramit, I’ve read your stories off and on and I must agree that you do need a hobby (lol). You have a fantastic way of describing in such granular detail the intensity of each moment they share. I’m thinking that these two HAVE to be independently wealthy because they never seem to leave the house. They make love ALL THE TIME. Your descriptions should be illegal in all 50 states, for real. I like to read about people expressing themselves in such an erotic, intimate, and passionate way. Call me a prude, but hearing someone say “Fuck me” or “I wanna fuck you” isn’t that sexy or a turn on. Thanks for maintaining such a passionate means of expression. So, when’s the next chapter?

    35. *LOL* @ Techie. :P I was gonna go with the watermelon but that’s just waaaaaay too messy.

      And imlovinit, no, no bananas. I promise. Just cause, well, yuck. *lol*

      Chase, sorry about the interruption but your post made me crack up. :D

      Blu–Nah, they’ll leave the house soon. :D It’s really only been one long morning. I’ve just drawn it out over 1600 chapters. *LOL* Though hell, if I was either one of them, I wouldn’t want to leave the house either. ;) And I’m glad you agree with me about the hobby because that is so true. :D

      Thanks for all the compliments, guys. You all make me feel wonderful and make the effort of racking my brain to come up with different ways to say “slowly” and “vaginal lubrication”, worth it. ;) *lol*

      Next chapter will be up tonight. I promise.

    39. Waaaaaaaathaaaaaafaaaaaack
      that was sheer genius. food and sex? Hellz to the yeah! You absolutely floor me. Thank thank thank you for writing this. Keep it coming! No pun intended!!

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