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Angelica & The Artist – Chapter 24
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Angie was deeply concerned that this was a whole lot to deal with so soon into their relationship………“Are you sure you are ready to do that?”
“No, I’m actually scared to death.”
“How do you think they will react? Especially if you tell your Dad it’s me that you are in love with?”
“I don’t honestly know. They have always been open minded and taught me to accept people for who they were without judgment or criticism. I can only hope that they practice what they preach.”
“Lynds, maybe I should come down there and be with you when you tell them.”
“No, I think this is something that I need to do on my own. Thank you, but it’s time for me to let them know that I am not their little girl anymore, and that I have found someone very special that I want to build a life with.”
Angelica heard the words she had longed to hear, but her reality was that there were so many obstacles to overcome if they were truly going to be together. “You really see us long term?”
Lyndsay looked and Angelica with concern written all over her face…..and with a voice that reflected anything but confidence in their future she hesitantly stated “Yeah, don’t you?”
“Lynds, it’s not that I don’t want to, but there are so many obstacles to overcome.”
“I know, but I also know that I have found something very rare and something very special. No one has ever made me feel the way you do. I felt it the very first time you kissed me. It was like my whole body was on fire; there was a surge of electricity going through it that no one had ever created before.”
“I know Lynds……I felt it too. I just didn’t want to get my hopes up. No one has ever made me feel the way you do either. Not that I have dated a lot, but I’ve dated enough to know that what I have with you is not something you find everyday. I really want to do everything I can to make this work.”
With a renewed confidence, Lyndsay replied “Then we will just have to make sure that it does.”
The two continued to just stare deep into the others eyes. No further words were spoken on the subject, none were needed. Their discussion then turned to Angie’s Mom and Lyndsay’s Dad having dated in high school. Both girls were in shock at this revelation from the previous night. They shared a few laughs at the irony of the whole situation.
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nice! finally Angelica setting the rules. u just gotta looove the Porter women XD.Pps
I love the way you write the interactions between characters. I could feel the tension in the room between Bette and Angie. PPS
Taz, it’s just fun reading the interaction between the Porter women. You could just feel the tension between Angie and Bette. No matter how you look at it, Bette went against her daughter’s wishes and betrayed her. She’s lucky Angie’s even in the same room with her. I’m glad Tina is the voice of reason between these two. Can’t wait for more conversation. PPS
Damn TazG, that was very good, the tension was palpable. Thank goodness for Tina, always the peacemaker for the entire family. Bette’s passion will always get her in trouble and, of course, she does not recognize that Angie is a younger version of herself at that age, and is just as passionate and stubborn as Bette is and was. And until Bette recognizes this they will always butt heads. Maybe Tina can make Bette see the wisdom in following Angie’s requests in the future. Great chapter. PPS
Taz my friend. Great new chapter. I really love this story, thanks for posting another chapter. Soooo goood to come home to after my wife and been out for dinner with parents. Stressful or what? Thanks again Taz.Karen x
Wow Taz, you turned around that whole mother daughter thing, as it should have been with a grown daughter. Thank you, Md
Tazzie!!!! I know I know, I’ve been SOOO bad with the email, the IM, all of it…BUT here I am! ;-))) Topping you no less! This story speaks volumes to me, and for personal reasons which you know of. The willingness to depart from familial ties and expectations to seek love and that which is driven by heart and soul is a difficult stance to take, but so worth it in the end. This line which Lyndsay tells Angelica in response to Angie’s offer to go with her as Lyndsay tells her family she has fallen in love with a woman, “No, I think this is something that I need to do on my own. Thank you, but it’s time for me to let them know that I am not their little girl anymore, and that I have found someone very special that I want to build a life with,” is absolutely spectacular. The foundation of courage can make spectacular things happen, and it reminds me of Theodore Roosevelt’s speech at Sorbonne Paris in 1910. “It is not the critic who counts: not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles or where the doer of deeds could have done better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood, who strives valiantly, who errs and comes up short again and again, because there is no effort without error or shortcoming, but who knows the great enthusiasms, the great devotions, who spends himself for a worthy cause; who, at the best, knows, in the end, the triumph of high achievement, and who, at the worst, if he fails, at least he fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who knew neither victory nor defeat.” Yep, a powerful chapter indeed my friend, and brilliant writing as always. Talk to you soon girl. {{hugs}}
Way to go Angie, your not a kid anymore and Bette has got to learn to respect that. Now and for Lyndsay, give her some time, she’s carrying the main load here. Hopefully her family will be understanding, and then Ang and Lyndsay can start being together. I bet Ang goes to SC cos she just can’t take being away.
Wow…Porter vs Porter and Angie delivered the knock out punch! Great update Taz!
Hey, Tazzie! *waving with enthusiasm* This chappy was brilliant! Wow! You certainly know how to make Angie and Linds talk with honesty and you can feel the tension growing, because of the long distance relationship. As for Angie, asking moma B to respect her as an individual, and stop treating her as a child, it was just the finest confrontation between daughter-mother that we have ever read. In the end, you make us feel that Angie has to stand by herself and make her mom realize she steped on the wrong line. Tina, as usual is the “wise lady”, not taking any active part, while the Porter ladies got into discussing such deep issues. This story is unfolding so GOOD, Tazzie. We love it! PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
Awesome update..some long distance phone sex might be nice.
liking this story so much; more plz