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Angel Fire – 12
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Angel Fire
The girl who changed Bette’s life
chapter 12
part 2 of Bette’s story
The same night – Bette and Tina at home
After telling Tina her experience with the young man at Yale, she considered how much or how little she would tell her about Brenda.
Bette was in the second semester of her freshman year when she took the life model class. She had wanted to try creative art classes as well as art history and was now a student in this class.
Bette had been tense for over a week about this class. As soon as she knew there would be a nude woman to draw, she had been nervous. She had taken private art lessons in high school, but Melvin did not approve of her being in a class with live, nude models so she had no experience with this.
Oh, sure, she had seen plenty of nude women in paintings and photographs, but to see one in person and have to draw her. Well, that was another circumstance.
Bette set up her easel, not too close to the front, and looked at the stand where the woman would be. Next to her was a girl who she had noticed in other classes. Her name was Brenda and they had talked a little, but nothing significant. It was just the casual things you say to someone in class.
“Wish it would stop snowing.” So did Brenda.
“Do you like Lanham’s Art history class?” They were both sometimes bored with it.
“How are you classified?” They were both freshmen and so felt some connection because of that.
Their conversation had been thus far limited to such getting-to-know-you undergrad small talk.
But today Bette noticed that Brenda seemed nervous, too. She dropped one of her drawing tools and her hands seemed a little shaky. It made Bette feel calmer that someone felt the same as she did.
“Hi,” said Bette.
“Hi.”
Bette moved closer to Brenda because she didn’t want anyone to overhear.
“What do you think about this?”
“I’m uncomfortable,” Brenda admitted.
“Me, too.”
The room filled up with students and all seemed highly interested in the subject for the day. It was one thing to draw a vase of flowers or a plaster bust, but a living, breathing woman. Bette licked her lips and glanced nervously at Brenda.
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WOW!!! nice chapter.
An awkward inexperienced Bette what a concept – you wrote this chaper really well. I appreciate the story you are telling so much.
Glad to read that Bette did not have to “PAY” for her experence. Instead it came from TRIAL and ERROR.
I could feel the awkwardness right along with them. It actually made me mentally say, “Shit I am so screwed, and not in a good way.” This was a very real situation. I’ve read lots of lesbian erotica prior to reading L Word fanfiction and I lost count of how many dual first-time experiences were “too perfect.” I know people really don’t want to read about the awkwardness, but I do like some realism as it adds to the story. I remember thinking when Brenda turned off the light that things weren’t going to go very well, but just now I thought back to when I was that age and how doing it with the lights on seemed wrong somehow. It’s already rough enough being naked with someone else, but having a light on adds exposure and thus possible vulnerability.
We don’t know if Bette PAID after TRIAL & ERROR or not. Based on the story, her experience with Brenda was her awakening, and nothing was said about what she did during her time away / return. Pancha post again real sQQn now, ya hear?
Brenda was the catalyst that spark Bette’s sexual revolution. Can’t wait to find out what transpired within that time frame that changed Bette so. Awesome chapter, post soon.
ahhh…the first time. loved the chapter
I can’t wait for more…
Great story so far. Looking forward to see what happens next with Bette.
Like mother like daughter….to eager and horny! Lol, you bette was not born a great lover as many of fics lead you to beleive this. She had to start from somewhere, so it’s nice to read that Bette was not the great cassonva initially. You must post real soon, like tina I am intrigued and waiting for the story to lead us to the courtsean! This is a great story Pancha!
great chapter, it was very real but nice to read about bette’s awakening
Pancha…You explain Bette’s experiences so logically and with great care and intelligence. A pleasure to read.How “OK” did Bette do in LA? We need the dish.lol.
waitin for more….
wonderful !!
Wow, pancha, you had me cringing with Bette’s hamfisted technique. Must have been very uncomfortable to compare herself to that guy she can’t remember. You’ve got us all wanting to know by whom and how Bette was transformed into the suave seductress we recognize.
Great story. You could feel the awkwardness that goes along with first time loving. Great chapter, can’t wait too read more.
“Sweetie,” Bette said. “Can I go lower?” …Didn’t Angelica say the very same thing? Like mother, like daughter! We who’ve become so immersed in the sexual sea, forget the clumsiness of that first swim. Thanks for the reminder. I would hate to go back. Thank god for time, life and experience! Those Porter girls are a hoot!
Someone pass me some beer and popcorn, pronto! As I read your chapters my face moves closer and closer to the screen on my laptop because I get so enthralled with your writing. Memo to self: back up from the damn laptop screen! If you lose your eyesight you can kiss fanfic goodbye. Excellent chapter, as always, Pancha. Please post soon.
thanks for the longer now can u let me be 1st lol
Inexperienced Bette flows my mind… but I like how she came back from LA! Maybe you’ll give us more details so we all know the secret to becoming a lesbian sex goddess? ;)
This is written so well. i think all of us can relate to ana awkward sexual experience of some sort and it’s just all part of growing up. And i just love the flashbacks woven together w/ Bette telling Tina the story. great jo and i can’t wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter, but when did Bette get her professional lessions in sex? Was it in LA or did JT refer her to some one? Oh did I get ahead of you :o)
Very well written. How we can all relate to Bette at one time or another.
Does the encounter with Brenda count as a first time with a girl for Bette? I think it doesn’t… Both of them were inexperienced, as much as Bette was more confident it couldm’t turn out well and you proved it to us, I can’t wait to find out who turned Bette into the skillful woman she is now. BTW, I think that the flashback technique is perfect for your story, you couldn’t explain things better than you’re doing it.
I really feel sorry for the poor girls and I understand that Bette don’t want that for Angel. But Pancha I don’t buy “Bette is leaving out things as she talks to Tina, but if Tina wants to know more she can ask questions”…Bette is talking to the love of her life, so she shouldn’t leave so many and important things out. I hope the next post is about Bettes time in LA, it should be interesting LOL. This is brilliant writing, the way to mix Bettes past and Angels present problems, that takes a talented writer. More please….
impressive and wonderfull.. Thanks!
Everybody has to start somewhere. The first time for anything is always scary. It is good to see that even Bette struggled with emotions and being with a woman for the first time.
That was wonderful. First times are always awkward,even with the right person. I believe y ou treat the person with the tenderness and love that you expect from them. Sometime trail and error. thanks so much for posting.
Good chapter and can’t wait to see more, thanks!!!!
Poor Bette a hard first time and twice (with male and female) but in now days she look like she learn so well wiht Trial and error. thanks for this good good chapter