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A Wonderful Feeling. (A version of part 6 that I decided not to use)
Version 2: The kiss between Dana and Lara became more intense. Maybe we should go somewhere more comfortable Lara mumbled between kisses. Dana pulled away. *****, I cant! She said. What? Lara asked. The reason to why I called you here was to tell you that I cant be with you. Im in love with someone else. Lara got up from the chair. Of course you are. Id better go. She started to walk down the stairs. Lara! Dana said. Ill always love you. Yea, just not enough. Lara answered before she got out of Danas apartment and in to her car. Dana watched her drive away, and felt a little empty on the inside. She picked up the phone and dialled Alices number. Hello? Alice picked up the phone as soon she heard it ring. Wow, where you standing right beside the phone? Dana asked. Well, I was waiting for you to call, yknow! Alice answered. Well, are going to get your butt here then? Dana asked. Do you want me to bring something? Alice asked seductively. I have a blue rubber *****, yknow! Oversharing! Dana said disgusted. Alice giggled. Just get your sweet butt here Dana told her and hung up. Alice hung up the phone and went out to Tina in the living room. Ill be going now then She said. Youre sure youll be okay? Yes, Al, thank you for caring, but go to your date! Thanks! Night then! Alice said and left the apartment. 5 minutes later she drove up to Danas house and knocked at the door. Its open! She heard Dana yell from the floor above. Alice went in and locked the doors, just in case. She went upstairs and found Dana making them food. Hi sweetie. She said and walked up to her. wow, youre cooking? She kissed Danas neck Yea, hope youre hungry. Starving Alice said with lowered voice. She stroke Danas hair to one side and nibbled her neck a little. Dana moaned a little, and leaned her head towards Alices shoulder. Alice put her arms around Danas waist, and rested her hands on her stomach. So what are you making? Alice asked. Nothing fancy or so Dana answered. just macaroni and cheese. Thats fancy enough for me. Alice told her. Then she let go of Dana and started to set the table. Wow, and I didnt even have to ask you Dana said. Alice smiled at her and kissed her before she lit the candles. They ate in silence, captured of each others beauty. When they had eaten they decided to take a bath together. Alice did the dishes while Dana went upstairs to fill the tub. When the tub was filled she went down to Alice, just wearing a tiny towel. She went up behind Alice and kissed her neck. She put her hands on Alices thighs, moving towards her crutch. Alice turned around and grabbed Dana by her hips. She pulled her close and kissed her passionately. Cmon, lets get in to that tub. She whispered in Danas ear, and the two lovers went upstairs. Dana let the towel drop and got in to the tub, watching Alice getting undressed. She spread her legs so that Alice could sit between them with her back towards Dana. She leaned her head back on Danas shoulder. Dana wrapped her arms around Alice, placing her hand on Alices knees. Ive dreamed of this for so long Alice said quietly. Dana tightened her grip of Alice and kissed her ear. What else have you dreamed of? She asked. Alice turned around and pulled her down a bit so that Dana was lying under her. This. Alice said as she kissed Dana lightly at first, but then more intense. Cmon, lets go to the bedroom. She said, before getting out of the tub. Dana came after her, caught her in the hallway, pressed her up towards the wall and kissed her hungrily. Alice was surprised by Dana taking this step, but she let it happen, wondering what Danas next move was. Dana pulled back a little. What? Alice asked. You dont want to go any further? Of course I do! Dana answered. She took Alices hand and lead her in to the bedroom. She kissed her again and laid her down on the bed. Then she laid down on top of Alice, kissing her, touching her. She kissed her way down to Alices breast, down to her stomach, and finally down to her crutch. She kissed, licked and sucked Alices *****, making Alice squirm and moan. Alice lifter head hip to meat Danas mouth, den she laid back down before getting an *****. Oh *****! She said loudly, body shaking. Dana crept up to her. Was that She kissed Alices lips. good? *****, yea! Alice answered. She rolled over, got Dana on her back and started to kiss her all over. Dana squirmed under Alices touch. Oh, *****, Alice! She said. Alice wasnt late to do so, she slid two fingers in to Dana and Dana moaned loudly. Oh *****! Dana *****, and then again. She grabbed Alices head and drew her up face to face. She kissed Alices lips, played with her tongue. They rolled round in the bed, touching, kissing, feeling each other. Later Dana they was lying in each others arms, talking. How do you feel? Alice asked Dana. Im good. Dana answered. You sure? Alice asked. Yea. Dana answered. Why? I was just thinking. You broke up with your fianc today. Not to mention Lara. Well, I got you, didnt I? Dana asked. Like a fish on the hook. Alice asked. Its nice to see that you can be serious though! Dana teased Alice. For you Ill be anything. Alice said and kissed Dana firmly on her lips, before they both fell to sleep.
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(35 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Yea im with Dorrie , im a big sap at heart too and i couldnt stand reading Dana being with Lara , sry all you Dana/Lara fans but i cant help it….my vote definately goes for this version…like i needed to tell ya lol….Great update! cant wait for more …bring it on!
I like this version, although I’m quite interested how Alice will react in the other version. I kind of want to see how that works out, as long as Lara stays away of course. Alice and Dana were made for each other.
I also like this version better, I was a big Dana/lara fan,until the 4 am kiss, I think they were always meant for each other, they are so damn cute together!! Keep writing it’s great stuff.
I have to agree with 1cutekid I too am very interested in how alice is going to react in the other version. I have to give you credit though giving us 2 totally different versions thank you for that. It is almost like those chose your own stories lol. Keep up the good work:-)
I liked this version better.. as I am a danish fan. But I have to say.. the other version is prob closer to what will prob happen! Either way :D
well, I’m all for angst and such but really don’t want to see Alice hurt. However, it should be very interesting to see Dana fight to win back Alice’s trust. Make her try hard, she really messed up… =)
First of all, thank you so much for the comments. It’s great to know what you guys think! =)
Now, I think I’ll write two chapters 7 too ;) lol. Just becuase I think that it’d me more of a competition for myself to write about Dana’s fight to earn Alice’s trust again. (And at the moment I have no clue how to continue version 2.) ;) lol. Maybe this will be a oppertunity to split “A Wonderful Feeling.” In to two different story’s. Well, I’ll give you an update tomorrow! =)
Glad you are continuing with the first version for a bit…although sad it had alot of drama potential. What about the Bette and Tina storyline, please give more on them.
I like this one best,this way only Tonya and Lara has broken hearts. The other way four broken hearts. thanks
Well I really like this one better and hope that Alice and Dana are together for a while! Please keep coming, thank you!
At the beginning I wanted Lara & Dana to get back together, but I’m really liking Alice & Dana…
i preferred the other one. life has hardships, drama, and reality….either way i’m still gunna read your story