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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 12
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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 12
Tina sat, her back against the solid wood cabinets watching Bette sleep just feet away from her. She needed to think, to process, to try and understand the multitude of emotions and thoughts running so quickly through her head.
I’ve only known her 4 days, she thought. How can I feel like this when I’ve only known her 4 days? Tina touched her finger tips to her tender lips absently wondering if they looked as swollen as they felt. Tina wasn’t sure which way she should turn. Every ounce of logic told her not to get too emotionally involved. Look at it sensibly she thought. You’ve known her for 4 days. You don’t even live on the same continent. How can you even think that this could work. How can you possibly be in love with her, you don’t even know her.
Tina lifted her head with a start. Whoa.hold on she thought her eyes widening with shock. Love? She thought, where did that come from? No, I can’t possibly be..No, that’s silly.
Tina shook her head trying to clear the thought from her head. She leaned back further into the solid carved cabinets, hoping the pain from the metal handle digging into her back would clear her head of such foolishness.
Her thoughts strayed to the memories she had carefully stored of the time they had spent together. Smiling as she recalled the look of childlike wonder on Bette’s face as she came into contact with the wildlife for the very first time.
Tina recalled the way she had given Bette acacia leaves to hold in her hand as the giraffe popped it’s head over the top of their look out point on the roof of the land Rover. Bette looked confused as Tina directed her to hold out her hand, palm flat so that the giraffe could take it’s treat from her.
Tina giggled out loud as she remembered the way Bette scrunched up her face as the giraffe tickled her hand with it’s rough tongue as it gladly took it’s treat, the way Bette’s eyes shone with excitement as she turned to Tina in wonder.
Tina closed her eyes as she let the memories wash over her, realising that she had felt more alive in the last 4 days than she had at any other time in her life.
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oh what a nice little fan fic b-day present from you LOL
So tell me about your plans to SF??
Want a tour guide??
I want to see the pic’s I wonder if there are any of Tina running for her life. LMAO ok so maybe that was kinda wrong for me to say that but you know how to look for the fun things LOL
wow . that was and is a totally captivating storyline . i’m a photographer and i totally believe the urgency of tina’s need to ‘develop’ that film . can’t wait for the next chapters . pls keep them coming :)
Loved your rewrite of chapter 11, sooooo sexy and passionate. The confusion and the epiphany were beautifully written, I can,t wait for development of the photos and story!!! lol
Good to see that your back!!!!!! great update post today please!!!!!!!!!
What an incredible treat this was to read. I was so caught up in Tina’s euphoria, that I just wanted to start back at the beginning of the story again, so I could feel all the excitement once again!! Thank you so much for creating this story!
By the way, your description of Bette’s first experience with wildlife was so adorable, I was almost giggling out loud with glee. See…the sign of a wonderful writer…one who can take me from stuttering to giggling in a heartbeat. Beautiful!
Excellent, tbsaver! I could picture Bette’s awe at her experiences. I’m glad that Bette was able to get Tina out of her funk. Hopefully it’ll last!
P.S. – There’s no shame in saying you enjoyed writing those sensual chapters. Everyone loves them a little NC-17! Hehehe
I just read all of the chapters and your story is great. Fun to see them in a setting that isn’t a city please keep posting
Another great chapter – please keep’em coming. If you “kind of enjoyed writing these NC-17″….just imagine how we feel reading them :o))
wow – just caught up on your story. b&tf urged me to read and im so glad that i did. holy shit batman, this is good. and im ever so glad that you decided to rewrite chapt 11 as many times as you did. you have a wonderful gift of letting us see these images, i feel like im there. the magnatism between our 2 girls is overwhelming. please post again real soon. ill beg and and say pweety pweeze with sugar on top for any more chappys this weekend.
Good chapter and let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
K
Great chapter as always. Love it.
I was so excited to see this chapter this morning. It let me know you were OK with all of the bombing over there. This story just melts my heart. Please keep’em coming.
Once again an amazing chapter!!! Any chance we’ll get 13, 14 and maybe 15 before the weekend is overing…. does BEGGING help???? Hope things are going well.
Happy to see this story back. Yhose who touch us the most in life are those who are like a mirror reflecting us back at ourselves. More soon, please
Great chapter! I love this story!
Hey TB, finally caught up with your chapters….OMG…..ooops missed the F…LOL….the rewritten NC-17 okay that was way beyond HOT, if i was a block of ice i would have melted by now…laughs…thank goodness Tina has decided to share her memories…Thanks for the posts TB, looking forward to more.