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A TiBette Love Story: Lucky Seven {36}
‘Hot girlfriend? Checkity Check!’ Bette smiled and thought of her beloved Tina. ‘How the hell did I get so fucking lucky?’
Back in the bathroom, Tina stood facing her reflection on the mirror but that is not all her eyes absorbed. The steam from the shower had caused condensation and somehow Bette had managed to make a love note magically appear for her on the mirror:
Waited all my life for you T…now waiting in the bedroom…
xoxo – Bette
P.S. Damn you’re sexy!
Tina had the biggest smile on her face and slowly removed her hand from her heart…it wasn’t doing any good to slow the rapid pace. ‘Bette always manages to take my breath away!’
Tina stepped out of the shower, grabbing a towel to dry herself off and slid her feet into the slippers Bette had set out for her. Then she placed the white fluffy robe on and inhaled deeply. ‘I’m so fucking nervous!’ Tina was excited and scared shitless at the same time. ‘But I’m going to be with Bette…and it’s going to be nothing less than perfect.’
Tina made her way to Bette’s bedroom and stood by the door. With one final deep inhale, she lightly knocked on the door before pushing it open. “Bette?”
Tina immediately noticed the countless flickering candles around the dimly lit room and inhaled the light vanilla fragrance.
Bette was on the far side of the room privately watching the blonde intently. ‘God she’s so damn beautiful!’ Bette thought, taking in the view of her girlfriend standing a few feet away…completely unaware she was being looked at. Tina was nervously fidgeting with the tie on her bathrobe, glancing around but failing to see Bette in the relative darkness while stepping into the room.
As Bette moved towards her, Tina’s attention immediately shifted in Bette’s direction. Tina drew her breath in sharply as her eyes feasted on her gorgeous girlfriend standing before her, scantily clad in a delicate white laced lingerie ensemble. The outfit perfectly displayed every mouth watering asset of one sexy- as-hell Bette Porter.
Bette had a wry smile on her face as she observed Tina’s very surprised but pleased expression. “Aren’t you coming, Tee?”
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(46 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
And I am finally FIRST. Yahoo!
Luv…how many times again did they do it? My brain is such a mush right now I’ve lost count. Are you sure it was just seven….I can’t even make it to the shower. Darn….my turtle speed.
That was a great chapter! I’m not sure I even know what else to say. At least I figured out what Bette got out of the garage. :) The Twitter thing made me laugh. Thank you so much for posting!
Alrighty then, Espresso heart attack after that.
FINALLY! That’s all I have to say! When I read Alice’s part all I could think of was: “WTF? I can’t believe she is doing this to us!” And then I laughed sooo hard when you interrupted the story to explain what was going on! You have a really nice sense of humor, girl! =] The Twitter part was also awesome! Thank you! =] P.S.: Because you were so mean to us until now, we deserve a marathon of NC-17 chapters! ;)
BTW, you were very creative with this Rain-X thing… I’ve been collecting a lot of romantic tips on how to seduce a girl since I started to read your story! And I’m starting to envy your girlfriend! She’s a lucky one! =P (I know you love double comments, but it’s never on purpose!)
Is the tiger loose yet? Still waiting…
Laughed so hard @ the twitter thing… great chap, and THX again for this wonderful story…
‘Bette Porter…straddling me…topless…Jesus, I have died and gone to lesbian heaven.’ RIGHT OMG I need an emoticon LOL the wait was worth it…..anyone have a cigarette ???? LOL
WOW! It would be necessary to copy the 4th and 5th pages in the Kamasutra. LOL! Or rather I try it the “double hand” stunt. Yeah. :o) I look up my woman. *goofy grin* Ps.: You’re very smart. Keep it up! I’m proud of you. *wink*
DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!! The twitter thing was so funny. I loved it!!! Thank you PPVS
Wow wow wow. It seems I must wish more often. That was incredible!! You have a gift my dear. Pleaaaaase write how tina reciprocates! Amazing ;)
Ok, I had to stop and comment after reading your false start :) I’ll go back and read the rest. I laughed so hard that I have tears in my eyes. Thanks. :)
I believe you achieved a FF first with that teasing first section, LOL. GREAT job on the first time NC-17 – I’m exhausted but completely sated!
ok ok…so you really do like us…and only wanted to tease torture for a while…awhh ..we put up with it because we enjoy your story so…and may I say that was over the top HOT HOT HOT
I feel like Tina after reading this chapter…motionless, lying on my bed trying to get some much needed oxygen.Wow….now that you have arrived, you must never leave the land of the NC-17…it’s nice here, don’t you think?
Okay so now I’m back with my real chapter comment. Soon as I finished reading this chapter my network dropped, so now I’m back. I will now completely and totally forgive you for that false start. You did a wonderful/great job as a NC-17 virgin. J Now Tina’s first lesbian intimate encounter make me wish my first encounter was anywhere close. Not even in the same neighborhood. Not even the same planet. Great job. Oh and I loved the bathroom mirror romance idea. Very cute.
At first I thought that Alice has the worst timing. Then I thought about Bette walking in behind her and breaking the plate of brownies over her head. That was nice of you to spare Alice from several stitches and us great frustration over her impeccable timing. That was mean, but you made up for it 10 fold with that very x 10^n (my attempt at scientific notation) sexy scene. Yeeeha! Thanks for the post.
Oh. My. God. That thud you heard? Me falling outta my chair. Sweets, you really outdid yourself with this chapter…I just…I’m…yeah…wow. You’ve rendered Lil’ G speechless – how often does THAT happen? My monitor is still smokin’ but this is JUST what the doctor prescribed. Thanks for looking out for me. You rock!
Ummm, yeah, those were those other pages I was asking you about. ;-) So, they both need a sick day, huh? Can’t wait to see what the rest of the night and next day bring for them both. PPS
You are killing me, do you know that lol. PPVS
Oh my god….I just…that was…Bette…you are…” that about says it… HOT SEXY CHAPTER… keep them cumming…
Wow even Bette & Tina are on twitter now? lol That was so freakin’ hot..sick day is indeed needed, maybe two?? PPS:0
I’ll admit, I like bit my fist in frustration when Alice appeared with those brownies. Then your note sdaved it… Naughty, Luv. Just naughty. Your anonymous challenger is very naughty as well. Bad! We love you, regardless. Now then! The chapter… You “brought it”, girl! The idea of Tina tweeting her orgasms is hilarious… Maybe she can just convince her boss to let her “work” from home, rather than call in sick. Great chapter, Luv. Well worth the wait. (no more teasing… you’re too nice for that, right? Right!) Thanks :)
I wish I could comment more, but I’m typing this with the one fingertip that did not melt. The rest of me is being scooped up and put in the freezer right. lol. Phew, a sick day tomorrow indeed… one more of these chapters and you might just kill me!
Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more.
Virgin at writing NC-17 my butt! lolI completely fell off my chair. That was a great chappie. Can’t wait for the next one!
Now that was a HOT NC-17 for sure. Great update. And the twitter reference had me on the floor laughing…can’t tweet about everything. Some things like a Bette Porter post orgasmic state are scared (LOL).
Luv – you had me going for a sec with the Al schtick, but then I thought, “why is she bringing brownies into the bathroom???” Very clever I must say! Nice job on their first (7) go rounds, I can’t wait to see what Tina does to Bette!!! Oh and here’s a hint for you – the screen name is somewhat correlated to a distinguishing physical trait.
Good Gracious Alive that was hot. Damn, those two can steam up an entire house from their heated exchange.
1st you tease us all with that beginning, which i laughed my a– off at, i thought alice would be killed by bette, and then you make us all want to be tina, only to leave us hanging at the end, you are literally killing us woman, but what a way to go!!!!
that was fucking amazing! And what a wonderful way to come home from my trip. You did a very good job on your first NC17, i hope its not the last one. Hugxx
I miss this story… =( Please, update!
Oh damn that was freaking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Roomie! Roomie! Roomie! I saw NC-17 and I’m at the office but did it stop me – no way! This was a FREAKIN hot update.. sigh! (Fanning self …LOL) I so need a cold shower but how how! Thank you for this it’s about time :) Thank you Roomie.. i think we need another chapter like this what say you ….LOL!
first…never joke about alice ruining this NC-17 chapter…u got me there, girl! second, that was super hot! Finally! after all this time…some hotta hotta tibette lovin’! third, loved the twitter thing…fourth, some pain inflicted on bette…NICE! fifth…a sex marathon??? NICER! your writing…NICEST! loved it, girl!
Thanks for the update. That was extremely sexy and sweet. I’m so glad you got Alice out of the bathroom….that was just scary.
Hot damn woman, I was so distracted by that chapter that I totally forgot about my painful foot! Haha – did accidentally kick the side of the bed, but it was totally worth it :P The beginning bit made me laugh, a lot *sly grin* but you totally made up for the teasing with a smokin’ hot chapter ;) It was awesome, and by the looks of things, there’s more to come! It also looks like I’m gonna have to up my game, seeing as you’ve managed to catch up again, and a promise of a certain red sombrero was thrown in :P We’ll see… Loved it, can’t wait for the next :)
Sooooo worth the wait!! Thank you for that!
No you just left us there.. what about Bette’s turn with some Tina action… I know it’s been awhile but would love more.. Thank you…