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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 3
Tina looks at Bette who smiles a little.
Thank you. That would be nice. She replies.
During lunch, its Dana who does most of the talking. Both Bette and Tina glance over at each other from time to time. Dana notices that, but she doesnt say anything, she plans on talking to Bette after Tina leaves.
Tinas cell phone rings.
Excuse me Tina says and answers.
Hey Shane, whats up? She asks.
Yeah, I cant now, but Ill try to make it to the Planet by 5, is that okay? Tina asks.
Okay, Ill see you then. Tina says and hangs up.
They finish the lunch, and Tina has to leave.
Thank you for lunch, but I really have to leave, I have a photo shoot in an hour on the other side of town. Tina says and stands up.
Yeah, sure, it was nice talking to you. Hope it wasnt the last time. Dana says.
Yeah it was nice talking to you too. Tina says and smiles to both of them. Of youre ever in West
Yeah, I think I have seen that, I live not far from there. Bette replies.
You do? Me too. Tina says and smiles. Stop by sometime. Tina says and then leaves.
Bette watches Tinas every move till shes out of the restaurant.
Well, talk, what did you to talk about when I was in the bathroom? Dana asks.
Nothing much, just where shes from and how long shes been a photographer. Bette replies smiling.
Well, talk. Dana demand.
Shes been a photographer for 4 years and shes from
you know, maybe you should stop by that planet thing sometime, and if shes there ask her out. Dana suggests.
No, I cant do that. Bette replies.
Why not? Dana asks raising her eyebrow.
Im notcomfortable enough with myself to do that. Bette replies.
Oh come on, just asks her for coffee then. Dana says and smiles.
Well see. Bette says. I have to get back to my lessons. Bette says and stands up.
Yeah, me too, Ill talk to you later. Dana says and they leave in opposite directions.
Somewhere were Tina is:
The time until she was suppose to meet Shane at the Planet, all she could think about was Bette Porter. She definitely is developing a crush on her.
Around 5 she walks into the Planet. Shane is waiting at a table.
Hey, TK, how was your day? Shane asks.
Well, I know I definitely is developing a crush on Ms. Bette Porter, I talked to her today, she was at the club with Dana when I dropped off the photos. Tina says.
Wow. Shane replies.
Yeah, I know, but the weird thing is that she seemed nervous with me there, she seemed shy all of a sudden. Tina says.
Well, by the sound of it I think she is developing a crush on you as well. Shane says and smiles.
Oh come on. Tina says and laughs. Shes straight, she was married. Tina continues.
Well, next time you see her, ask her out, or ask her to join you for a cup of coffee. Shane suggests.
Yeah, maybe next time. Tina says and drifts off to dreamland.
Three days later, the Planet:
Tina had been working like crazy the last few days. She stopped by the planet for a quick lunch and to read the morning paper.
She orders her lunch and takes up the paper from her bag. And there on the front page in big black letters
Worlds No. 1 Golfer Bette Porter injured.
Tina gasped No, this couldnt be true. She says to herself. She feels like shes about to cry.
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(44 votes, average: 3.93 out of 5)
motherfuckingit!! girl what are you trying to do to me! what’s up with these cliffys, damm now I will have to do something to take my mind off your story. Have a good night and rest well
Great story Lauren. I like this new Bette and Tina. Keep up the good writing.
god please no more bad things… show us the love… dam and now we have to wait till when tomorrow… ok we will wait
OK let me count how many hours are left ’till tomorrow comes, 1 2 3 4 5 6 DAM TOMORROW IS TOO FAR AT THIS MOMENT..
Ok ok i’ll try to wait..
Hey I’m still love it Thanks thats was so Great Please post soon.
LOL…what? Where did the injury come from? This could be intresting…
K
Just caught up on your story. Wonderful story. Love it already, can’t wait for more.
Two thumbs up for you Lauren! Keep it up, I like reading your updates. So Bette is injured huh? Will Tina come to visit her? She is only a few blocks away? Maybe Tina and help Porter out since she is hurt, what do you say?
Damn what the hell, hope the news is not truea and it not Bette. Bette and Tina are so cute at the club, can’t wait to see what’s happen next. Please post soon, thanks! Excellent story, 5 stars for you!
MORE MORE AND DID I SAY MORE. Love it post soon
Fabulous, fabulous story!!! I was so excited to be able to come online and read three chapters in a row…then felt a wave of disappointment when I saw that the button, “Next Post by this Author”, wasn’t in bold letters. I am completely hooked already…thank you!!!
Wow, right after I read your last chapter, here’s already the next : thanks for that !
What a cute shy talk between our famous two…
… by the way, Bette&TinaForever’s theory about the injury is too funny !
Just love your story. It’s sweet how shy they are around one another. Bette injured?..how…Tina’s going to visit? Can’t wait…please continue.
A good way to keep us wanting more. Really great! Post soon.
More, more, more!!! Rest well…..then write woman. Sorry… :-)