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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 205
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“I love you Bette. I’m so, so sorry.” Tina says. She hesitates a little for a kiss.
“Will you kiss me?” Bette asks.
“Sure.” Tina replies and leans in and places the most passionate and loving kiss she’s ever given Bette. “I love you.” She says in between the kisses.
“I love you too T.” Bette replies.
Several minutes later they break away from each other.
“Are you hungry?” Tina asks.
“Yes, I am.” Bette says.
“What do you want?” Tina asks.
“Well, I kind of want to see if I can eat buffalo wings without a lot of mess.” Bette says and grins.
“You do? Why?” Tina asks.
“I don’t know. I just want to.” Bette says and smiles. “Seems like a fun thing to do.” She adds.
“Okay, I’ll go down to the store and get some.” Tina says and stands up. “Do you want to stay here or shall I help you back to bed?” Tina asks.
“I can stay here for a while.” Bette says.
“Okay. I’ll be right back.” Tina says and stands up and walks into the kitchen to get her purse. “You want anything else?” Tina asks.
“Loads of Pepsi. And some candy.” Bette says.
“Okay. I’ll be right back.” Tina says and walks out. Seconds later she walks back in.
“Are you sure you’ll be okay by yourself?” Tina asks.
“Yes I’m sure. Go on hurry. I’m hungry.” Bette replies and grins.
“You want to come?” Tina asks.
“No not today. It will take longer. We’ll take a walk tomorrow.” Bette says.
“Okay. I’ll be right back.” Tina says and walks back out.
15 minutes later she’s back.
“Hey, you awake?” She asks softly.
“Yeah I am. I think I might need some of that pain medication for my arm.” Bette says.
“Sure. I’ll go and get it.” Tina says and takes the food into the kitchen, then she walks into the bedroom to get the pill bottle. She brings a glass of water too and takes a seat next to Bette on the couch. “Here you go.” Tina says and lay the pills in Bette’s hand. Bette throws them into her mouth. And then Tina give her the water glass.
“Thank you.” Bette says after she’s swallowed.
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Well after everything else that’s happened you really can’t blame the readers for possibly starting a riot over the man thing. ;) So Tina wants to marry Bette again? Cute. :) lol@Bette cracking her toe and the sarcastic response. Sounds like me. =p
Yes Lauren I’ve been reading your story from the beginning but you really used to much drama in it and I guess the readers don’t think it’s realistic anymore and letting Tina flirt with a man while Bette is so vulnerable really hit the fan here.
Hey dont stop the story..i love to read..just dont bring a man between Bette and Tina ;) Now let tina give lots of love to Bette and i hope that soon she will start to see again. Please continue.
I’ve never commented before, but I like your story. Yes the dramatic storylines catch me off guard, but it’s all good! Keep posting! ;-)
You are one of my favourite FF stories, one’s when I say yeh and and cant wait to read them. If there was no drama would make it very boring love it please please keep writing this story as I for one would miss it
you know what Lauren, This is your story, you are a fan fiction writer, just because a few people forget the stories on this site are all FICTION, I think some people take it to personally, write whatever you want my friend, just dont let negative remarks, stop you from continuing to post your story, the way you want it written. Thanks for 200 chapters
I love your story, please continue, I would love for Bette to get her sight back, and also see them getting married again. So please post the next chapter so we can find out what else is going on. And I would also love another chaper of your other story.
Lauren, I hope this comment goes to your story, I’m having a bit of trouble with the “Leave a Comment” thingy, it keeps disappearing on m; any wayz, thank chryst u dealt with the man thing, it was so outa character for your Tina and so hurtful when Bette was in such a vulnerable position; if you need some drama fine but sure as hell u don’t wanna go in that drection….
OK Im confused, but that could be becoz I haven’t read the last summink chapters! is bette blind? and a man? welllllll you can do what you want with ur story, coz I’ll read, just don’t take the s3 path and let Tina get with a man
Lauren – Thank you for a great and most excellent story. It takes alot of courage to expose your heart and talents. You’ve done an excellent job and continue inoly if you want to continue. If you feel this form of expression has helped, then continue at your own pace. But on a selfish note, I hope you continue. :p
U better continue this is one off thee best fanfics on here babe ignore the ones who are taking it to heart. I love your story please continue . x
Please continue. I too will definitely miss this fic, and you are doing a good job. Drama and all.
some tender lovin is needed me thinks, but more tina to bette. AND NO MEN!!!!
Hell,did you’ll forget that Tina is a woman before she is a wife and Mother. So some man flirted with her and she with him.She didn’t shove Bette out of the hospital bed and jump in bed with him. Every beautiful woman will flirt, In the position that Tina is in It maded her fill like a woman.and a beautiful one at that. Its your story write if you want to and let the other thing go thanks
by all means continue the story – its just that you heap too much ‘misery’ and sufferings on these two couples and if u say you are a tb lover – then why make ur characters suffer throughout ur 200 chapters! dont u think its abt time that they deserve some happiness!
Of course you should continue. Drama is good but not too much. You’re bound to give me a heart attack.
Good chapter. Glad they talk a little and hope they will be ok and no more drama for them please. Please let Bette see and she and Tina will get married and be happy. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Lauren…Your story is great. Over 200 chapters is quite an accomplishment. Tina just flirted…makes for more drama. It’s kind of cheesy to do it when Bette is so vulnerable but shit happens. The male nurse understood thatthey are a gay couple and that didn’t stop him from acting on his feelings. No biggie!
u have to continue…u are one of my fav. writers…i always look forward to ur stories of b&t…
Hey Lauren! I like your story very much and you better not end it yet. It is a drama filled story but you do hit a lot of real life topics. It’s all cant be roses!
I love your story, please keep writing.Good update. :)
i like it so much this FF and you know it, just please don’t stop to write it, try to understand that some people felt bad for wath happen in S3 but personally i like you story maybe sometime i enjoyed more than other but i can’t wait to read when i know that is a chapter from you. continue!
My bad if I said something to upset you in my previous comment. I was pissed off as I don’t expect your Tina would become S3’s Tina. (well, tend to). Lauren, no hard feelings :p…Thanks for giving us over 200 great chapters, it’s your choice if you want to end it. Off cause I hope you could consider to continue. Well…at least let Bette fully recover. Ok? Pretty :)
Hey Lauren hope you continue this great story… I’ve been on the ride since the beginning… THANK YOU!!
i feel it’s your story and you need to take it where you want it to go. doesn’t matter to me how much drama you put into it i’ll still read it. your the second of my fav writers that say your gonna stop. i don’t post comments offend but i do read so please don’t stop. and if you do can ya e mail me the story i would like to keep reading it. i always thought the drama kept it interisting anyways. i’ll be sorry to see ya stop. here’s hoping you don’t tho, buggsy
what ever you do don’t stop this story i love it even with all the drama and i’m glad you dropped the man part too would like for more happiness for the girls and let them have fun raising their kids–beleive me thy’re even fun when in thier late 20’s sometimes more so get bette back on her feet again and lots of love’n needs to happen it can be real creative with kids in the picture hope you can post another chapter soon
Lauren, Wonderful to read the caring and sharing side of Bette and Tina’s relationship out in the open again. Hopefully the storm of Tina’s flirting is past and now the gals can move on and heal these wounds along with Bette’s eyes, of course. Brilliant and heartfelt as always. Thank you so, so much for this wonderful writing. Your Loyal Fan.
hi, love your story ! plz don’t stop posting !!!!
LAUREN IM SORRY FOR OVER REACTING ABOUT THE I.C. THING. NO EXCUSE BUT I WAS SOOOO PISSED OFF ABOUT TINA AND THE MAN THING THAT I SPOKE POORLLY. I LOVE YOUR STORY SOO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH IT. BUT ITS YOUR CHOOSE! PLEASE MAKE THE RIGHT ONE. AND ACCEPT MY APPOLIGY ABOUT I.C. COMMENT.
As I said before, it’s your story and your story alone. You decide what you write and we have to follow. Those who don’t like ik anymore, stop reading it, it’s that simple.
Just got caught up on this story. Do continue with it. Just write for yourself. Thanks for the 200+ chapters.
Please keep going. I like to see how it all comes back together after something dramatic happens. Life is like that too. Thanks for writing this great, long story.