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    Story written on April 11, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=53150
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    6. I love your writing – I think that there should be a law past in your state that makes it a crime if you don’t post a chapter a day!! *just kidding*

    8. Oh yes, always worth the wait, it is! The dialogue hits the nail on the head, as always! The story is unfolding flawlessly and for the life of me, I just LOVE this alternative universe. Oh, athletes! Please continue! I’m enjoying myself immensely!

    10. oh fuck…between you and fanficchick, i’m barely able to stop myself from begging for more. so i’ll just say i liked your chapter and can’t wait for another. grrr.

    12. Oh my God…you left us there!? I still say you’re a tease…you don’t post forever, then you make us feel so grateful cause you give us two chapters in two days…AND THEN YOU LEAVE US THERE!!! Ok, fine…I give up…take me, tease me, do whatever you want with me, cause I will follow you where ever you lead.

      Seriously…thanks for two in a row Olives…love the pace of this story.

    13. I love this story. I read all the ones before this and they are all great. I cannot wait to see the relationship develop between B & T. Post again soon!

    15. DAMN woman…leave us for a while and come back and then leave us hanging again…you are such a tease deary… thanks for the great post..and don’t leave us hanging too awful long…I am a very impatient gal… so HURRY!!

    22. It just flows out of you, doesn’t it?
      Thanks for doing 2 chapters! I love the progress they are making. Now, please explain Bette’s motivation – what does she want?

    27. Good Lord! You never disappoint when you deliver the goods. Just fantastic. As always you can put the reader right there in the room…you can just feel the electricity between them. Thank you.

    29. Your story just gets better and better! Thank you for posting 2 in a row! Honestly I can’t get enough but I’m grateful for whatever you post!

    38. I spent my entire weekend reading all of your stories…’cept for No Words…I love them all.
      But I must say that I have a special fondness for Sand Games. It’s in part that I’m into sports so I identify more with the casual, ‘laid back’ pace of it all…no manolo blaniks for me! Also, it’s a refreshing twist to it all…Tina’s more assertive and thus Bette can’t really treat her with ‘kid’ gloves too much.
      The Chase…WOW! Emotionally, that thing blew me AWAY! When a relationship goes bad we tend to side with the person not at fault and often pay no attention to the “guilty” party. But, having read your story and seeing it from that person’s perspectives puts it in a whole other light. Forgiveness is a hell of a thing…especially when it’s forgiveness of oneself. Well shakennotstirred…love the name btw…I hope that you keep writing, especially for Sand Games and The Chase, as the first is in the budding stages, and well you left us hanging with The Chase…the rings were off…the passion was great…the love is there…but what is to be the reality for T and B? I’d love to read your spin on it.

    40. hello olives, I wonder if you drink gin or vodka, but also wondering when the next sand story will be available to read. You have me hooked & I keep checking, but no satisfaction. Anyways had a lovely makers mark manhattan last night & would love to read the next chapter while sipping on a martini.

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