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Story written on December 15, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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(82 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
Excellent Olives. What an interesting turn you’ve taken. I look forward to where you are leading us.
If I can’t have you as my wife. then I’ll take your as my girlfriend./lover. Maybe Bette is on the right track for once. She might need to leave before she can come back. As a wife/girlfriend/partner/and lover. I hope I read this right. Thanks
Bizarre dream… hmm.. what could this mean?
An excellent 5 stars and more. I totally love this story, and have found great discomfort having to wait so long for an update!!!! :) It is so descriptive, I felt like I was sitting at the big wooden table with them!!!!
this chapter got me thinking big time. it’s complex and there is great depth here, that i’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter, to see how things pan out. just thinking of the imagery at the end, it could be dark and no rings to mean the horrible end if you are a glass half empty type or it could mean the beginning and the search for light again if you are glass half full type. amazing, thought-provoking chapter. please post soon! thanks for writing! :D
I love the idea that Bette had with taking their rings off, relieving a bit of pressure from Tina maybe? Amazing story.
I love it SNS…Bette finally gets it!!! Hope Tina can too over time. Please don’t go away for too long this time…miss you girl!
I wish the story was already bound in a book so that I wouldn’t have to wait to read the next chapter. Olives, this chapter is so thought provoking and mature–wonderfully written. Hope you’re posting again soon. Thanks.
How you pull us in,it’s wonderful the way you write. This chapter has left me needing more. O’how i love the chase……
Whew, that was deep. Let’s see where you’re taking us. I’m up for the journey.
Wow! I didnt see that twist coming. The rings being off and all that. I can understand that. There is a lot of weight that comes with rings, and maybe now bette and tina can relax and become closer now. cant wait for more. GREAT JOB!
Wha…. That’s quite a curve ball you’re throwing at us… What can I say, you lead, we’ll follow. Can’t wait to read what’s next.
Loved this as usual. Can’t wait for more.
Something told me to read this after work because as BIGKRIS said…it’s too early in the morning to be sad. Regardless, it was beautifully written and thought provoking!
Uh, that’s quite the test Bette’s giving Tina… I hope her confidence isn’t for naught and that Tina realizes she’s paralyzed by her own fears and not by anything Bette has said or done of late. Great twist, SNS. Please post soon.
BAck from a break and stronger than ever. I was hanging on every word and anxiously await the next chapter. Soooooo good.
I usually don’t comment but I’ve read all of your stories and I must say that this one has left me speechless…it’s too early in the morning to be sad…can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
when you say youre just going to let this stand the way it is, does that mean youre not going to continue and let us know what happens?? this is one of the best fanfics ive read. please continue to write.
Oooooh, Olives, I like it! Bring us some more soon.
Great story! I keep hanging on and when I’m about to lose my mind, you return! Thanks. Can’t wait to see whose the mother of the blond child. Needless to say, I’m hoping it’s Tina’s. Still trying not to smile at the idea of Shane helping blond child with her ‘tables…
that was great, can’t wait for the next.
Oh, Olives…..what a twist this chapter took. Excellent writing, as usual. Can’t wait for upcoming chapter’s.
With tears in my eyes I love this. Sad but right.
again i am left without words. See im not the only one that would love to see the book. Thanks again and have a safe and happy holiday season.
Olives, you ARE the bar. You know what I’m saying? :D And higher and higher you go. *lol* Amazing. Not that you could offer anything less. :) 5 stars!!