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50 Shades Of Bette Porter ch. 2
"Miss. Kennard, would you like to grab coffee?"
"Um, really?"
"Yes, I would really enjoy the pleasure of your company."
"Oh, sure."
"Great, I’m going to change again. I’ll be back in five," she said and walked away. She closed the door to the bedroom and Alice and Helena were both almost immediately in my face.
"Kennard, what the fuck?"
"She just asked me out."
"I know we heard."
"I can’t believe it."
"I don’t think you should go," Helena said.
"Why not?"
"Because, you shouldn’t."
"Hel, I’m gonna need more than that," I said and sighed. I knew Helena had the biggest crush on me, but I couldn’t see past the sisterly love I had for her.
"TK, listen, I don’t have a good feeling about her," Alice said in a whisper, "something just doesn’t seem right."
"Babe, I’ll be careful, I promise," I said as Bette came walking out of the room, same linen pants, same sexy shirt.
"Ladies, Dana will escort you to your car," she said and Dana appeared almost out of no where, "I shall expect the first copy Miss. Piezecki."
"Of course Miss. Porter."
"Ladies."
And with that we were off. We went to the elevator and pushed the down button, when the doors opened we caught a couple in a most passionate embrace. They parted quickly and turned beet read. We got in and Bette hit the ground level button. We stood in an awkward silence, the couple behind us giggling. I felt my face get hot and Bette let out a sigh. The elevator stopped and the doors opened, the couple got out still giggling and the doors closed once again.
"What is it about elevators," she mused aloud.
As we reached the ground level, I felt relief come over me. This was the longest elevator ride in the world. The doors opened and we walked through the lobby and out to the busy streets of Santa Barbara.
"Come," she said and grabbed my hand and led me down the sidewalk to the Starbucks on the corner across the street. My heart fluttered as I felt her warm hand holding mine. We stopped waiting for the light to turn and I studied our reflection in the window, damn, we looked good.
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(32 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
“I don’t do the girlfriend thing…” oh my that had me giggling! Best thing about a good domme is that she makes you feel safe while at the same time scared out of your pants. Your Bette shows this quality quite well. Very nice, O! Yes, yes…please, more!
Bette’s acting a tad bit protective for someone who “doesn’t do the girlfriend thing.” Thanks for this! Looking forward to more.
Enjoyed the update,thanks
I love this story great update Bette is a mystery
Naughty dark Bette, this story’s amazing! Can’t imagine what’s next so hope I’ll find out soon! tnx fot posting!
Its like reading the book again only better.
Hmmm
I’ve read the books. I’m really enjoying your L-Word take on this story. Can’t wait for more.
Loving it :) More Please!!!
Awesome!
rigth know is so much better tant the book… thanks
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! Love Bette, love Tina, love Tasha as Bette’ s sister. LOVE it!
Looking forward to the next chapter! loving it:)
cool,”I don’t do the girlfriend thing”….and yet when she realized that Tinawas drunk she got in there like a flash. …nice…:) thanks for this.
Just started reading the second book of the original 50 shades but dropped it in favour of your tibette version. It’s so much more organic for me. Please post soon, you are just brilliant with it
Great update thank you
Pretty good…
I’m impressed… Despite Bette not doing the girlfriend thing, she actually went all the to Santa Barbara to fetch Tina, *and* warned Helena off all in one go. Things are starting to heat up! Thanks for posting. :)
Good.PPS
Damn so good