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4am, The Start To A New Life ( Sequel to 4am When I Come Around) –
Dana took everyone to the room. Alice was lying there with Alana in her arms when everyone came in. Each of the grandparent stood on each side of Alice to have a look at their new grandaughter.
"She’s so beautiful Alice."
"Thanks you Sharon."
"She has your eyes and Dana’s smile."
"Yea she sure does Lenore."
"Maybe its just because she’s my child but I think she’s is the most beautiful baby ever."
Everyone let out a soft laugh at Dana’s comment. Alice finished feeding and burping the baby. Then she handed her over to the more that expecting grandparents. Dana took a seat next to Alice and watched as everyone oo and ah’ed over the baby. They even went as far a doing baby talk.
"It’s amazing Al, how one baby can turn full grown adults into babbling idiots."
"Dana, I would take that comment back because you that you will be doing it to."
"I know!"
Then all of a sudden it fell silent. There was a fowl smell in the air. All eyes directed at little Alana.
"Somebody left a present for her mommies."
Lenore handed the baby to Alice and before Dana knew it Alana was in her lap
"Okay I can do this I’m a professional athlete, how hard can this be."
Dana walked over to the changing table and started to undress her daughter. She was down to the diaper. She took a deep breathe. She undid the sides and the fowl smell it her right on she coked a little but still held her composure. Everyone had directed there attention back to Alice as not to make Dana uneasy about her first change. Then there was a scream, from Dana. Sharon and Lenore raced over to Dana, the busted out laughing.Dana turned around.
"She pissed in my mouth."
Dana ran into the bathroom and started to rinse her mouth out. By now everyone was laughing and still was when Dana reappreared into the room.
"Okay professional athlete or not that was gross."
"And they say boys have the better aim."
Dana shot Alice a glare.
"Dana honey I’m just kidding with you."
"It won’t be funny when it happens to you."
"Oh no it wont I’m buying a splash guard."
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Aww I have the biggest grin on my face after reading that, so cute!! PPS xx
Really nice a cute – PPS.
I love this story. I read all 25 chapters of the first story and all of this one. I’m so hooked
So cute!