Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of . Age verification is required to proceed.
You Saw Me – (Chapter: Chapter…10… I think)
“Hey guys.” Ashley beams to them.
A chorus of “Hey’s” and “Hello’s” make their way to us.
Ashley, ever the brave one, breaks the impending silence. “I wanted to intr-”
“Ashley” Aiden interrupts, a strong twinkle in his eyes. He looks…happy almost.
Ashley sighs before turning to Aiden.
“Yeah Aid, what is it?” She’s trying not to sound too uninterested, I can tell though.
To me and Ashley’s surprise, he gets up off the bench then jumps up on the table in the middle of the quad. What the hell is he doing?! I look to the people around me; they’re all grinning towards him, and every now and then, looking to Ashley, gauging her reaction. I look to Ashley and it seems that she didn’t know anything about this either, the shocked and confused look on her face explains it.
“Aiden, what’re you doing? Get down from there!” Ashley hisses at him.
“No Ashley, I have something to show you.” He beams, a confident smirk crosses his face. He pumps his muscles, making strong arm posses.
Ashley looks frightened, terrified as to what will happen. Aiden grabs the midsection of his shirt and, in a hulk like manner, rips off the shirt, yelling and screaming to add dramatic effect.
Everyone is staring at us now, much like Ashley and I, they’re all wondering what the fuck is going on. Ashley’s friends are all still grinning and smiling cockily.
‘Dammit! What the hell is going on here?!’ Ugh, it’s so annoying to be kept out of the loop.
When Aiden is done ripping off his shirt, he reveals the hidden message under it.
“Ashley Davies, will you go out with me?” He yells out, his words matching the ones written on his chest. On his abs are two checkboxes, one with a “yes” beside it, and the other with a “maybe”.
My breath hitches, heart racing again, I furrow my eyebrows and gape at him. She’s not gonna go for it! She won’t say yes! She’s gay! I scream at him from the confines of my head.
It didn’t matter.
My head snaps to Ashley, who, much like me, is gaping at him. I feel like I can hear the gears grinding inside her head, trying to process the new information. I look to Ashley’s friends; Madison is smiling haughtily towards Ashley before turning to me to give me a mischievous smirk
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


That is so freakin’ messed up, I mean how could she!!
oh man, i dont think theres any comin back from here. not unless it was some effed up dream or something. thats just unforgivable :(
whoa. poor, poor, poor spencer. i cant believe about ashley. whoa. i got about as close to crying as i can get… i will not stop reading this. u are amazing. please do pms
wow that was all so harsh. and it takes a bunch of real men to beat the hell out of one girl lemme tell ya. and then for the chicks to keep beating on her in the locker room. I really don’t think there’s anyway that spence could forgive ash for that. and if she does, then she’s by far a bigger person than me because I could never forgive her for that. harsh but excellent update, so glad you’re back, and hoping that you’re doing ok.
wow, seriously intense chapter, great job… please pms!
this chapter was really just…wow i couldnt believe that ashley would just stand there and watch as the events unfolded and i agree with sonfan i would never be able to forgive ash after that…pssh there is no coming back from that…no way but n e ways glad ur back it was a great update amd pms!!!
oh wow that was wow your words just painted a picture it was like i was there..this chapter brought me to tears your absolutely amazing please dont stop writing and pms!!