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What Happens Next – (Chapter: 42: Well, I Guess This is Growing Up)
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Raife, got in, “We need to put something on that eye.” He shook his head, “Man, I can hear your Mom already!” Ashley’s face paled slightly, she pushed down in her seat, turning towards the window.” Raife cleared his throat, “Hey what do you say we delay for a while, if I remember right you used to have a thing for corndogs?” Ashley laughed, “Yeah Dad, when I was seven!” Raife laughed, sniffing loudly, “How about you give me a break, huh? Our options are kinda limited!” He nudged Ashley playfully, “Its times like these I’m glad I never drive with the top on!” Ashley squealed, “Hey, its not that bad!” She pretended to sniff under her arm, “Oh man, I feel dizzy! Everything’s going black.” Raife laughed, “Yeah, so corndogs it is!”
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Raife watched amused as Ashley finished her fifth corndog, “You know Chris told me you were eating more, but I guess I really didn’t believe her.” Ashley shrugged still chewing, she finally swallowed, “I didn’t get a chance to eat today, so I’m freaking starving!” She stood up heading back to the cart, “I’m gonna get one more, you want anything?” Raife shook his head, smiling. He laughed watching her eating her corndog in line, finishing before she paid for it. Ashley sat back on the bench, belching softly, “Wow that was really good. I haven’t had one of those in years.” Raife laughed, “I think you mean six of those in years!” Ashley grinned, “Yeah, I guess.” She suddenly stopped smiling, “Dad I don’t want you to think that I’m not happy to see you because I am, but I guess…I don’t understand what you’re doing here.”
Raife nodded, he put his arm over Ashley’s shoulder, “Your Mom and I had a talk this morning…about you.” Ashley felt her stomach fluttering, “Why?” Raife looked into Ashley’s eyes, “She’s worried about you…really worried. She says you’ve been sneaking out at night?” Ashley shrugged, “Yeah a few times.” Raife cleared his throat blushing, “She also says that you’ve been…well that you might need to talk to me about some things happening…to your body.” Ashley looked down, her face blushing. Raife tried again, “If there’s something you want to ask about, I’m here…you know about girls and stuff.” He grinned trying to lighten up the mood, “So, Chris showed me a picture of your girl. She’s hot!” Ashley cringed, her shoulders fell, “She’s not my girl anymore.” Raife fought, trying to keep his face deadpan, “Really?” Ashley nodded sadly, “Yeah, we broke up today.”
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I’ve never commented before but I have read ALL of your posts and absolutely love them. This update was awesome!! I feel relieved about Spashley’s drama and now can saftley go back to studying. Although I cracked up for a good 10 minutes after Madison’s “confession.” That was hilarious, sorry I feel no remorse for her… that bitch. Also I have to say your Cocaine Sex post was unbelievable. And so was the Mud Wrestling one and the confessional one… and the operation ASS.. you know what they are all amazing!! And I totally agree with you on the doggie day care thing cuz I have a dog but that bitch aint goin to a Vet for ANYTHING. Do people not realize a pet is still jus a pet and NOT HUMAN? Maybe thats jus me but I got your back and you can repay by updating SOON!!!
i love your story b/c Ash/T remind me so much of myself…my friends yell at me for checking girls out all the time. I also agree about the doggie day care thing.
omg…ok so this is was one hell of a post! I mean seriously…it was reallly well written…thank u peglegmeg! lmao..but i swear you always make me laugh with those damn stories u write before the actual post… doggie day care?? wtf…just put them in a yard lol…but oh!!! hahaha..i thought of the episode where Spence goes on her “date” with kelly and so Ash chills at her house until she gets back, but after dinner shes playing scrabble with clay and shes like “HA! Triple word score! Herpes!! lmao….oh man was i rollin’….oh and may i add that outdoor track shoe spikes hurt like woah! Ive been accidentially stabbed with them…man if i were T i would have punched ash more than once!..ok enough out of me…u know the drill!…POST MORE SOON! ps..i like peglegmeg’s story…but personally i find urs better….im a sucker for comedy :)
hey don’t dis pets. they can be more real then a dumb ass human alot of the time. a doggy dare care…..WTF. lol. that’s alittle extrem. Great post trsim. you and peglegmeg have always been the best writters on here to me. peglegmeg story does rock, people should give it another chance. GREAT update. love the bike Ashley was riding. great update.
I oficially love you :D
Hey i comment all the time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update doggie daycare lol i am so glad ash has got her head on str8 lol sorta 4 pages thanks still want longer lol
You know you’re addicted to a story when your doctor tells you that you have to back surgery due to a martial arts injury and your only concern is how many days you’ll be away from fanfic. As for doggie daycare, why not just light the money on fire and watch it burn…but hey, that’s just me.
OMFG…THE FUNNIEST LINES EVER “No, I want to see your bike.” Spencer choked, “Oh my God…is that a Barbie bike?” She looked at Ashley laughing hysterically, pointing at the bicycle, “Barbie?” HAHA WOW I AM LIKE CRYING OVER HERE OF LAUGHTER..I CAN SOO PICTURE ASHLEY ON A BARBIE BIKE..HAHA..I LOVE THIS STORY
awww that was sweet that the end. I can imagine how Ash felt with those kids flowing her. LOL that was a funny part. Update soon loved it
That was fantastic, dear! Whoooo!!! started jumping after reading this chapter. All is well Ashley and Spencer and I’m so efffing happy now. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I hope Ash can patch things up with Tristan. I love you!!!
Oh, and your author’s note was amazing. Haha. I laughed so hard. Especially since I went and got me a turtle today at the pet shop. I’ve been calling it Ashley all day. I hope they let me take it on the plane. I’m still in NY :)
I’ve never commented before but I have read ALL of your posts and absolutely love them. This update was awesome!! I feel relieved about Spashley’s drama and now can saftley go back to studying. Although I cracked up for a good 10 minutes after Madison’s “confession.” That was hilarious, sorry I feel no remorse for her… that bitch. Also I have to say your Cocaine Sex post was unbelievable. And so was the Mud Wrestling one and the confessional one… and the operation ASS.. you know what they are all amazing!! And I totally agree with you on the doggie day care thing cuz I have a dog but that bitch aint goin to a Vet for ANYTHING. Do people not realize a pet is still jus a pet and NOT HUMAN? Maybe thats jus me but I got your back and you can repay by updating SOON!!!
i love your story b/c Ash/T remind me so much of myself…my friends yell at me for checking girls out all the time. I also agree about the doggie day care thing.
omg…ok so this is was one hell of a post! I mean seriously…it was reallly well written…thank u peglegmeg! lmao..but i swear you always make me laugh with those damn stories u write before the actual post… doggie day care?? wtf…just put them in a yard lol…but oh!!! hahaha..i thought of the episode where Spence goes on her “date” with kelly and so Ash chills at her house until she gets back, but after dinner shes playing scrabble with clay and shes like “HA! Triple word score! Herpes!! lmao….oh man was i rollin’….oh and may i add that outdoor track shoe spikes hurt like woah! Ive been accidentially stabbed with them…man if i were T i would have punched ash more than once!..ok enough out of me…u know the drill!…POST MORE SOON! ps..i like peglegmeg’s story…but personally i find urs better….im a sucker for comedy :)
hey don’t dis pets. they can be more real then a dumb ass human alot of the time. a doggy dare care…..WTF. lol. that’s alittle extrem. Great post trsim. you and peglegmeg have always been the best writters on here to me. peglegmeg story does rock, people should give it another chance. GREAT update. love the bike Ashley was riding. great update.
I oficially love you :D
Hey i comment all the time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update doggie daycare lol i am so glad ash has got her head on str8 lol sorta 4 pages thanks still want longer lol
You know you’re addicted to a story when your doctor tells you that you have to back surgery due to a martial arts injury and your only concern is how many days you’ll be away from fanfic. As for doggie daycare, why not just light the money on fire and watch it burn…but hey, that’s just me.
OMFG…THE FUNNIEST LINES EVER “No, I want to see your bike.” Spencer choked, “Oh my God…is that a Barbie bike?” She looked at Ashley laughing hysterically, pointing at the bicycle, “Barbie?” HAHA WOW I AM LIKE CRYING OVER HERE OF LAUGHTER..I CAN SOO PICTURE ASHLEY ON A BARBIE BIKE..HAHA..I LOVE THIS STORY
awww that was sweet that the end. I can imagine how Ash felt with those kids flowing her. LOL that was a funny part. Update soon loved it
That was fantastic, dear! Whoooo!!! started jumping after reading this chapter. All is well Ashley and Spencer and I’m so efffing happy now. Thank you, thank you, thank you! I hope Ash can patch things up with Tristan. I love you!!!
Oh, and your author’s note was amazing. Haha. I laughed so hard. Especially since I went and got me a turtle today at the pet shop. I’ve been calling it Ashley all day. I hope they let me take it on the plane. I’m still in NY :)
I ditto confused16. I love the intensity and humor of your story…plus it is hard to keep up with the bouncing around in peglegmeg. I also agree, that the pre-story is usually pretty funny….just love your humor. Nice chapter…nice length, but most of all nice happy ending :) way to deliver ! post more soon.
I ditto confused16. I love the intensity and humor of your story…plus it is hard to keep up with the bouncing around in peglegmeg. I also agree, that the pre-story is usually pretty funny….just love your humor. Nice chapter…nice length, but most of all nice happy ending :) way to deliver ! post more soon.
Oh trsim… you make me laugh girl. Not only are your author comments freakin’ hysterical (btw, we have the the “4 Paws” and the “Whole Kit & Kapoodle” day cares around here. yeah, total bs), your story cracks me up too. Madison announcing she has herpes. LMAO. Somehow though I sense Spence and Ash are going to help her out of this mess. I love your writing. I would shower you with more compliments, but I don’t want Sweettiger or Combatbaby to kick my arse. ;) Please post more soon .
Oh trsim… you make me laugh girl. Not only are your author comments freakin’ hysterical (btw, we have the the “4 Paws” and the “Whole Kit & Kapoodle” day cares around here. yeah, total bs), your story cracks me up too. Madison announcing she has herpes. LMAO. Somehow though I sense Spence and Ash are going to help her out of this mess. I love your writing. I would shower you with more compliments, but I don’t want Sweettiger or Combatbaby to kick my arse. ;) Please post more soon .
Must post more soon!!! You’ve got me all nervous now with the whole Spencer telling Ashley that she needed to know that Ashley wouldn’t try to hurt yourself, no matter what happens. I may be totally wrong but it seems like Spencer is still unsure about taking Ashley back. Hope I’m wrong. Love the comedy/drama mix. Great writing as usual. Love ya mucho!!:)PS – Everyone please check out http://www.myspace.com/weloveannabelle. It’s going to be a great movie and if we get 15000 friends they’ll show it on myspace in October when it is finally released. Sorry for putting this in your comments trsim. Love ya
Must post more soon!!! You’ve got me all nervous now with the whole Spencer telling Ashley that she needed to know that Ashley wouldn’t try to hurt yourself, no matter what happens. I may be totally wrong but it seems like Spencer is still unsure about taking Ashley back. Hope I’m wrong. Love the comedy/drama mix. Great writing as usual. Love ya mucho!!:)PS – Everyone please check out http://www.myspace.com/weloveannabelle. It’s going to be a great movie and if we get 15000 friends they’ll show it on myspace in October when it is finally released. Sorry for putting this in your comments trsim. Love ya
hey what’s up with you saying Combatbaby rocks your world, I am so hurt! AS for no one commenting on the “circus boobies” wow, how could no one comment on that,FRICKEN HILARIOUS!! You know my feelings about you and your writing, I am completly in love with you. As for Isapurplefreak, back off, she already has two virtual girlfriends and you are not one of them! love you girl completly!!
hey what’s up with you saying Combatbaby rocks your world, I am so hurt! AS for no one commenting on the “circus boobies” wow, how could no one comment on that,FRICKEN HILARIOUS!! You know my feelings about you and your writing, I am completly in love with you. As for Isapurplefreak, back off, she already has two virtual girlfriends and you are not one of them! love you girl completly!!
that was too funny! i loved it! post soon!
that was too funny! i loved it! post soon!
4 long pages…woman, I love you!! By far one of the best chapters yet=D I’m glad Spence & Ash are alright. Gotta love that Barbie bike…I think it’s Ashley’s good luck…hehe. Now all she has to do is fix things with T. Madison…herpes…poor girl, but oh well. Muahaha…that was a bit mean.
4 long pages…woman, I love you!! By far one of the best chapters yet=D I’m glad Spence & Ash are alright. Gotta love that Barbie bike…I think it’s Ashley’s good luck…hehe. Now all she has to do is fix things with T. Madison…herpes…poor girl, but oh well. Muahaha…that was a bit mean.