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What Happens Next – (Chapter: 33: Operation A.S.S. – Only for Tonight)
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Ashley sunk into the plush seat of “The Beast” panting heavily, she felt different, alive. Her body was tingling everywhere, she felt super aware of everything. She could feel her blood pounding through her veins, her heart beating, even the small droplets of sweat lightly coating her body. She grinned when Tristan opened the door and slid into the driver’s seat. Tristan turned and playfully punched Ashley’s arm, “Congratulations Gonzo, your cherry’s just been popped! How does it feel?” Ashley laughed, “It feels fucking awesome! I cannot believe I just did that!” Tristan turned back towards the windshield and looked out into the darkness for a moment, “Let’s roll!” She ejected the CD from the deck and reached up to her sun visor removing another. She started the van and slammed the transmission into gear as the song blared out of the speakers…
Girls – all I really want is girls
And in the morning it’s girls
Cause in the evening it’s girls
I like the way that they walk
And it’s chill to hear them talk
And I can always make them smile
From White Castle to the Nile
Ashley surprised herself by joining in loudly singing along with Tristan. The van slowly moved away from the mansion, both girls laughing and dancing with total abandon.
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Zadie was down to sporadic giggles. She heaved a sigh of relief at finally being back in control of her body. Spencer’s face was still flushed a dark red as she continued to cough trying to regain her composure. Arthur had given up trying to stop them from laughing and he sat quietly waiting for them to finish. Spencer finally looked up at her father, her tone teasing, “You know this is totally unfair right? I mean you get to hang out with your girlfriend tonight and I can’t see mine!” Zadie started another round of giggles, “Okay, that has got to be the best teen angst line I’ve ever heard! You so have a point!” Spencer smirked, bowing her head to Zadie. Arthur chuckled, “Hmm…well I’m not sixteen Spence.” Spencer scowled, sticking her tongue out at her father. Spencer sighed dramatically, “Well if you’re not gonna let me see Ash, can I at least call her and tell her goodnight?”
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I’m hillarious? Ahahaha. Thanks. You are, too. Seriously though, I’m just like probably in the top ten of most feminine lesbians. Ever. And the mall-well, if we went to the mall, my girl would be like, “I’m so lucky this time”. Usually, I’d parade with them around the city into like 8424738 boutiques and try on everything and end up buying like…2 things. I remember last summer, we ended up going to New York. Oh my god, I think she’d never go back to New York. Shop, after shop, after shop. I’m sure someone mentioned something about doing it in the dressing room. And I used that as incentive. I’d be like, “If you behave, we can have sex in the dressing room by the end of the day”. And it never happened because this one lady kept on coming back and asking if everything was alright. So we were just like, “fuck it, let’s go back to the room”. And we went to this water park there, too. Splish Splash. She’d want to go on the rides and all I’d want to do was lay around in my bikini tanning and going into the little places to buy souveneirs and what not. Gosh, now that i think about it, I’ve just been so incredibly cruel. I feel horrible. But I can say this…she would get so mad at me. And you know, it was worth pissing her off just to watch her walk away. If you know what I mean. Haha, anyway, I’m sorry to bore you with all of this. You’re probably all like, “wtf…why is this random chick telling me this? I don’t wanna know all the mean evil things she did to her ex!”. Haha. I’m going to read the story. And comment it when I’m done.
hahaha…OMG….a poodle….that was fuckin’ hilarious…..great chapter..loved it….post more soon!
i love ur stories!! they r so funny and so hot they r just awesome!
That had to be the funniest/sexiest story ever, and I must add…Sammie sounds HOTT!! But I do have one question, and I just might not have read this right…did the four of them have sex together in the van? I mean I know Ashely was with Spencer and Tristan was with Sammie, but were they all getting it on in the van together?? Just wondering!
I was on target. Sammie is a hotty. And I’m such a creep for wanting to have sex with a fictional character. Haha. That was…whoo…that was mindblowing. Incredible, incredible. And funny as mess. The sex…well, let’s just say not even a cold shower could calm me down. I need like a pool full of snow and ice. Ahahaha. Yeah. It was THAT great. Thanks for the chapter. Muchos love, miss :)
Oh, and I’m still laughing from the end and the cheap trick song. How appropriate!
WOW THIS WAS BY FAR THE FUNNIEST CHAPTER EVER! WOW THE POODLE! HAHA AND THEN THE SEX SCENE WAS CRAZY! I MUST HAVE READ WRONG OR SOMETHIN CUZ IONO BUT WHERE THEY ALL 4 HAVING SEX IN THE VAN TOGETHER? IM CONFUSED.. Y DID ASHLEY SAY IT COULD BE THERE LAST NIGHT? IS SPENCER GOING SOMEWHERE..YEA WELL KEEP THE POSTING ITS AMAZING!
That story was hilarious. I can totally empathize with Tristan poodles scare me too. I think its the odd haircut that they have. I’m not sure. And btw combatbaby is freaking crazy. I mean that in the best possible way. lol
Hmm, well I’m commenting on my own story only to clear things up a bit I guess. a) Yes, they are all having sex in the back of the “the Beast” on a mattress. It’s a caravan — relax the couples weren’t touching or anything. b) Tristan and Ashley were indulging in a bit of role play — pretending that they went AWOL or Absent without leave from their “base” just to see their girls before being sent off to take your pick war, battle, etc. Spencer was just playing along with Ashley — as I often I wish my girl would do when I put my Smokey the Bear Outfit on…remember only you can prevent vaginal fires! c) notice the similarity to combatbaby’s post! d)Combatbaby, you are my new pretend Internet girlfriend! Thanks for noticing Cheap Trick!
LMAO . that was toooo funny. HA HA HA loved the part with the dogs. lol Loved this chapter. Soo when is Ash gonna let Spence about the pic and note that Madison left in her locker. I fell the drama coming on. lol great work keep it up. Update soon. and make sure your girl doesn’t catch you. hehe ; )
Oh my god, that’s friggin’ awesome. I’ve ALWAYS wanted to be someone’s pretend online gilrfriend. That’s been like…my goal and aspiration all these years. Wow. I’ve reached completion. I’m going to refer to you as that. Lemme try it out, “Hi, I’m Dina Elizabeth and I will be your new pretend internet girlfriend for the time being”. Ahahahaha. You’re too, too funny with your talk of Smokey The Bear and vaginal fires. How great is that, eh? Wait. Whoa. I think I just got something. You mean to tell me that you girls put on weird ass “save the environment” costumes, you’re actually wanting to engage in foreplay?! No way! My ex used to wear this strange WOODSY THE OWL costume and go around saying crap like, “Lend a hand- care for the bearded clam”. I’d stand there like an idiot thinking, “wait, isn’t it ‘lend a hand-care for the land’?” Oh my god, I can’t believe I missed out on that! Damnit!Oh,and Christine77, thanks for thinking I’m crazy and meaning it in the best way possible!
Role play, I meant Roleplay. Not foreplay.
Okay, seriously I’m crying over here, Jesus Christ, bearded clam. I laughed so hard my neighbor just came by to check on me! That’s priceless. OMG, YESSSS! I have the coolest pretend online girlfriend in the world! But, and I mean this is best possible way, I’ll never go online shopping with you…no matter what you promise to do in the virtual dressing room…*cough*…okay well there are a few things you could promise to do… :P
Awwww, that’s so sweet! I am pretty cool, aren’t I? Psh. Ahaha. Wait. No online shopping? But..but..but…*bites lip* There’s this really cool *toy store* I’ve been meaning to check out. -Pretend cries- and did you say dressing room or chatroom? We could play virtual hide and seek with our virtual clothes. AHAHAHAHA. I crack myself up.
omfg that has to have been the most hilarious story i read…ever..omg im still fucking laughing….a poodle and a golden retriever…lmao…i have two rottweilers and I think they’re harmless….lmao…..but the poodle and the golden retriever were PRICELESS! lmao…Now for the sex…omg that was fuckin hot! I seriously had to turn on my celing fan because i got so hot…lmao…ok I’m going to tell you something that ive never told anyother writer on this site….YOU ARE THE SHIT!!!! lol…ok i like drama…especially when the plot is good…but i LOVE me some comedy lol…and you my friend…you have it perfect on all aspects…lmao…but i swear combatbaby’s comments are just as funny as the story….absolutely hilarious…I LOVE!!!!! post more soon…and you’d better take which ever mode of transportation allows the most typing time…I WANT ANOTHER STORY!! lmao…sorry its just that i feel as if im addicted now…the story is so much more better when there’s comedy involved…ahh as ive said before my two most favorite things in life have been perfected in this story…lol..comedy and sex…w/e post more sooN!!!
haha lmao! yea i agree with that confused chick..the poodle and the golden retriever we priceless! this is so comedy! u are so talented! i fukkin love this story! combatbaby’s comments are comedy too.. haha yea well u should post more soon.. i cant wait to see hat happens next.. i mean i only been reading fanfiction for liek a week now and im already addicted. i always find myself siting here waiting for someone to repost.. thank god u posted or else iono wut i would have done..haha i remember i always used to think my friend was weird for sitting and reading all day but now i understand! haha the stories are awesome! not to mention i am soo in love with south of nowhere.. i mean it is the best show ever am i righT? yea wow this is awesome….although im not a lesbian..reading some of these stories and watching the show has started to make me wonder….haha yea well post soon..im loving it..bye!
oh and btw….MR C got some booty…lmao…sorry i kno im immature…but thats what being a teenager is all about…i think…lol..maybe i need to re-evaluate my aspect on life…nah…that’d make everything boring…lol
HOT and HILARIOUS!!!! Hmmm….trism what else is there to you??? I wanted to be your online girlfirend **sniffling** !!! Really you are a great writer I look forward to reading your story every time, thank you!!
This story just gets better and better. It is too funny. That sex scene was hot, as always. I would also have to agree with Change, Zadie sounds really hot!
I’m hillarious? Ahahaha. Thanks. You are, too. Seriously though, I’m just like probably in the top ten of most feminine lesbians. Ever. And the mall-well, if we went to the mall, my girl would be like, “I’m so lucky this time”. Usually, I’d parade with them around the city into like 8424738 boutiques and try on everything and end up buying like…2 things. I remember last summer, we ended up going to New York. Oh my god, I think she’d never go back to New York. Shop, after shop, after shop. I’m sure someone mentioned something about doing it in the dressing room. And I used that as incentive. I’d be like, “If you behave, we can have sex in the dressing room by the end of the day”. And it never happened because this one lady kept on coming back and asking if everything was alright. So we were just like, “fuck it, let’s go back to the room”. And we went to this water park there, too. Splish Splash. She’d want to go on the rides and all I’d want to do was lay around in my bikini tanning and going into the little places to buy souveneirs and what not. Gosh, now that i think about it, I’ve just been so incredibly cruel. I feel horrible. But I can say this…she would get so mad at me. And you know, it was worth pissing her off just to watch her walk away. If you know what I mean. Haha, anyway, I’m sorry to bore you with all of this. You’re probably all like, “wtf…why is this random chick telling me this? I don’t wanna know all the mean evil things she did to her ex!”. Haha. I’m going to read the story. And comment it when I’m done.
hahaha…OMG….a poodle….that was fuckin’ hilarious…..great chapter..loved it….post more soon!
i love ur stories!! they r so funny and so hot they r just awesome!
That had to be the funniest/sexiest story ever, and I must add…Sammie sounds HOTT!! But I do have one question, and I just might not have read this right…did the four of them have sex together in the van? I mean I know Ashely was with Spencer and Tristan was with Sammie, but were they all getting it on in the van together?? Just wondering!
I was on target. Sammie is a hotty. And I’m such a creep for wanting to have sex with a fictional character. Haha. That was…whoo…that was mindblowing. Incredible, incredible. And funny as mess. The sex…well, let’s just say not even a cold shower could calm me down. I need like a pool full of snow and ice. Ahahaha. Yeah. It was THAT great. Thanks for the chapter. Muchos love, miss :)
Oh, and I’m still laughing from the end and the cheap trick song. How appropriate!
WOW THIS WAS BY FAR THE FUNNIEST CHAPTER EVER! WOW THE POODLE! HAHA AND THEN THE SEX SCENE WAS CRAZY! I MUST HAVE READ WRONG OR SOMETHIN CUZ IONO BUT WHERE THEY ALL 4 HAVING SEX IN THE VAN TOGETHER? IM CONFUSED.. Y DID ASHLEY SAY IT COULD BE THERE LAST NIGHT? IS SPENCER GOING SOMEWHERE..YEA WELL KEEP THE POSTING ITS AMAZING!
That story was hilarious. I can totally empathize with Tristan poodles scare me too. I think its the odd haircut that they have. I’m not sure. And btw combatbaby is freaking crazy. I mean that in the best possible way. lol
Hmm, well I’m commenting on my own story only to clear things up a bit I guess. a) Yes, they are all having sex in the back of the “the Beast” on a mattress. It’s a caravan — relax the couples weren’t touching or anything. b) Tristan and Ashley were indulging in a bit of role play — pretending that they went AWOL or Absent without leave from their “base” just to see their girls before being sent off to take your pick war, battle, etc. Spencer was just playing along with Ashley — as I often I wish my girl would do when I put my Smokey the Bear Outfit on…remember only you can prevent vaginal fires! c) notice the similarity to combatbaby’s post! d)Combatbaby, you are my new pretend Internet girlfriend! Thanks for noticing Cheap Trick!
LMAO . that was toooo funny. HA HA HA loved the part with the dogs. lol Loved this chapter. Soo when is Ash gonna let Spence about the pic and note that Madison left in her locker. I fell the drama coming on. lol great work keep it up. Update soon. and make sure your girl doesn’t catch you. hehe ; )
Oh my god, that’s friggin’ awesome. I’ve ALWAYS wanted to be someone’s pretend online gilrfriend. That’s been like…my goal and aspiration all these years. Wow. I’ve reached completion. I’m going to refer to you as that. Lemme try it out, “Hi, I’m Dina Elizabeth and I will be your new pretend internet girlfriend for the time being”. Ahahahaha. You’re too, too funny with your talk of Smokey The Bear and vaginal fires. How great is that, eh? Wait. Whoa. I think I just got something. You mean to tell me that you girls put on weird ass “save the environment” costumes, you’re actually wanting to engage in foreplay?! No way! My ex used to wear this strange WOODSY THE OWL costume and go around saying crap like, “Lend a hand- care for the bearded clam”. I’d stand there like an idiot thinking, “wait, isn’t it ‘lend a hand-care for the land’?” Oh my god, I can’t believe I missed out on that! Damnit!Oh,and Christine77, thanks for thinking I’m crazy and meaning it in the best way possible!
Role play, I meant Roleplay. Not foreplay.
Okay, seriously I’m crying over here, Jesus Christ, bearded clam. I laughed so hard my neighbor just came by to check on me! That’s priceless. OMG, YESSSS! I have the coolest pretend online girlfriend in the world! But, and I mean this is best possible way, I’ll never go online shopping with you…no matter what you promise to do in the virtual dressing room…*cough*…okay well there are a few things you could promise to do… :P
Awwww, that’s so sweet! I am pretty cool, aren’t I? Psh. Ahaha. Wait. No online shopping? But..but..but…*bites lip* There’s this really cool *toy store* I’ve been meaning to check out. -Pretend cries- and did you say dressing room or chatroom? We could play virtual hide and seek with our virtual clothes. AHAHAHAHA. I crack myself up.
omfg that has to have been the most hilarious story i read…ever..omg im still fucking laughing….a poodle and a golden retriever…lmao…i have two rottweilers and I think they’re harmless….lmao…..but the poodle and the golden retriever were PRICELESS! lmao…Now for the sex…omg that was fuckin hot! I seriously had to turn on my celing fan because i got so hot…lmao…ok I’m going to tell you something that ive never told anyother writer on this site….YOU ARE THE SHIT!!!! lol…ok i like drama…especially when the plot is good…but i LOVE me some comedy lol…and you my friend…you have it perfect on all aspects…lmao…but i swear combatbaby’s comments are just as funny as the story….absolutely hilarious…I LOVE!!!!! post more soon…and you’d better take which ever mode of transportation allows the most typing time…I WANT ANOTHER STORY!! lmao…sorry its just that i feel as if im addicted now…the story is so much more better when there’s comedy involved…ahh as ive said before my two most favorite things in life have been perfected in this story…lol..comedy and sex…w/e post more sooN!!!
haha lmao! yea i agree with that confused chick..the poodle and the golden retriever we priceless! this is so comedy! u are so talented! i fukkin love this story! combatbaby’s comments are comedy too.. haha yea well u should post more soon.. i cant wait to see hat happens next.. i mean i only been reading fanfiction for liek a week now and im already addicted. i always find myself siting here waiting for someone to repost.. thank god u posted or else iono wut i would have done..haha i remember i always used to think my friend was weird for sitting and reading all day but now i understand! haha the stories are awesome! not to mention i am soo in love with south of nowhere.. i mean it is the best show ever am i righT? yea wow this is awesome….although im not a lesbian..reading some of these stories and watching the show has started to make me wonder….haha yea well post soon..im loving it..bye!
oh and btw….MR C got some booty…lmao…sorry i kno im immature…but thats what being a teenager is all about…i think…lol..maybe i need to re-evaluate my aspect on life…nah…that’d make everything boring…lol
HOT and HILARIOUS!!!! Hmmm….trism what else is there to you??? I wanted to be your online girlfirend **sniffling** !!! Really you are a great writer I look forward to reading your story every time, thank you!!
This story just gets better and better. It is too funny. That sex scene was hot, as always. I would also have to agree with Change, Zadie sounds really hot!
HA HA THAT WAZ FUNNY PODDLE THAT WAZ AWSOME
BRAVO!! BRAVO!! Goodness woman, so much lovin’ in this chapter! Totally agree with combatbaby…not even a cold shower could calm any of us down…hahaha. If you ask me, I think Zadie sounds HOTT!!;) Thanks love!
HA HA THAT WAZ FUNNY PODDLE THAT WAZ AWSOME
BRAVO!! BRAVO!! Goodness woman, so much lovin’ in this chapter! Totally agree with combatbaby…not even a cold shower could calm any of us down…hahaha. If you ask me, I think Zadie sounds HOTT!!;) Thanks love!
Alright this is the most funniest story I have ever read. Just so ya’ll know I had an online girlfriend it was fine, but it didn’t work out.( we had online sex, and I tend to get hornier when doing that.) So I hope you two have a good relationship together. haha I’m giving out the details of my life haha I should stop. Anyway! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK,BABY!! Please post very very soon!?!
Alright this is the most funniest story I have ever read. Just so ya’ll know I had an online girlfriend it was fine, but it didn’t work out.( we had online sex, and I tend to get hornier when doing that.) So I hope you two have a good relationship together. haha I’m giving out the details of my life haha I should stop. Anyway! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK,BABY!! Please post very very soon!?!
Oh no problem combatbaby. I did mean it in the best way possible. Glad to see there is someone weirder than me around.
Oh no problem combatbaby. I did mean it in the best way possible. Glad to see there is someone weirder than me around.
Excellent, I’m loving Ashley and T’s friendship, they’re both so cool! I think them all havin sex in the same place was so hot, and funny too! You have created a new genre… sexedy (sex/commedy)
Excellent, I’m loving Ashley and T’s friendship, they’re both so cool! I think them all havin sex in the same place was so hot, and funny too! You have created a new genre… sexedy (sex/commedy)
alice9455 – Thanks babe. It’s been corrected. I’m the worst speller in the World and I usually correct a word until the red line goes away in Word *blush*. Okay, seriously, if you notice spelling or grammatical errors, please don’t hesitate to tell me. It’s all part of this whole crazy writing thing. On that same note, if you write stories for this site, you might want to think about running your story through a spell checker. Part of writing is making the experience pleasurable for your audience, sometimes grammatical errors, the total lack of capitalization or punctuation can be a huge issue for some people. I personally have seen stories summaries that sound interesting and I really try to read the story, but then there are so many spelling and grammatical issues that my brain explodes. I just can’t do it, possibly because I grew up when people actually wrote out their thoughts in complete sentences…or maybe it was the nuns (why yes, I was once a Catholic school girl), I’m really not sure. Feel free to smack me for this comment, but I think it needed to be said.
alice9455 – Thanks babe. It’s been corrected. I’m the worst speller in the World and I usually correct a word until the red line goes away in Word *blush*. Okay, seriously, if you notice spelling or grammatical errors, please don’t hesitate to tell me. It’s all part of this whole crazy writing thing. On that same note, if you write stories for this site, you might want to think about running your story through a spell checker. Part of writing is making the experience pleasurable for your audience, sometimes grammatical errors, the total lack of capitalization or punctuation can be a huge issue for some people. I personally have seen stories summaries that sound interesting and I really try to read the story, but then there are so many spelling and grammatical issues that my brain explodes. I just can’t do it, possibly because I grew up when people actually wrote out their thoughts in complete sentences…or maybe it was the nuns (why yes, I was once a Catholic school girl), I’m really not sure. Feel free to smack me for this comment, but I think it needed to be said.