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    South of D.E.B.S. – (Chapter: BANK HEIST!!!!)

    Ashley: There’s a guy in there with C4 strapped on him. We need to get it off of him.

    I went inside the vault and just to make sure the close was clear, I scanned it before telling the other girls it was okay. They all came in and Chelsea looked pissed. She gave me a dirty look and then, went over to the man and tried to wake him up. He looked like shit because his hands were bleeding and some blood was on his face. After he opened his eyes, he started to shake and was trying to talk to us. We couldn’t understand him, until Kyla removed the tape, but by then it was too late.

    Hostage: IT’S A TRAP!!!!!

    OH SHIT!!!!! After he said that, the vault door shut on us and the lights went out. I couldn’t see anything. We all called out for each other and thank god that we were all in here still.

    Chelsea: Okay D.E.B.S. do you guys have your flashlights ???

    Madison, Kyla, and Ashley: Yeah !!!!

    We all grabbed them and turned them on.

    Chelsea: Kyla call D.A.K.S. and tell them to get us out of here.

    Kyla: D.A.K.S. come in. Can you hear me guys ???

    Kelly:……..Yeah we can hear you………..Where are you guys ???

    Madison: Were in the vault basement. Do you think you can figure out the code to the door ???

    Kelly: We will try. We’re on our way. Hang in there.

    After the call ended, Chelsea started to ask the hostage questions. He didn’t know that much about what happened to him. The only thing that he did know was that the C4′s are duds, so we don’t have to worry about them. We asked like three more questions, when Kelly called us.

    Kelly: Hey girls…..we are here. How did you guys get stuck ???

    Kyla: Well, there is another hostage in here and we were trying to get him out, when the vault door just shut on us. Then the lights went out too.

    Kelly: Okay, well Sean has the computer hooked up to the vaults security system and is looking for the code. It shouldn’t take that long.

    Chelsea: Okay, thanks Kelly.

    Kelly: No problem.

    Two minutes after the call ended the lights in the vault turned on. Madison and Kyla then started to unhook the C4′s from the man’s body until we heard a click. We all looked around and nothing happened.

    Madison: Maybe it was nothing.

    Kyla: I don’t think so……

    Then the room started to fill up with smoke.

    Chelsea: What the fuck !!! Kelly come in. What the hell did you guys do ???

    Kelly: I don’t know, Sean’s laptop screen started to fuzz up and then you guys called.

    Chelsea: Well whatever you did, the room is filling up with smoke. Hurry……cough…..up. I don’t know…….cough……how long……cough…..we could……cough…….last……….

    The smoke was too much for us. My head started to hurt and I started to feel dizzy. I couldn’t stand up anymore and when I fell to the floor, I heard Chelsea call out our names, then all that I saw was darkness……….not again………..

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    Comments

    1. This is a great story,but I think somebody,(abbyroad)is using your idea.I say this because I read your story first then i read (abbyroads)story and they r very similar with a different title.I just read your chapter on South of D.E.B.S. about the bank heist then (abbyroad)story called Super duper crime fighting good two shoes and her badass master criminal and her chapter is on the bank heist as well.I don’t want any trouble just thought u might want to check that out.I will continue to read your story cause I think it’s great,good job can’t wait 4 another update.

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