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Revenge Tastes Like You…But Sweeter – (Chapter: One)
I sat there waiting for Carmen to come back into the room. We have become great friends within the last couple of weeks. I am really glad that we met each other. I was, in all honesty, getting tired of having a total of two friends in this god forsaken town. Chelsea and Ashley were great people, don’t get me wrong. I love them both, in different ways of course, but I just feel as though I need to make more friends. And that is what Carmen is to me. She is another good friend. Which I need pretty bad right now.
“Hey,” She said in her own little world. It was almost cute. “I got you a coke. Is that okay?” She asked. She held two small bottles of coke, one in each hand.
“Yeah, that’s fine.” I said with a smile. My phone buzzed once indicating a text message. I had learned to keep it on vibrate when I was with Carmen. I thought it would be rude to have a phone going off in mid conversation. I took the drink she handed me and opened the cap listening to the slight sizzle sound from the carbonation. Something about that sound was so cool. I put the bottle to my lips and drank quite a bit more than I expected.
“Ha, are you thirsty or what?” Carmen asked me with a laugh. I laughed along and searched for a place to set my half empty bottle. There were no tables anywhere. “Oh, here I got it.” She said taking the bottle from me. Her fingers lightly grazed mine. I didn’t get the same tingling feeling I got with Ashley when that happened. Carmen looked deep in my eyes and then started to lean in, fast.
I, of course, pulled back. “Carmen,” I began my mouth now dry from the tension. “I’m…with Ashley.” A slight smile graced her lips and I silently questioned it.
“And who’s to say she’ll find out?” She asked me in that deep, yet sexy voice of hers.
She leaned in, I could feel my phone vibrating more and more but I kept ignoring it. I wondered who was calling me. That’s a weird thing to think about when a girl is about to kiss you huh?
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I really like it. I hope u continue. PMS!
continue and yea it is sad to see them break up in the first chapter and what arthur said is true give her some space and she’ll get over it but the thing is is if spencer has depression and insomnia yea that ain’t going to go good with the scenior…lol pms
I really like it. I hope u continue. PMS!
continue and yea it is sad to see them break up in the first chapter and what arthur said is true give her some space and she’ll get over it but the thing is is if spencer has depression and insomnia yea that ain’t going to go good with the scenior…lol pms
i like it ..plz post more soon
i like it ..plz post more soon
i really like and i’d definitely love to read more… nice vid by the way, it was really awesome! pms please :)
i really like and i’d definitely love to read more… nice vid by the way, it was really awesome! pms please :)
that was mildly depressing and by mildly i mean really depressing
that was mildly depressing and by mildly i mean really depressing
this was awesome!! loved the vid too!! PMS
this was awesome!! loved the vid too!! PMS