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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 45 Because That's How it Works)
Officer Stewart: “Hey, Carlin. Good to see you on the right side of the bars for a change. I know it’s only been a few days since you’ve last been in here, but we’ve already missed ya.” He says to Spencer with a smirk as he walks passed her down the hall. I watch as Paula narrows her eyes at her daughter and Spencer’s face immediately flares up uncomfortably.
Spencer: “Right…I’ll be waiting outside.” And she hurriedly turns and walks back down the hallway and out of sight. As soon as she’s gone the shouting starts again.
Ashley: “Okay, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED?!” I scream, getting silence once again.
Gage: “Assclown over here thought it would be a good idea to start a fight with Cady, Krebs, and Grady.” She informs me as she jerks her thumb behind her where Glen is. “We were all just leaving King High and went to help him.” She says with an eye roll.
Ashley: “Where are the others?”
Jess: “There’re fine. They were leaving through the back. They got to the jet.”
Ashley: “And all the fake ID’s?”
Gage: “Everything is disposed of. They just got us for fighting, that’s all.” I breathe a sigh of relief. If they were caugh
t with all the fakes… we’re talking felony here.
Claudia: “I love your hair like that, Gwendolyn, you look so sexy with it all choppy and dark.” She says flirtatiously to my friend. Leave it to Sara’s Grandmother to hit on Gage while she’s behind bars.
Mrs. Erikson: “I don’t really think it’s the time, Claudia.” She says with an eye roll.
Mrs. Mitchell: “Kelly! Would you stop making out with Sara for one freaking minute so we can figure out what the hell we can do!”
Kelly: “Sorry, mom.” She mumbles as she places Sara on the bed beside her.
Sara: “Sorry, Brandy.” She mumbles as well.
Mr. Dooly: “I thought you all said that we could trust you in pulling this off!” He scolds us all.
Phil Dooly: “And without help from us.” We are all ducking our heads in embarrassment.
Sara: “It just got a little out of hand when Glen should up!”
Glen: “Ashley told me to go!” Benedict Arnold!
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you got to be kidding nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo someone go back
fuck Stix! why must you torture me?!
FUCK FUCK FUCKITY FUCK!!!! I knew there was a reason I stayed up to this ungodly hour! Yes, it’s to yell at you Stix. Cliffhanger? I’m hanging on with my fingernails and raidly losing my grip. What the hell do you think you’re playing at? ….Other then that it was bloody brilliant. Gushing Spencer was cute, grandmother hitting on gage very funny but slightly disturbing, car seat trauma…..who the fuck invents those things anyway and Ashley, you’d better not hurt Ashley or we’re falling out….be warned missy!!
I agree with littledragonfly you get ashley hurt and im out of here I likes chapter but I dont like cliffhangers so update quick and im going to say this one more you give ashley hurt in any bad way I am out of here
:O you did NOT just leave it there?!?! ill have your head woman get back here and update lol yah who says”have your head” lol thats me for you lol anyways i loved it funny sad happy anxious all to the very end you you keep us on the edge of our seats like a good writter……but bad person :P update dont leave us on a cliff hanger lol
Jail yet again??? They just gave that town an economic boost with all that bail money. Grandma Claudia is hilarious … and creepy … but Gage IS hot so can you blame her? I said that your last chapter was deliciously evil but your cliffhanger here is just plain evil! Evil! Why must you leave it there? I’m scared, I felt like I was reading KHK all of a sudden (update for that soon-ish?). I’m not going to be able to stop thinking about it so please come back quickly and fix it. Spencer needs to get over her snit and realize that it’s not hunger pangs but her Ashley-sense tingling like crazy! Go save your girl! p.s. Wow, Kelly’s mom actually got them to stop making out. p.s.#2 thanks!
ok, wtf. This was a good chapter, but why the fuck did you have to leave it there? Ooh, I just thought of something. What if they get into a one on one brawl and Spencer sees and its like the whole Ashley/Carmen fight thing. Hmm? C’mon, you owe us. I mean, you haaaaad to leave it there. Damn the suspense!!
HOLY HELL!!ash better beat the living shit out of him!i need a post, noooow :)
Torture *holding breath* Oh please have Spencer or gage and kelly come back to the hotel room. Who the hell told him someone was looking for him???? Fucking Ohio
Ssssshhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttt!!!!! Please post back soon!!
WHY?!?! WHY?!?! WHY WOULD YOU LEAVE US HANGING THERE!!!OH MY GOD. HOW COULD YOU?!?!!?!?!?YOU ARE CRUEL!!!!!OKAY YOU BETTER POST SOON. AND SOOOOOOOOOON.OR ELSE MY MIND WILL JUST IMAGINE ALL KINDS OF THINGS THAT THE ASS IS GOING TO TRY. OH MY GOD. PMS PMS PMS PMS.
oh. my. god. how could you leave it like that?!?! you must update soon or i might die of anticipation! PMS pleaseeeeee!
oh my fuckin god….he better not hurt ash…i hope spencer gets over everything…that update was great. i was laughin out loud. im really excited for your next post…update asap!…or my life will be ruined, kinda like the punishments that the kids recieved who beat up spencer.
Oh shiznit! Thanks for the shout out btw! Great chapter! PMS! :)
Seems like you’ve left all of us wondering and not in a good way Stix. It’s going to be hard to sweat out what’s going to happen until you post more! Honestly, you’re brilliant. =]
my heart’s in my arse after reading that very last bit. i am putting my faith in you that you will get this updated as soon as possible and will give ashley a get out of jail free card. i trust that you won’t let me down here. thanks, i appreciate it.
Omg omg omg omg!! o.O
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! DON’T HURT ASHLEY!!!! PMS!!!!
No… way. That was ridiculous. But Spencer or someone has to come and rescue the day and then everything will be okay right? RIGHT?
h0ly mutha fuckin shiiiit ! that was intense as hell ! like no that was funny too that whole jail scene was brilliantly written … seriously ! but nojoke you cant be leaving cliff hangers like that not really fair . i cant wait to seeee wat happens ashley bettr kick this kids mother fucking assssssssss !!!!!!!
that was SO good! i was literaly laughing out loud when spencer was describing her and ashley’s fights! very funny!! i hope she doesn’t stay mad too long at her friends, especially ashley! and OMG at you leaving it there! c’mon now is that really necessary?? pleaaase update soon!!!
What the hell is he doing in there?! I’m sure somebody else that they ruined that day, told him. Ashley knows how to take care of herself, so she should be alright. He would be stupid to attack her, with what they have just done to a good number of people in the town. I hope Ashley just goes off and beats him damn near to death. What I am thinking is that Spencer will feel bad about how she was treating Ash in the car and comes back to see if she’s ok, or somebody comes back to see if she’s okay. Or maybe 1 of there contacts in town, spotted Kevin at the hotel and shot a text or call to Gage. I love this story. Please update again soon.
one word…torture….u torture me haha this update was fukin good i luved it pssh what am i saying i luv all ur updates but hmm i sense a crazy next chapter? hehe cant wait for it! i hope Ashley kicks that kids ass all around that hotel room!(insert evil laugh)PMSSSS!!!!=]
ahhhhhh!!! oh this could be bad. but no- no i know you wouldnt make it too bad- in fact i know you’ll make it great, as always :) oh and uh cheers to factoflife- why, i dont know- but cheers cuz you said! :)
No way no way no way!!!! U did NOT just leave it there!!! U better update soon or I’m gonna explode!!!
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU LEFT IT THERE!!!!! you cant do this….come on
Ooooo I’m going to be in so much trouble for reading this, when I meant to be doing my assignment, but it was so worth it. And for Ash’s sake I hope SuperSpencer comes and saves her =] PMS!
Oh SHIT!!!!JENKINS DIE!I hate him!!I hope Ashley Beat the shit out of him!
o shit….i hope if he hurts ash tht EVRYONE kiks his asss…n i mean all 34…haha pms!!
really Stix dear, must you torment us so like you do with you cliff hangers.. OH i hope they kick this dudes ass , coz i would if i were a fictional character in MD lol i’d beat him silly with the “Tug-o-War” !! would you kindly post the next chapter like now so when i come home from working Brooklyn Pride Tomorrow i have something to make my work day go away please!!
Ok so Jhacin makes fun of me for the noises I am making now. But you are so mean that was just plain out mean to leave it like that. I mean you know I would read the next chapter no matter what but did you have to leave it like that…ugh. Ok now that is out of my system. This chapter was great. Ashley is in the dog house but not for long. If she does get hurt Spencer is gonna be ready to kill. Its just like whoa I can not wait for the next chapter. Great job.
I’m gunna frickin kick ur ass if you decide to go down path A. Grr.
yessss! more drama!!!! thanks for the dedication schbabeees i enjoyed this chapter i love ashley’s perspective… i’m like super nervous for the next chapter now whats gonna happennnnnnn!
How could u stop right there!!!!!!!!!!! no freaking way he better not hurt her
man nothing bad better happen to ash! i don’t know if i could handle it! and i don’t know what was more funny claudia checking gage out or mrs erikson needing to go back to new york to get her nails done. fantastic once again my darling stix!