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Greenwich – (Chapter: Everyone Lies)
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“Coffee?”
Ashley wrestled with the top of her duvet only to reveal Kate, holding out a piping white mug of coffee as if doing so was some sort of sacred peace offering.
“Thanks?”
“No problem,” Kate said smiling slightly as she settled onto the edge of what was, two weeks ago, her guest bed.
There was something sort of pained about the expression she wore on her face, as if every molecule of her being had not too long ago been contorted in deep thought.
“Penny for ‘em,” Ashley asked carefully, nursing the hot mug of coffee cautiously as she eyed her cousin from above its rim.
“What do you see in her?”
And there it was, the elephant that had been lounging in the corner of Kate’s room, out in the open like a red, pulsating, sore thumb.
Ashley choked momentarily, the results of which could be seen on her once clean white t-shirt and equally spotless bedspread.
“Kate—“
“No, listen,”
Deep breath.
“She’s my best friend and she’s honestly like a sister to me. Not to say that I don’t love you, because I do. Just—“ Kate paused, taking a moment to weigh the affect of her next words, “know she’s what you want becau—“
“Why?”
Ashley’s query hung in the air like an anvil and Kate couldn’t help the glare she shot in her direction as she allowed the brashness of Ashley’s interjection to seep in.
“I have a Pilates group at noon,” She stated, voice frigid, as she shifted her weight off the bed and onto her feet, “I should get going,”
Just as the tip of her forefinger grazed the cold brass of the door handle, she heard her cousin’s voice infiltrate the thick with tension silence that had, only seconds ago, permeated the atmosphere.
“She’s damaged, I know that. She is cold and insatiable. And looking ahead to the best of my ability, she’ll most likely be painfully bored with my presence by the middle of next week,” Ashley admitted heavily, steeling herself for her next words, “But, for right now and despite the inevitable, not going off of what I know, but really only banking on what I feel,”
Deep breath.
“She’s totally worth it.”
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Let’s chat because I love you. I haven’t read yet though. Back to comment again in a second. I literally said, “Yes!” out loud when I saw you had posted. Back in a sec…
Let’s chat because I love you. I haven’t read yet though. Back to comment again in a second. I literally said, “Yes!” out loud when I saw you had posted. Back in a sec…
You’re such a fucking badass. Alright, this chapter was amazing. I’ve decided that a part of this story that I really like is the role of the narrator. It’s totally not your typical descriptive narrator. It almost feels like you’re being told the story by someone and it’s a really neat perspective. I would think that it gives you incredible creativity as well in how you choose to say things or the details you choose to comment on. I was almost confused at the end, but recovered and “ooh-ed and ahh-ed” in horror at what Madison’s placement in this story could mean. Wonderful update as usual. You’re the best.
You’re such a fucking badass. Alright, this chapter was amazing. I’ve decided that a part of this story that I really like is the role of the narrator. It’s totally not your typical descriptive narrator. It almost feels like you’re being told the story by someone and it’s a really neat perspective. I would think that it gives you incredible creativity as well in how you choose to say things or the details you choose to comment on. I was almost confused at the end, but recovered and “ooh-ed and ahh-ed” in horror at what Madison’s placement in this story could mean. Wonderful update as usual. You’re the best.
i’m so interested in this story, love beyond anything right now, post soon i want to find out what happens at the ‘sleep over’ pms
i’m so interested in this story, love beyond anything right now, post soon i want to find out what happens at the ‘sleep over’ pms
Favorite line from Kate to Ashley: As the next six words tumbled past and out Kate’s lips, she felt that sadness come full circle, “It’s not you I’m worried about.” – Those 6 words are like a foreshadowing of disaster or drama that draweth nigh. I find your story intriguing and imaginative. Well done! PMS
Favorite line from Kate to Ashley: As the next six words tumbled past and out Kate’s lips, she felt that sadness come full circle, “It’s not you I’m worried about.” – Those 6 words are like a foreshadowing of disaster or drama that draweth nigh. I find your story intriguing and imaginative. Well done! PMS
and sorry about the repetition of the word breathe/breath…
and sorry about the repetition of the word breathe/breath…
goaskalice–haha, DUDE, i wish i was up when you commeneted! i turned in around 230ish and i guess i missed you. thanks for the always stellar comments–they make a kid feel good. and in terms of the narrator thing–i actually sortve love being able to tell the story like that. it definitely lets me sorta excavate the complicated emotions that spencer/ashley ect might not wear on their sleeve so that’s fun. dawniekey-i’ll deff try to post as soon as possible–hopefully tonight? probs before the end of the weekend. thanks for reading! :)dallas111-THANK YOU!
goaskalice–haha, DUDE, i wish i was up when you commeneted! i turned in around 230ish and i guess i missed you. thanks for the always stellar comments–they make a kid feel good. and in terms of the narrator thing–i actually sortve love being able to tell the story like that. it definitely lets me sorta excavate the complicated emotions that spencer/ashley ect might not wear on their sleeve so that’s fun. dawniekey-i’ll deff try to post as soon as possible–hopefully tonight? probs before the end of the weekend. thanks for reading! :)dallas111-THANK YOU!