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    Broken Promises and Shattered Hearts – (Chapter: Chapter 13)

    Story written on June 10, 2007 by snowdrop1026.
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    Words: 3031
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=14700
    Author Notes:

    Don’t have one…it’s spoils the story….

    Paula: Aiden. Kyla.

    (Aiden shifted his attention to Paula. Kyla began to stir, and opened her eyes to see Paula in front of her. She sprung up waiting to hear the fate of her sister.)

    Paula: She’s stable. We have her in the ICU. Follow me, I will take you to her.

    (They got up and followed Paula to the room. As they began to enter, Kyla cried at the sight of her sister. Ashley looked small. Fragile. Weak. Pale. Aiden traveled all the tubes that were weaving in and out of her. Kyla sat on one side while Aiden sat on the other. Both holding her hands. Kyla squeezed her hand, and felt a weak response back.)

    Kyla: Ashley?

    (Ashley began to slowly open her eyes. She tried to get them to focus, and when she did she saw Kyla and Aiden to her left and right. When she looked up further, she saw Mrs. C standing at the foot of her bed.)

    Ashley: (weakly) Wha—what happened?

    Kyla: You tried to kill yourself. (crying) How could leave me like that?

    (Ashley looked at her with tears forming. She never meant to hurt anyone. She thought she was doing them a favor. If she was gone, maybe people could move on and be happy. She never meant to cause more pain.)

    Ashley: I’m sorry Ky.

    Kyla: You’re all I have left Ash. I love you so much. When I saw you there, I almost died.

    Aiden: Why’d you do it Ash?

    (Paula looked at Ashley. She knew the reason. Paula herself was crying. She finally saw Ashley that night. She saw a scared little girl who felt she had no place in the world. Who felt like she didn’t belong. Paula’s heart broke for the young girl. The way she treated her came flooding back. The remorse unbearable.)

    Ashley: Spencer….she set me up.

    Aiden: What?

    Ashley: I went to her house. When I go there…she was with Jake.

    Kyla: I not following…

    Ashley: She was WITH him.

    Aiden: No…no…Spencer wouldn’t do that.

    Kyla: We thought Spencer wouldn’t do a lot of things, but this…this was….

    (Paula stood there hearing everything. She didn’t know what to say nor how to react. Ashley looked at Paula. Paula looked at Ashley.)

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    4. omg this is my favorite story ever! i had a feeling ashley never died with the clues and stuff, you have to post more like NOW!!!!! PMS ASAP!

    8. omg this is my favorite story ever! i had a feeling ashley never died with the clues and stuff, you have to post more like NOW!!!!! PMS ASAP!

    11. Wow! I couldn’t just lurk this time. A comment was required. OMG! So so much pain for both of them. They really do love each other very much. We’ve had so much drama in this story that I’m exhausted. Please just let them be together with as little angst as possible. Just let them be. Most of the time I hate to see when people leave comments that sway the author to a certain plot. I always read those and shout “just let them tell the story as it is” or “don’t lead them on to what it should be” but this time I’m guilty of it. So for just a moment, can we breathe some fresh air and let love prevail? *smile* … Great update just great!

    12. Wow! I couldn’t just lurk this time. A comment was required. OMG! So so much pain for both of them. They really do love each other very much. We’ve had so much drama in this story that I’m exhausted. Please just let them be together with as little angst as possible. Just let them be. Most of the time I hate to see when people leave comments that sway the author to a certain plot. I always read those and shout “just let them tell the story as it is” or “don’t lead them on to what it should be” but this time I’m guilty of it. So for just a moment, can we breathe some fresh air and let love prevail? *smile* … Great update just great!

    13. another cliffhanger?? you have to be kidding me!!!lol well the meeting went better than i expected i honestly thought there was going to be a fight involved or something lol anyway im loving it alot and i hope that the person walking into the room is ashley lol PMS!!!!

    14. another cliffhanger?? you have to be kidding me!!!lol well the meeting went better than i expected i honestly thought there was going to be a fight involved or something lol anyway im loving it alot and i hope that the person walking into the room is ashley lol PMS!!!!

    17. This is one of my favorites. It’s very origional, well written and there is never a boring part in it. It akes me cry because of how sad it is. But that’s a good thing. It means I’m really into the story. I love it. I love you. I just hate those damn cliffhangers! You’re an evil genius.

    18. This is one of my favorites. It’s very origional, well written and there is never a boring part in it. It akes me cry because of how sad it is. But that’s a good thing. It means I’m really into the story. I love it. I love you. I just hate those damn cliffhangers! You’re an evil genius.

    19. i love this…i know i want them together but five years is long long long time if i were spence i wouldn’t give in so soon. especially since she doesn’t eat or sleep has no friends. that’s a lot of emotional damage, i would need time…great story i cried when Spence did her five year speech…can’t wait for the next update.

    20. this fic is everything that i knew it would be, GREAT!!! i loved this post… i really kinda hope its who i think it is at the door.. i have 2 ideas… one is an obvious one, but the other is her dad… post soon, and put me outta my misery

    21. i love this…i know i want them together but five years is long long long time if i were spence i wouldn’t give in so soon. especially since she doesn’t eat or sleep has no friends. that’s a lot of emotional damage, i would need time…great story i cried when Spence did her five year speech…can’t wait for the next update.

    22. this fic is everything that i knew it would be, GREAT!!! i loved this post… i really kinda hope its who i think it is at the door.. i have 2 ideas… one is an obvious one, but the other is her dad… post soon, and put me outta my misery

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