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Bringing it Home – (Chapter: 41 Sexual Tension)
‘Yes, it was much more fuckable.’ Austin choked on her drink and I felt myself frown but Spencer laughed.
‘Well, I’m afraid you missed your chance babe, I’m with Ashley now,’ she shrugged and squeezed my hand, then turned to give me a re-assuring smile.
‘Excellent choice,’ was the response after I’d been given the once over. I stared coolly back into her dark eyes and was surprised when she gave me a warm smile.
‘Congratulations, Spencer, Ashley,’ she gave a small bow indicative of her Asian heritage.
‘Thanks May, means a lot,’ at the mention of the girls name Maggie looked stunned.
‘You’re May?’ She turned to her companion in surprise.
‘Yep,’ May chuckled, a warm sound, like honey and I noticed Maggie lose her cool for a second, interesting.
‘I’m so sorry,’ Maggie was flustered and had actually gone red. I exchanged a look with Austin who almost choked again at her sisters completely uncharacteristic lack of control.
‘S’OK, I could have corrected you but I wanted to have a bit of fun.’ She shrugged but didn’t elaborate, neither did Austin or Maggie so I let it lie, probably something to do with the party.
‘Even so, I’m sorry.’ Maggie apologised and I watched in stunned amazement as she seemed to come over a little shy. Fuck me this was going to be an interesting evening.
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I timed my escape to catch Thea on the way back into the house.
‘Thea,’ I softly called and she turned at the sound.
‘Hi.’
‘I, uh know it’s early but in case I don’t see you before you go.’ I smiled as she blushed, I was nervous as all hell. ‘Thea, would you like to hang out sometime. With me? I know I’m younger than you but it’s not a lot. I just had a really good time….’ I trailed off when I finally managed to contain my babbling.
‘Amy, I had a great time this afternoon talking to you,’ she began and I knew the rest.
‘But I’m either too young or you think I’m too much of a slut.’ I filled in the obvious blanks.
‘Amy, Amy,’ she finally got through to me and I shut up.
‘Yeah? I muttered, already wallowing in self pity. Thea wouldn’t entertain me, I didn’t have Spencer and Maggie had told me she had plans so I was gonna be miserable tonight. I didn’t even feel like following up on Becca’s offer. That kind of thing had ruined my chance with the only decent girl I’d come across in a long time.
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I seriously love your long chapters. And I think everyone does. That was so funny and so hot. :D And the scratching… damn… Can’t wait for next one. Asspert is signing off ;) lol
just completely makes my day when i see this story updated. and yes like ashley99 i seriously love your long chapters too.just like everyone else i’m sure. i love ashley and spencer together, don’t get me wrong. but at the same time i loved spencer being a player. i know you can’t really keep both,lol. great update!!oh i love madison calling kyla an asspert.lol pms!!
loved the update, things are looking up for all the girls…loved how thea made amy get quiet and have to sit down with that quiet ones comment haha pms
I made this account only to tell you that YOU ARE AWESOME! and that you have one of the best stories ever!!Ps…I´d love to see Ashley’s present to backfire and that she ends up like Spencer’s bitch!!:P
ok there’s a lot I have to say but you’re gonna have to wait! I’m just covering the basics- as in this chap was fucking genius as usual, I still love the undeniable attraction between ash and spence, ash’s ‘present’ = fucking hot, ash and maggie’s moment was fucking off the charts in my book, and my favorite line: “I changed and headed back out only to find Austin had arranged a fucked up version of the wacky races” OH and Grrrrrrr, lol. I’ll tell you the rest later. excellent job hun more than worth the wait =)
while that long of a wait was killer, this chapter was so totally worth it (but let’s not let it happen again ;) :P ) but ya this chapter had a little bit of everything in it, I really like how you went over what happened last chapter from different views! can’t wait for the next update.. I’m still nervous about spashley’s first time! pms!!!
Let me start by saying GO PHILLIES!!!! ok thank you for this update because I really missed these girls. I love me some Maggie and to see her flustered Yeah May. Can’t wait for the next update
I’ve done a lot of thinking and I’ve decided that you are to update every day. NOT updating is out of the question- does not fly. Read- does NOT fly.
i can’t say anything that hasn’t alreadt been said, so i’ll just leave yuo with a great job, as always, and pleeeeeeease post soon!!! =]
amazing! i love it! that was so…AMAZING! i know i said that already but STILL! AMAZING!
Amazingness as always. Such a great update to such an amazing story. Can’t wait to read more!
Almost missed this update. I just love this story, and loved this chapter, its so well written. The party seems like fun, and there is more fun to be had. I don’t remember who May is though. I can’t wait for Spashley to finally have sex, hahaha. Hope you update again soon
I dont think its right to have ash and spence sleep with maggie ever. they should just be a couple and be with eachother only
Working on it guys!! You havent been forgotten, hope to have smth by the latest this time next week xx
hi! i’ve just joined to tell you to post the next story!!!!!!!!! sorry i’ve really joined to say i love it! i’ve read it from the start but the withdrawral has made me post. anyway, i think you are an amazing writer, you definitely know your audience very well anyway! hope you can post for a very happy christmas…. hope you’re well, have an awesome christmas xxxx
update on its way?
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COME BACK!!!! im still waiting for the strip poker!!!!
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OMG, An update! Awesome btw! Love the long chapter and the fact that it was totally HOT! PMS, please!!!
now i am pissed off, i posted a really long comment and it is gone… so heres the jist, i dont think maggie should join the girls the first time, just after it, u r amazing and i love this fic, and UPDATE SOON!!! sorry that u get the abbridged version, but im not happy that my comment didnt go through. :/ so please please please post… its been way to long
ITS BEEN ALMOST A MONTH!!! WHERE R U???
it’s been way too long…i hope you update soon, i miss this fic.
It’s been forever…
I hope all is well with you it’s been quite some time since you updated well I would to hear from you soon even if it’s just saying you’re to busy to update well again I really hope you’re otay..
WOAH. okay, so, first thing I read by you was Scholastics, right, then emmelts (if that’s even how you spell it, lol.) and intolerant of intolerance both told me to read this, and I LOVE IT. update soon please? :)